Kates Posted March 17, 2005 Posted March 17, 2005 a broken heart is nothing a shattered life, a stolen soul somewhere beyond this tortured mind there lies true pain I used to know a melodic midnight lullaby a gentle good-night kiss then a trace of crimson failure is left bleeding upon pale wrist and who is there to blame for this? a little girl left in the corner watching life dance before her eyes there comes a moment a quiet moment this abandoned house in which she cries she bled for this she wanted this no more truth to hide the lies a broken heart, a shattered life a useless dream, a faded star is nothing compared to this tender scar this stolen soul is who she is and with guilt of murder she won't go far Quote
twilightcrimson7 Posted March 17, 2005 Posted March 17, 2005 ahhh! *faints* I loved it! It touched me *sad smile* Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/caa111db447cb1d28d713cebad979c8d.png ...:away and onward:...
Kates Posted March 18, 2005 Author Posted March 18, 2005 Haha thank you. ^^; You may not understand the last line unless you really think about it. Quote
rock star Posted March 18, 2005 Posted March 18, 2005 YOOHOOO WHAT A COOL SONG DUDE reall its AMAZING Quote I Like What I Do .. I Do What I Like
rock star Posted March 18, 2005 Posted March 18, 2005 really * sorry Quote I Like What I Do .. I Do What I Like
FadedBlue Posted March 18, 2005 Posted March 18, 2005 That was beautiful kates!! Great Job!! Quote Last.fm
LPpinkfreak821 Posted March 18, 2005 Posted March 18, 2005 a broken heart is nothing a shattered life, a stolen soul somewhere beyond this tortured mind there lies true pain I used to know a melodic midnight lullaby a gentle good-night kiss then a trace of crimson failure is left bleeding upon pale wrist and who is there to blame for this? a little girl left in the corner watching life dance before her eyes there comes a moment a quiet moment this abandoned house in which she cries she bled for this she wanted this no more truth to hide the lies a broken heart, a shattered life a useless dream, a faded star is nothing compared to this tender scar this stolen soul is who she is and with guilt of murder she won't go far omg.. i love it.. it rocks!!!.. that is really really good!!!!!!!! Quote When my time comes, forget what the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind reasons to be missed Don't resent me and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory [[it isn't an official goodbye, but I'll be gone for long time]]]
hybrid_eky Posted March 23, 2005 Posted March 23, 2005 that was beautiful. ur a really good writer, Kates! Quote [broken External Image]:http://friendpages.com/pages/artist/individuality/photo12.jpg
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