4everLP_Shinoda Posted February 28, 2005 Posted February 28, 2005 While I was in Bariloche,I felt inspired and I wrote this,I hope u like it so here it is: Without u Here I am Watching this landscape And thinking you will never come back Now that I´m alone,I don´t know what to do. Everything feels so empty Without you. We used to be happy together. Why did u have to leave? My heart cries every time I think about you. Sometimes I wonder if I Was the one who made a mistake I wish everything could be like before, But now everything is different and I miss you so badly that I can´t live without you. I ask myself if you can live without me. PS:If u read this plz leave me a comment,I would apreaciate it,thanx in advance :thumbsup: Quote
invisiblekiller Posted February 28, 2005 Posted February 28, 2005 now that was real good.Keep it up Vero. *thumbs up* Quote [broken External Image]:http://img15.imgspot.com/u/06/253/09/siggy1157980634.jpg
misery Posted February 28, 2005 Posted February 28, 2005 thats rly good at first i thought it was gunna be a rewording of with you by linkin park Quote [broken External Image]:http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/9403/untitled28ic6.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1118/22wc5.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2756/7mi3.jpg
4everLP_Shinoda Posted February 28, 2005 Author Posted February 28, 2005 Thank u so much Killer:D Quote
4everLP_Shinoda Posted February 28, 2005 Author Posted February 28, 2005 thats rly good at first i thought it was gunna be a rewording of with you by linkin park lol nope it´s something I made up Quote
linkinparkrapniknil Posted February 28, 2005 Posted February 28, 2005 thats really cool! i like it Quote
4everLP_Shinoda Posted February 28, 2005 Author Posted February 28, 2005 Thanx:D!I will read your fic l8rz cuz now I´m going,I feel tired. Quote
lpp Posted March 5, 2005 Posted March 5, 2005 While I was in Bariloche,I felt inspired and I wrote this,I hope u like it so here it is: Without u Here I am Watching this landscape And thinking you will never come back Now that I´m alone,I don´t know what to do. Everything feels so empty Without you. We used to be happy together. Why did u have to leave? My heart cries every time I think about you. Sometimes I wonder if I Was the one who made a mistake I wish everything could be like before, But now everything is different and I miss you so badly that I can´t live without you. I ask myself if you can live without me. PS:If u read this plz leave me a comment,I would apreaciate it,thanx in advance :thumbsup: wow its so good you can turn it into a song. *screaming in joy and saying awsom* Quote
4everLP_Shinoda Posted March 5, 2005 Author Posted March 5, 2005 wow its so good you can turn it into a song. *screaming in joy and saying awsom* *feels happy 4 the review*Yay u left me a comment,thankies^^. I thought ppl didn´t care about what I wrote cuz it hadn´t any reviews in a while excepting yours so thanx again lpp Quote
Minzara Posted March 8, 2005 Posted March 8, 2005 I liked it, very good :thumbsup: Quote Check out my Naruto RPG Here っへ はっでっ Lいfえ げっっ, っへ っまってっ い げっ [broken External Image]:http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/2426/mynewsig5qv.gif [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1432/bestmembertobeanaelite1dg.jpg
VinnyTheory Posted March 8, 2005 Posted March 8, 2005 thats awesome, great effort Quote [broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v161/MissMondayNight/aaaaaaa7iz.jpg http://www.behindtheropes.cjb.net/
Crawling Posted March 8, 2005 Posted March 8, 2005 its okay --- Quote [broken External Image]:http://img179.echo.cx/img179/9670/sig4cl.jpg My Poem :thumbsup: covering my face seeking another place now i believe in giving in
4everLP_Shinoda Posted March 8, 2005 Author Posted March 8, 2005 Thanx every1,what does pamp mean? Quote
hybrid_eky Posted March 8, 2005 Posted March 8, 2005 thats awesome u really could make it a song! :thumbsup: Quote [broken External Image]:http://friendpages.com/pages/artist/individuality/photo12.jpg
FadedBlue Posted March 8, 2005 Posted March 8, 2005 That was beautiful vero! *tear* Kepp it up, it was great!! Quote Last.fm
Pheonix791989 Posted March 8, 2005 Posted March 8, 2005 that is cool love it Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
shahfire Posted March 9, 2005 Posted March 9, 2005 that was sososo cool .espiciallly loved the last line. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/190/02/shahsig.psd Proud member of the CoB Thank you IK for the sig!!
NVme4ever Posted March 13, 2005 Posted March 13, 2005 its kool.....keep it up Quote i ha8 2 luv u kause u love 2 ha8 me!!!
Mike Shinodas Gurl Posted March 13, 2005 Posted March 13, 2005 WOW! thats really good I like it^__^ Quote Rawr. I moved to this account Sayoko
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