Noodles Posted February 17, 2005 Posted February 17, 2005 I walk to my home Which is nothing anymore Just a past memory That has been lost at sea When I stop and think about it I wonder if I was ever there Or did I imagine it Seeming no one cares I try to think of my past But all it was one big flash Am I even real now Because all I can do is fall down The little kid in my mind Has been crying for quiet some time His scrapes and bruises From his fight with the older losers But nobody helped him out When he got beat up, and fell down I walk the desert road As I did many times before With my bag of empty loads Ready to fire through the door Of my lethal memories The ones that you never see I was pushed to the beyond To a place where I am someone The spectators gather around the body To realise I was a nobody They shrug their shoulders So they look no further Not caring about my future Feeling this emptyness That was never missed Is being what said is to be blissed But they can't feel this When I slowly fall down To the dead silent sound -------- Feedback please... Quote
Rae Rae Posted February 17, 2005 Posted February 17, 2005 wow...that's amazing...that's exactly how I feel sometimes Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/b50caeb34e2a30cf9cf6b2e1d1d4b48d.jpg Asian Hotness!
gabi_lp Posted February 17, 2005 Posted February 17, 2005 Amazing, Noodles!!!!!! I luv the part: "I walk the desert road As I did many times before With my bag of empty loads Ready to fire through the door Of my lethal memories The ones that you never see" Very talented.... Quote [broken External Image]:http://img166.exs.cx/img166/8334/gabilpsig4ng.jpg[broken External Image]:http://img86.exs.cx/img86/2159/animfr120x909ko.gif
mikez hott Posted February 17, 2005 Posted February 17, 2005 Wow that's awesome.. I carry those same feelings at times. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img2.uploadimages.net/277720b.gif OOOoooOOo
Noodles Posted February 17, 2005 Author Posted February 17, 2005 Heh, I was depressed for seven years, so I have carry those feelings until this same day. Yeah, it sorta sucks. lol Quote
rock star Posted February 18, 2005 Posted February 18, 2005 O oO o AWESOME i like it !!! U ROCK Quote I Like What I Do .. I Do What I Like
Mikes_Shadow Posted February 24, 2005 Posted February 24, 2005 somehow it reminds me of boulovard of broken dreams by greenday... *goes to listen to it* Quote hurr durr [broken External Image]:http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3860/dffhgfhfghfgfghhg.jpg http://www.last.fm/user/fAgalloch
lpevanstaind Posted February 28, 2005 Posted February 28, 2005 wow....that's amazing....i like it... Quote i'm a butterfly with broken wings....hold me and i'll be your everything
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