my first lp fanfic

[lpp]

re-write it again*

 

i don't have to and stop telling me how to write bitch.

 

PS:sorry mods and admins but she was pissing me off by telling me how to write.

[sum1]

why wont u just accept complemaints

i mean nothing gets perfect from the first time

plus i totally agree with anna.loves-chaz

[anna_loves.chaz]

lpp calm down I was just telling you the right thing to do man Im sorry

[lpp]

lpp calm down I was just telling you the right thing to do man Im sorry

 

i just don't like it when people try to control me or tell me what to do...

 

and sorry

[rock star]

yoho lpp great chapter ..

[lpp]

yoho lpp great chapter ..

 

thank you rockstar

[lpp]

Chapter 4

Angel

So after Kat woke up the next day to find her brother asleep in the chair next to her.So Kat had quietly

left the room to go down stairs for something to eat.And then Chester woke up to find Kat wasn't in the room

so Chester ran around the house freaking out and yelling Kat over and over and over again.And then Kat said"chester

i'm in the kitchen getting breakfast."so Chester ran his sister just holding her in his arms.And Kat said"Chester why are

you hugging me"Chester said"cause i can't bare to lose you Kat."Kat almost cryed when she heard chester say that to her

so Chester said"i'm making breakfast."so Chester made breakfast for Sam,Davon,Kat and Himself.So after breakfast they all

went up to the game room and played games as family and Kat noticed that Chester was smiling and laughing and that made

her happy to see her brother happy.So as 12:00pm rolled in everyone took a nap for awhile.So after everyone woke up Chester

made lunch for everyone so as everyone was eating Chester said"Sam Davon Kat um i have to go to Mike's place and then over

to Joe's place and umm Kat i will be back to pick you up to the park okay."Kat said"sure Chester i would love to."so as chester

finshed his meal he left for Mike's apparment.So Mike heard the doorbell and so he went to get the door to see that Chester is there

so Mike said"hey Chaz come in" so chester walked in his appartment.So Mike and Chester talked for about an hour so then Chester

said"We need to get to Joe's place now Mike"so Mike said"I know Chester"Chester said"NO now Mike ."so Mike said"Fine we are taking

your car." so Mike and Chester got in car drove to Joe's place.So Joe heard a knock on his door so he got the door and let Chester and Mike in

and Chester saw Rob,Brad,Phoenix sitting on the couch... so Chester sat by Phoenix and Mike sat by Joe and then they talked about making another

cd.So Chaz called up Derek and said"hey derek me and the guys were talking about making another cd." derek said"we don't have the money and

all the studio's are full so sorry Chester." so then Chester said" Well then we must wait longer." so then Chester hung the phone so Chester looked at

the time and saw it was 3:00pm so Chester said"Guys have to go i promised Kat i would take her to the park bye."so Chester ran out the door and got in his

car and drove home and got Kat and then they went to the park.So then Chester and Kat went to a special place at the park and Kat said"Chester." Chester said

"what Kat."Kat said"i have a bad feeling something is going to happen." so as she said that Chester heard gun fires from a distance and then theses 2 guys that

were there in a shoot out and its was infront of Chester and Kat so as a Chester turned around he was to late so as Chester fell to the ground crying someone had called

911 so the cops and medic's came and got the gurl that was shot.So Chester went with them to the hospital and found out the gurl never made it.So then it came to her

funeral and Chester was there along with Mike ,Rob,Brad,Phoenix and Joe and Sam and Davon.So Chester went back to his drugs and cutting.So 2 months has passed

by and Mike noticed Chester was acting like he was back before when he was using and cutting so Mike told Chester that there was a rehab that wanted Chester to tell his

story of recovery to the rehab people but what Chester didn't know was that it was a trick from Mike.S as they got there Mike pulled Chester aside and Said"i know your using again and cutting Chester..Chester said" Fine i am and it doesn't bother me."Mike Yelled"CHESTER YOUR GOING TO LOSE SAM AND DAVON AND YOUR GOING TO REHAB HERE." Chester tryed to run but Rob and Brad were blocking one exit and Phoenix and Joe were blocking the other one and so them Chaz ran into the bathroom.

So Mike tryed to talk to Chester though the door but it did nothing so Mike said"you know Chester we checked you in as a patient here so see ya when you are drug fee Chaz."so months passed days passed and nights passed by and then came to the day where Chester is leaving the rehab center and Sam came and picked up Chester.

so then Chester saw Davon but Davon didn't look to happy to see he dad.Chester said"Hi son did you miss me." Davon said"A little dad but why did you do those things huh?"

Chester said"Because they made me feel better so i wouldn't be sad anymore." Davon said"But dad you have me and mommy you could have could have came to me or mommy daddy." so Chester looked at Davon with a face so sad and then Chester said"Well your right so Davon do you want to go to a movie with me?"Davon said"sure dad

i would love to."so Chester and Davon went to see a movie and they saw "The incredibles"so after the movie Chester took Davon out to lunch.So then when Chester and Davon got home Davon couldn't stop talking about the movie.So the months passed so its july 2009 so then Chester said"Sam i'm gong to the Grave yard so i will back later." Sam said:" sure i love you hon."Chester said" i love you to babe."so Chester got to the grave yard and a special person's grave so as he got to grave he said" well sorry Kat it took me awhile to visit your grave i was umm in rehab."so after a few second later Chester saw kat Angel and she said"don't worry about Chester i will always love you no matter what so don't blame yourself for my death so don't worry and promise me this that you will remember that i will be waiting for you on the other side." so Chester almost cryed and said" i promise i will remember what you said i will." so then kat kiss goodbye on the cheek.So then Kat left and Chester singing my december

"This is my December This is my time of the year This is my December This is all so clear This is my December This is my snow covered homeThis is my December

This is me alone And I Just wish that I didn't feel Like there was something I missed And I Take back all the things I said To make you feel like that And IJust wish that I didn't feel Like there was something I missed And I Take back all the things that I said to you And I give it all away

Just to have somewhere to go to Give it all away To have someone to come home to This is my December These are my snow covered dreams This is me pretending This is all I need And I Just wish that I didn't feel Like there was something I missed And I Take back all the things I said To make you feel like that

And I Just wish that I didn't feel Like there was something I missed And I Take back all the things that I said to you And I give it all away Just to have somewhere to go to Give it all away To have someone to come home to This is my December This is my time of the year This is my December This is all so clear Give it all away

Just to have somewhere to go to Give it all away To have someone to come home to." then Chester said"I love you Kat so i sang that song for you and only you."so as Chester walked away and looked behind him he saw Kat for the last time.So he walked back to his car and he was crying though the whole time he was singing My December.

 

ps"i forgot about that part i was in a rush to get this typed up.

the end

[rock star]

thankx that's really awesome ..

[rock star]

we want MORE plzzz

[lpp]

we want MORE plzzz

 

thank you rock star

[Pheonix791989]

pretty cool pretty cool

[Mike Shinodas Gurl]

WOW!!! This is really good! I like it.....PLEASE write more soon! ^__^

[lpp]

thank you people for the great feed back

 

***BOWS IN JOY WITH A SMILE ON*****

[lpp]

Chapter 5

Chester's Life Story

So Chester now goes from schools telling his life story oh what he went though.So he is as a high school

telling his life so then he started talking about his sister Kat.He told about her life os Chester is talking"

my sister Kat was 18 years old and she was the best sister anyone could have.So no matter what i know she

still loves me even though she died and it hit me the hardest.Student talking"So Chester how did she die?"

Chester is Talking "well one day me and Kat went to the park and a shoot out broke loose in front of me and Kat

and as i turned around it was to late she already got hit with a bullet and we got her to the hospital in time but she died

2 hours later and then i fell back in to drugs and cutting but i pulled though it amd i'm still here and everyday i visit her grave."

Student is talking" wow Chester you have been though alot even as a child and then you end up losing your parents and sister in the end."

Chester is talking"Yes i ahve but i pulled though it alland i'm still here and i have a wife and a son.."Teacher is talking"Well thnks for your time

Chester and everyone give it up for Chester."**Students clapping and whistling***so as Chester was walking out of the schooland go to his car

and gets into his car and drives away crying cause of how his sister died.And he said to himself"No one should have died the way my sister did."So

Chester went to a hotel for a few nights and he also turned off his cell phone off.So Sam called Mike** converstion with mike**Sam:Mike:Mike:What sam:

Sam:i can't find chester anywhere and he answering his cell phone:Mike:Wtf ! I will round the guys to look for him oaky Sam:Sam:Thnks Mike I will call if he

comes homeokay:Mike:Okay bye:**converstion with Mike is over****So after the phone call.Mike called the guys and told them what was wrong and they were

at Mike's Place like no body's busniess..So then Chester had left moutain to his head as he was driving there he had My December playing over and over and over again

so as he got to his cabin he decide to stay for atlease a week or 2.So Chester turned his cell phone off for the time he was gone then Mike ,Rob,Brad,Phoenix and Joe

gave up looking for chaz.So after a week of chaz being gone he finally called Mike**converstion with Mike* Chester:Mike:Mike:Chaz Wazzup where have you been?:

Chester:Up in the mountains clearing my head: Mike: Dude Sam is like worried about you!and me and the guys were looking for you but gave up after 3 days.:Chester:well i'm on my way back but don't tell Sam i'm gonna surprise her.:Mike: Okay i won't bye:Chester:Bye.***Converstion with Mike is over***.So Chester got home and walked in the door and Davon looked up and saw his dad and Davon ran and hugged his dad.And then Davon yelled"DAD YOUR HOME"and then Sam heard Davon say that his dad was home so Sam walked in the room and saw Chester standing there and Chester said"Hey hon i missed you."Sam said"You(pause)you never called or anything."Chester said"i went to the mountains cause when i went to the high school and told my story and my sister's story i was like really really really upset so i decide to get my head out of the dirt."Sam said"Hmm that explains alot Chester".So after that they went to bed So as moring came Chester woke up before Sam and Davon.And made them breakfast So Sam and Davon woke to the sweet smell of bacon so Sam and Davon went down stairs to see that Chester made them breakfast and Sam said"Chester are you going to eat?" Chester said"No i'm not very hungry." so then Sam And Davon was enjoying there meal. So then Chester went up stairs to the guest room on the bed where Kat slept

and he noticed that he pillow still smelled like her and her smell soothed him back to sleep so 30 minutes Sam found Chester asleep on Kats bed....so a few hours later Chester woke up and went to the game room and found Kats neckless he gave her when she was 13 years old.So then he put on her neckless around his neck....

and then saw kat one more time Kat said"I was hoping you would find it chaz and i'm glad you did and chester I love you."Chester said"I love you to and Kat i remember

that you are waiting for me on the other side."then Kat kissed chester on the cheek one more time then chester walked out with a smile on his face.So then Derek called

Chester to tell him that Metallica wanna to tour with them and Chester said"Hell Yea we will do it."so after the phone call with Derek Chester called Mike to tell him what was planned.** conv with mike** Chaz:Mike good news:Mike what is it the good news you bare:Chaz:We have a concert to get a ready for: Mike:With who?:Chaz:Metallica:Mike:

Holy Snikyes Sweet okay i will round up Rob,brad,Phoenix,and Joe:Chaz:Okay i will round up the bus: okay bye:Chaz:Bye:** conv with Mike is over** So Chester and Sam And Davon are eating dinner when Chester said"Umm Sam Davon I'm going on the road and Davion i was wondering if you wanna go with?" Davon said"Hell yea Dad and who is the band?"Chester said:Metallica"Davon almost fell out of his chair when he heard Metallica's nameso Davon said"Sweeeet Dad"So then it came to the day that Chaz,Mike,Rob,Brad,Phoenix,Joe and Davon left for the concert.So its Linkin Park on stages and then chaz starts talking to the crowed."well this next song is My December and i decate this to my sister Kat who died two years ago"so as the benning of My December started and then Chaz to Sing so then it came to toward the ending of My December so as Chaz was singing the chorus"This is my decmeber this is my time of the year this is my december this is all so clear" and Mike looked at Chaz and saw he was crying as he was singing My December.So as LinkinPark was done with there performence Mike pulled Chaz aside and said"Why were you crying though the song My December?"chaz said"Cause when i was at Kat's Grave i sung the whole song to her and as i walked back to my car i was crying to its okay i'm fine"

Mike said"That explains alot Chaz."So Chaz went back to the bus but didn't know that Davon was on the bus sleeping but Chaz went to the bathroom with a razor and then Davon woke up and went to go use the bathroom and he walked in on his dad when he was cutting and as Chaz looked up and saw Davon looking at him with disappointment and anger on his face and then Davon said"I'm telling Mike Dad and you are going to be in big trouble when he finds out."so then Davon went to there Mike was and said" Mike bad news about my dad"Mike Looked at Davon and said"What is the bad news Davon and it better be serious."Davon said" well when i woke up and i went to the bathroom and i saw my dad cutting again."so Mike and Davon got back to the bus to see that Chaz was still there so Mike went over to Chaz and took him arm and pulled up his sleeve to see he was cutting again.And Mike Said"why are you cutting again Chaz." and Chaz said"Cause i can't stop thinking about Kat and to think i let her die if me and Kat didn't go to the park that day she would still be here."Mike said"You blame yourself for her death that is messed up Chaz this is what Kat would want she would want you to be happy."so Chaz said to his son"Davon leave now and go hang with Rob and the guys."So Davon left to hang with Rob and the others.so mike said"how long have you been at it Chaz."Chaz said"after my first visit to her grave so about 2 years."Mike said" you have to snap out of it you need to get help Chaz! cause what would you do if you do if found out Davon was cuttting?"so chester thought long and hard about the question.so then Chaz said" i would do anything to help him stop."

so Mike said"yea so wonder what he is thinking about what you are doing."Chaz said" that i am no role model."Mike said"maybe Chaz but still you blame yourself for kats death it could have happend to anyone so start moving on then living in the past."so chaz fell to his knees and hands crying and Mike went to Chaz and just was hugging him as he was crying so as that was going on Davon and they guys were talking and then Davon said" umm guys my dad is cutting again."then they looked at Davon and Rob said" are you serious?"Davon said"yea i am serious i saw him do it."******back to Mike and Chester**** so Mike said"we are willing to help you." and chaz said"and i am willing to take your offer mike "so there tour was done for the year so Chaz and Mike Rob Brad Phoenix Joe and Davon are back home then a week later Chaz left to a special hospital..

the end

ps:this is the last chapter for now.

[lpp]

come on guys read read for the time till

 

chapter 6,7,8,9 and maybe 10

 

but yes i am on break right now so hurry hurry and read so you can enjoy the upcoming chapters when they come

[lpp]

Hey Fellow Readers ..

 

Chapter 6,7,8,9 are done

 

so read 5 before you read the last 4 chapter

[twilightcrimson7]

Hmmmm It has a good concept and drama. I like it alot.

A few suggestions: proofread, develope a theme and plot: it's kind of messy, and delve into the character's minds more. you seem to be just summarizing the whole thing.

All in all, each chapter seems to improve! ^_^ good luck!

[lpp]

Hmmmm It has a good concept and drama. I like it alot.

A few suggestions: proofread, develope a theme and plot: it's kind of messy, and delve into the character's minds more. you seem to be just summarizing the whole thing.

All in all, each chapter seems to improve! ^_^ good luck!

 

thnk you twi....

 

little hint on chapter 6....and 7 its goes more in to Chaz's character's mind and role.

[lpp]

Chapter 6

Chester progess part 1

So Chaz left for the Special Hospital .So as he arrived he was greeted by his room mate Alex "Hey you must be Chester nice to meet you." so Chaz Said"Yes i am but Please call me Chaz ! its nice to meet you to and whats your name?" Alex said"I'm Alex and i'm 16 and i'm trying to recover from Cutting what about you?"Chaz said" I'm 33 and also trying to recover from cutting to."so as the two guys walked back to the room they were talking on the way there.So as Chaz and Alex got to the room Chaz was really really tired so he went to his bed and fell asleep on his bed but since it was lunch time Alex let Chaz sleep so Alex left for the mess hall to get lunch so chazs counselor asked Alex where Chaz was so Alex said"He fell asleep on his bed in our room why starr?"Starr said" he has a past with being suicidal."so Alex and Starr and a doctor ran to There room to find Chaz wasn't breathing.but they got him back and found out he od on anti depressints.

So 3 or 4 days later Chaz woke up to Alex by his side with disappointment on his face.Alex said" why would you try to take your own life when you have a son and a wife Chaz huh?"chaz said"you wouldn't understand what i feel and went though 12 years ago Alex."Alex said"dude the reseason why i cut is when i was living with my dad he become abusive he hit me all the time .so if i didn't cry he wouldn't hit me if i did my homework he wouldn't hit me so i was never allowed to have a girlfriend so you think i wouldn't understand how you feel think again Chaz." so Chaz just went back to sleep*DREAM*so it when Chaz was 6 and Kat was 3 so then Chaz's parents are fighting again and Kat ran to chaz and Said"Butterfly and Dad are fighting again" so Chaz picked up Kat and took her to the park for the time there parents are fighting so Kat was playing for awhile then went back to Chaz and said"I hungy i want eat Chaz" so Chaz and Kat went to sonics for a bite to eat so as they were done Chaz and Kat went back to the park and then Kat was playing when Chaz saw there dad Chaz said"Kat we have to go ." so Chaz picked up Kat so the 3 of them walked back home and then Chaz said"Kat go to your room NOW" so Kat went to her room. so Chaz started yelling at his dad"Damn you do you not realize Kat is 3 years old DAMN when you and mom start fighing it Scares Kat GOD DAMN dad get FUCKING ANGERMANGMENT."then Chaz's dad hit him really hard on the arm and it left a bruise on his arm.**dream ended***and Chaz woke up crying and locked himself in the bathroom for 2 hours*5 seconds later**Chaz came out and Alex said"Well About time you came out why were you in there for 2 hours Chaz said"i was taking a bath to relax got a problem with that Alex?"Alex said"No i was just wondering Chaz."so then Chaz's doctor came in the room and Alex said"Chaz locked himself in the bathroom for 2 hours.dr,kane said"Really ! Chester why did you lock yourself in the bathroom for 2 hours."Chaz said"Non of your fucking bussiness you dumb ass." so after that Chaz left the room and saw Mike and the others there so Chaz pulled Mike aside so Chaz and Mike went to where no one could see nor hear them so Chaz said"Mike you know about that dream i told you about right the one where i was 6 and kat was 3 ?"Mike said"yea i do Chaz i remember but why bring it back up again." Chaz said"Cause i had it again but i got farther but my dad hit me and i told Kat to go to her room.Mike i am scared."so Mike just held Chaz close by his chest and started to Sing Mocking Bird to Chaz which was his favorite lullabye so Chaz was really relaxed and calm.So Chaz said"Mike thank you i feel less scared now but please keep Singing."So Mike did he Kept Singing Mocking Bird so Chaz just fell asleep in Mikes arms as Mike kept Singing Mocking Bird he noticed how he was like a brother to Chaz cause Chaz would go to him with his big problems so Mike started Smiling as kept Singing mocking Bird to Chaz.

 

the end.

[twilightcrimson7]

Ahh, you keep getting better. My compliments

I liked this chapter, it's your best one yet. But still keep the things I said in mind, k? good luck! <3

[Pheonix791989]

its still a little choppy and you still seem to be doing the he said she said thing. I like your story line and everything but the he said she said thing is really starting to get on my nerves. But like twilightcrimson7 said you are getting better.

[rock star]

Dude ... GOOD WORK *claps*

that's so great really i just read chap 5 it's so coool

*reads* hehe okie dokie ...

THANX

[rock star]

OH yeaah i love it

and btw i love that song to Mocking Bird

THANX i'm waitin for 7,8 okieeeeeeeee

[anna_loves.chaz]

Draven is chester's son, I dont know why did you call him Davon..well i's a fiction you can name him whatever you want

[anna_loves.chaz]

And the Mokingbird's part was sooooo gay ,but kinda sweet

nice chapter hehehe.