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hey guys!!!! sorry i didn't get around to typing this earlier - stupid internet lol...so, here's the next part!!!!!

 

chester: *lying on his side, talking to mike and joe* so, what've you been doing???

joe: wondering if you were still alive or not...

mike: shut up joe!!!

chester: ha ha, very funny...

*mike leans against the side of chester's bunk, which incidently means that he bumps chester in the head*

chester: ouch!!! mike!!!!

mike: sorry...i'm so *yawns* tired...i took nyquil instead of dayquil again...

joe: yeah, cuz he's a dumbass...

mike: if i wasn't so tired i'd kick you where it counts...

chester: don't worry mike; i'll switch places with you and kick joe's ass in gin...

joe: *wide eyed* no!!!! you know i suck at gin!!!

chester: that's exactly why we're playing!!!!!

*chester hops out of his bunk and sits cross-legged across from joe. mike crawls into chester's bunk and lies down in bed*

chester: we'll be quiet for you mike....

joe: *grumbling* why'd you have to take nyquil...WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mike: 'night...

*mike closes his eyes and falls into an uneasy sleep*

chester: so, will it be five card gin or seven???

joe: seven

chester: are you SURE about that??? *grins evily*

joe: positive....

*chester and joe play seven card gin for a while as mike sleeps. they get bored and go to the back room to play video games with the other guys*

joe: anyone wanna play halo 2???

chester: joe???

joe: what???

chester: why the hell do you even ASK that when you know the answer's gonna be YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

phoenix: *walking into the room* who said something about halo???

chester: joe - we were wondering if anyone wanted to play with us...

phoenix: yeah, lemme find mike...

joe: he's sleeping in chester's bunk

phoenix: so, the nyquil finally kicked in, didn't it...

joe: yup!!!

chester: sucks for you, doesn't it!!! *evil grin* we're gonna whup you this time!!!!

phoenix: yeah right!!! i'm gonna get rob to come kick your ass at halo with me!!!!

chester and joe: ROB?!?!?!?!

*chester and joe start laughing out loud*

phoenix: what's wrong with rob???

joe: you know he's bad at halo!!!

chester: we're playing split screen so we'll kick his ass easily!!!!!

phoenix: whatever - let's just have the three of us play, every man for himself....

joe: but that's no fun!!!!!

phoenix: sucks for you then!!!!!!

*chester, joe and phoenix play halo. suddenly there's a monsterous crash*

chester, joe and phoenix: what the f**k????

brad: *calling from the front lounge* you guys all right???

chester, joe and phoenix: yup!!! how about you???

brad: rob and i are fine...what about mike????

chester: i dunno...i'll check on him...

brad: 'kay!!!

*chester goes over to his bunk and opens the curtain thingy. mike is still asleep*

chester: *whispering* mike??? you okay buddy???

mike: *slightly awake* mmmm....huh??? ch*yawns*chazzy??? whut's going *yawns again* on????

chester: there was a crash and we wanted to make sure you were ok....

mike: i thought i felt something...

chester: you still tired???

*mike nods his head*

chester: go back to sleep then...i'll wake you up if mike needs us for anything...

*mike closes his eyes and smiles a little. chester smiles back*

mike: 'night chaz...

chester: 'night mike....

*chester closes the curtain thingy*

 

i g2g...hope you liked this part!!!!!

i'm a butterfly with broken wings....hold me and i'll be your everything

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Varying Perspectives

 

Great stories. Your method of story telling offers an experience much similar to television viewing. It is as if I am watching South Park live in writing, except with alternating advantages which you have very well composed.

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hey guys!!!! here's the next part!!!!!

*chester goes back and plays halo two with joe and phoenix. a half hour later, mike amato (the tour manager) calls everyone to the front lounge*

mike a: guys!!! could you come here?? i need to talk to you!!!

phoenix and joe: coming!!!!

chester: i'll get mike up...

*chester walks over to mike's bunk and opens the curtain thingy*

chester: mike....*chester shakes mike's shoulder*.....mike wants us....

*mike is still asleep*

chester: mike....wake up....

*mike stays asleep*

chester: oh hell....i'll get him out of bed and maybe the others will wake him up

*chester tries to get mike out of his bunk*

chester: too....heavy.....JOE!!!!!!!

joe: what!!!!!

chester: i need your help!!!!!

joe: with what???

chester: getting mike out of my f***ing bunk!!!!

joe: why can't he get out himself???

chester: BECAUSE, you nimrod, HE'S ASLEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

joe: why are you getting him out of bed when he's asleep????

chester: ARE YOU REALLY THAT STUPID!!!!!!! mike wants us out in the front lounge, and i told mike - THIS ONE YOU DIMWIT - that i'd wake him up if mike needed us.....NOW do you get it!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!!!!!

joe: oh....

chester: *is about to fall on his ass b/c mike's so heavy* well, are you gonna help me?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!!

joe: well....you did call me a dimwit...so....

chester: JOE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

joe: ok ok i'll help......

*joe walks over to chester's bunk, where chester's about to fall*

joe: i'll grab his shoulders, you get his legs *grabs mike around the waist*

chester: thanks *stands up and grabs mike's legs...suddenly, mike wakes up*

mike: huh??? *looks up at joe* WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

joe: yay!!! he's awake!!!!!

mike: PUT ME DOWN!!!!!!!

joe: ok!!!! *sets mike down on the floor*

mike: chester!!!! what's going on?!?!?!?!?!?!

chester: mike wants us, and we were trying to wake you up and you wouldn't, so we were gonna carry you over to the front lounge....

mike: *sighs and shakes his head* that was really unnecessary.....*stands up and walks to the front lounge*

joe: *sarcastic* nice idea chazzy chaz....

chester: oh can it, will ya!!!!!

*joe and chester walk over to the front lounge and sit down on the couch*

mike a: well, it looks like that crash you guys heard was our engine breaking down....we're gonna get this bus over to the mechanic so we can be off to denver as soon as possible....

rob: okay..are there any hotels we can stay at while the bus is getting fixed????

mike a: uh, there's one problem....all the hotels are filled, so we're gonna have to walk around and find a family who will let us stay with them....

mike: oh shit!!!!!

mike a: what???

mike: sorry, i'm just having deja vu....

chester: what do you mean??? we haven't had to do this before???

mike: no...it's a dream i had...our bus broke down, and we were in south park and we had to look for a family to stay with....

mike a: wow - we're in south park right now....dude, you really are having deja vu, aren't you....

 

I THINK THIS IS THE END!!!!! lol....here ya go!!!!

i'm a butterfly with broken wings....hold me and i'll be your everything

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nice ending, who wooda thunk that? did ya heer about what shade is sayin about how a collaberation wood be good? i think it wood be nice. im also tryin to figure out if shade is a eminem or linkin park fan...what do u tink? reed da post.

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