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this is one I wrote about/for my mom. It's kind of personal, so it might be confusing to you. If there's anything you feel I should change, please tell me.

 

we thought our problem had been solved

that all the pain had gone away

that things were back to normal again

that our friendship had come back together again

but slowly and unoticed

I was being ripped apart

piece by piece I fell

fell away into my own grave

we should have just let it go

you were so quick to make me happy again

so quick to mean the world to me again

you pushed me away and

expected me to come back to you

laughing and smiling and happy again

this seperation finally back together again

like a puzzle that's missed a piece for years

and now we found that missing piece

that piece turned black and burning still

we made it worse and now it's gone

just push me away again but don't

expect me to come back to you

don't want me to run to you

because I won't be hurt again

no, you can't let me hurt myself again

I died once in your arms

and this time I'll die alone

Thank you.

 

I really didn't put much thought into this. I wasn't so strict on making rhyme. I just wrote what I felt, and somehow I was able to come up the perfect tune for it. Tell me what you think. ^^;

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