misspiggy Posted July 29, 2005 Posted July 29, 2005 OMG!!!! mike can be so cruel!!!! please update!! Quote [[melma]]
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted July 29, 2005 Author Posted July 29, 2005 OTAY HERES YA NEW CHAP... Alyssa's POV "Hey you ok?" I asked Melissa as we walked down to the hospital to visit Chester. She looked at me blankly and didnt answer me. I had a tinge of fear at the dark look in her eyes, so i layed back on the questions and looked at the ground. It had never been so tense between us. Although my head was banging with unasked questions, I refused myself to speak. As if Silence was a slow passing knife through an unsuspetcing tomato, It seemed like tim ewent on forever. Until we reached the large double doors. I swung it open and walked in. I talked to the nurse for a second and we starting walking up to Chaz's room. "Hey guys" Chester yawned and we realised we werent the only visitors. Draven was sitting in his mom's lap, staring at Chester with curiosity. Chester looked back and smiled at his son, but Draven just sat there, like he didnt know what to do. Chaz sighed and we pulled chairs over to his bed. "Hey Chaz. Hows things?" I asked. "Same shit different day" he sighed. "Chester, hun, dont cuss in front of Drav." Sam muttered, turning away and staring at the wall. I shifted in my seat uncomfortably and looked around. Drav seemed confused, his mother and father looked tired and exasperated. Melissa looked as if she sold her soul. And i sat here, analyzing each one of their faces for any sign of what was going on. "So...you eating real food yet?" I said, desperate to get off this dangerously close to erupting mood. "No, still that tubed crap. I miss putting things in my mouth to actually eat." He laughed a little. "Must suck" "Hell yea it does. I get a craving so bad to chew and eat something, I have to bite my own fist to keep myself from eating my beed sheets." I laughed "I see" "Well..Im leavin. Bye, Chester. Drav say bye to your daddy" Sam stood up. "Bye bye daddy" Draven said, making an attempt to wave as Sa hurried out of the room. Im tired im goin to bed. R/r, u ppl kno da drill. Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
Pheonix791989 Posted July 29, 2005 Posted July 29, 2005 really nice keep it up alyssa. love it. im curious about what will happen next Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Vash_the_Stampede Posted July 29, 2005 Posted July 29, 2005 Awesome chapter. As always, I can't wait for more. ^^ Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
Chipmonk21177 Posted July 31, 2005 Posted July 31, 2005 great update~ cant wait for more! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/c99781d50578e831766432604c05a695.gif 8-15-07; Linkin Park live at Blossom
DerykInuTaishou Posted July 31, 2005 Posted July 31, 2005 so you must be alyssa. nice work my sister said it was good. BTW im Deryk Pheonix791989's brother. Quote im with Pheonix791989here is the average number of my "Like" counter: (stopped counting after 700) "Always turn your cellphone off before an interview."-brad in the frat party
lpevanstaind Posted July 31, 2005 Posted July 31, 2005 omg!!! the drama...i love it lol....what's gonna happen to mike????? Quote i'm a butterfly with broken wings....hold me and i'll be your everything
misspiggy Posted August 1, 2005 Posted August 1, 2005 is it me or is sam acting a little fishy * rubs chin * Quote [[melma]]
Pheonix791989 Posted August 1, 2005 Posted August 1, 2005 yeah seriously fishy. update update Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted August 10, 2005 Author Posted August 10, 2005 Mike groaned as he pulled himself out of the driver seat, dropping to the ground. His legs were numb and he felt like he didnt have any at all. Anna rushed to his side and tried to get him to stand. Whne he put pressure on his feet, his knees right away buckled and he fell back to the ground. "Call the fucking ambulance" He said quietly, falling backwards onto the black stony pavement. He winced "Ow god" "I am, I am" Anna sighed and dialed the phone hurriedly "H-hello?" her voice trembled as she explained what had happened. She looked over at Mike and was heart broken to see him in so much pain. She kneeled down beside him and hung up the phone, the last words she heard from them was 'Be there soon'. "They are on there way" She said, Mike sat there, legs sprawled in awkward positions, his clenched closed and the pain surged through his body. He had never felt so much pain...so much pain... After what seemed like hours, the ambulance and police pulled up. The large white and red truck had flashing lights, and the ppl inside it hauled Mike into the back, Anna following. AT THE HOSPITAL!!!! "How bad is it?" Anna asked the doctor after they checked out Mike's legs. "He might need a wheelchair for a while" "How long is a while?" "About 5 years" Okay R/R u kno the drill. Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
Pheonix791989 Posted August 10, 2005 Posted August 10, 2005 wtf? poor mike. nice going . i luv it Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted November 28, 2005 Author Posted November 28, 2005 ....I feel...horrible..I TOTTALLY forgot all about LPF..+dies of shame+ Well, no that I put the story as my home page, I can't forget to updtae everyday. xDD The words went in one ear and out of the other. Mike just sat there, frozen in some kind of time lapse, like nothing else was there. After what seemed like moments, the words slammed against his head, and he averted a quick gaze to the studying doctor. "Five...years?" He finally uttered, voice quavering in fear and shock. The doctor gave no reply, only a simple nod of the head. A cry of hysteria was wracked from Mike's deluded and hoarse vocal folds, hands flying mercilessly in every direction. Anna stood back, biting the tips of fingers, sweater pulled tight around her small torso. Powerless, and even frightened of her own husband's actions, she took no heed to how much he need comfort, and stood against the wall, unable to move. Mike gave up and a thud resounded as his head fell to his hands....'Why me...' -------------------------- Draven sat his in mom's arms as they reached the front door, she set him to his feet as she fumbled with the lock. Dropping her purse to the couch, she crumpled in a heap on the couch, mascara coursing in fine lines down her cheeks. Guilt hevaed its ugly self over her thoughts, troubling her every action. Shooting to her feet in suprise, she realized Draven still sat on the floor, watching with confusion at his distressed mom. Uncomfortable, the young toddler rushed up the stairs, slamming the door to the play room behind him. Emitting a sigh, Samantha dropped back on the couch, weary and somewhat tired.... The phone resonated it's loud ring through-out the house, sending Samantha's nap crashing down to earth. She sat up quickly, grasping the ears peice in clutched fists. "Hello? ... Oh hey babe...yea i'll come over...sitter for Draven? Yea....alright. Love you too, Kevin." She hung up the phone. Who is Kevin? Why is Mike...so deranged?! Is this why Sam is acting so weird?! TOON IN NEXT POST! Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
Ravynlee Posted November 29, 2005 Posted November 29, 2005 Hey - came in late, but after reading through had to post and say I love what I've read so far. Very fluid. Easy to read. Nice style. Can't wait for more. But poor Mike! OMG... poor guy... *shakes head* Poor, poor guy... Yup. Want more. Hooked now. Must have more. Gimmie. *wink* -Rav P.S. Keep up the good work. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8a6798b252d89e12b3d476bb0fa63027.jpg ~ If I'm not here, I'm there ^ ~ ~ All new general discussion forum ~ Click pic !!! ~
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted November 30, 2005 Author Posted November 30, 2005 Draven peeped his small head out of the crack of the door, then tromped down the stairs, tugging on his mom's dangling coat. "Mommy!" He shreed, the tugging not to cease into the little one's fingers. "Draven, I must be off, sweetheart. Melissa and Alyssa are on their way." "Who's Kevin?" The young'un asked, stretching his arms to be scooped into her own. She didn't move. "..Kevin, love, is none of your concern." Her tone was drenched in utter malice, glaring heatedly to her son, eyes narrowed to slits. "I-I-I...I sorry." The toddler cowered at his mom's feet, falling and staring at her, frightened. "I'll be back." She stated simply, walking out the door, not even bothering to lock it. Melissa and Alyssa? They didn't arrive... --_--_--_--Alyssa && Melissa's POV--_--_--_-- "Bored, what do ya wanna do now?" MElissa piqued, sprawled out on Mike's large family room couch, staring boredly at the ceiling. "Dunno. Lets get over to Dravens, maybe Sam could go to a movie." Alyssa tempted, tilting her head to stare at her friend. "Sure, but she would call us if she needed it. Doesn't Chester get out today?" "Oh, yeah. I'm sure they would want to go out, so lets hike up on over there." Alyssa teased, notioning to the window, the small hill they had to climb to get to the Bennington's large suburban house. Nodding, the two left. --_--_--_--General POV--_--_--_-- Draven cowered in the darkening house, staring about in utter fear. "MOMMY!!" He screeched, tears quickening their course down his cheeks. "DADDY! I DONT WANNA BE AWONE!" He shreed, digging himself under a blanket on the couch. His whimpers were loud and echoing off the walls, sobs becoming more fearful. "Oh Draven..." A rasp whisper flooded the house just then, and the toddler froze. "D-daddy?" He whimpered, peeking from the blanket. A large shadow stood before him, sheilding his view. "Not quite." Draven felt a hand clamp over his mouth, and arms tighten around him. Unable to move, unable to scream, he was taken out of the house, and into a black seville down the street. Oooh, r/r! Pleaaassee! xD I will only make a new chappie if more people review... Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
Pheonix791989 Posted November 30, 2005 Posted November 30, 2005 I want more!!!!!!!!!! gimme more. do we find the little guy? Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Vash_the_Stampede Posted November 30, 2005 Posted November 30, 2005 Yay! I went back & read it from the beginning again. Like I've said many times before in this thread, wonderful job. I really can't wait to read more. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted March 16, 2006 Author Posted March 16, 2006 +spazzes+ AHH. MY COMPUTER HATH CRASHED. >>; But now, it is better. Lyssa has returned. < 333 Terribley sorry for my absence; blame Cox. xD ----- Nothing was right. SIlently creeping, Alyssa and Melissa made their slow way to the front door, inspecting the lock with a sense of alarm. It was broken. Bashing the door open, they stood in the living room, back door ajar, almost off it's rusty hinges. A sudden sickness swept over the two, clutching eachother's shoulders for support, staring weakly at the empty inside, looming above, laughing at the girls coldly. Windows flashed, lightning sparking the dark sky into a fesitival of cruel intentions, screaming with the terror of the disaster that lay in silent wake. Wilting to the floor, Melissa stared at the crumpled blankets that showered the sofa, strewn over the cushions. "Oh no." She murmered, climbing to her feet. "Where'd they go?" "You're over reacting. They probably....went out." Alyssa stated, although her voice held none of the confidence she attempted. Uttering a whimper of despair, the two girls climbed the stairs, searching everywhere for Draven or Sam. Neither showed up. "No! The backdoor's open! Something's wrong!" Melissa's frantic voice shrouded the creaking house's air, pushing it into a delusional mist of an eerie sort. "Damnit." They both breathed, grabbing the phone. They needed to call Chester. ----- Draven was limp underneath the sweaty pits of an older man. He let the boy drop to the ratty old sofa that filled a tiny shack, windows were boarded up along with any other doors. He fastened the entrance shut tight, sneering as he eyed the young toddler. "M'boy." He said slowly, finger running over Draven's gaunt facial structure. "Don't worry. Your father will come soon." HE stifled a laugh, staring evilly at Draven's limp figure. The man crossed the dingy room to the boarded window, peaking between the spaced wooden planks. He was about middle aged, a mop of messy brown hair mottled his round head, pudgy cheeks fell lightly on his fat face. He had a major beer gut, and it was evident it was caused by the empty beer bottles that lay broken over the hard wood floor. Slowly he turned, striding easily to the boy's side. His grimy hand reached out, gently carressing Draven's tear streaked cheek. "Don't worry. Me 'n you will a wonderful time. I'll make sure of that." A laugh eroded from his parted lips, so sinister...it sent chills up the fainted boy's spine. ----- Done for now. I'm currently writing another fan fic, so look out for that one too. Tata! < 333 -Lyssa Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
Jelly Posted March 16, 2006 Posted March 16, 2006 OMGGG...poor draven!!...stupid sam!!..y wud u leave him alone and whos kevin? Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/0f9ca8954da15d34f02dbae2b1111ce1.gif Thanks to ForgottenKid for the signature.
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted March 17, 2006 Author Posted March 17, 2006 The phone seemed to ring forever, Melissa's palms sweaty as she tightened her grip on the reciever. "Come on Chester." She moaned, giving a disgruntled cry in her frustration. After what seemed like years, a voice interupted the constant ringing with a monotonic greeting. "P-please." Melissa finally studdered, both hands clutching at the ear piece. Unsignifant voices on the other end were babbling that Chester was asleep and didn't want to be disturbed. "JUST GET HIM ON THE FUCKING PHONE!" She wailed, falling to her knees with the cordless still against her ear. Alyssa could hear an outrage from the other end, but Melissa's screaming made it inaudible for the time being. Finally, Melissa uttered yes, silenting for a good few minuetes. "Chester? Oh thank god." She cried, staggering to her feet. Chester's drowzy voice peaked over the heavy breathing of Alyssa and Melissa, but he paused, waiting for Melissa to tell him what's going on. "Draven's gone." She whimpered, shaking her head slowly. ----- Sam was cuddled on the large plush sofa, watching Kevin as he weaved his way through the house, two elegant glasses perched over the edge of his fingers, both brimming with wine. Sam gladly took hers, drinking it nonstop until it was halfway gone. "Troubled, my dear?" Kevin asked, turning ot face her. Hastily shaking her head, Sam smiled. "No no, babe, not at all." She assured him, hand resting on his thigh as he settled next to her. "It's not Chester, is it?" He asked with mild alarm, eyeing her for a few moments. "Does he know?" Sam scoffed, shaking her head. "If he knew I was cheating on him, he would've killed me by now." She said with an arrogant snort, looking the other way. "What about Draven? Now that he knows you're seeing someone else, he'll tell." Kevin pointed out, resting against the back of his sofa, arm around Sam's shoulders. "Oh, I've got him all taken care of. Don't you worry." She purred, looking in admiration at the man whom was groping her stomach. "Good. Wouldn't want him to tell daddy about his new baby sister." And with that, the two were in eachother arms, eyes linked as they shared a passionate kiss. ----- Chester was in shock. He sat on his hospital bed, staring out the window. The phone on his bedside was limp in his hands, and he uttered a roar of rage. "Where's Sam?" He asked suddenly, waiting for the teenager's reply from the other end. Melissa hurriedly explained that her car was gone, and she was no where to be found. "Search the table for something, please. It's Draven's pacifier, the one he won't leave without." He said, digging his finger nails into the plastic reciever. A slight gasp was heard on Melissa's end, and she was muttering into the phone. "I didn't find the pacifier." She said slowly, fingering the diamond engorged band that lay on her palm. "But I found Sam's wedding ring." ---- OOH. WHAT'LL HAPPEENNN?! Hell, I should know, It's my story. xD Anyway, sorry about any exclusive content, but don't read if it offends you. Thankss < 33 -Lyssa < 33 Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
Jelly Posted March 17, 2006 Posted March 17, 2006 sams soo stupid!..argggg 1 Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/0f9ca8954da15d34f02dbae2b1111ce1.gif Thanks to ForgottenKid for the signature.
Pheonix791989 Posted March 18, 2006 Posted March 18, 2006 *snorts* about time you did more writing. took ya long enough Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Ravynlee Posted March 19, 2006 Posted March 19, 2006 Damn this is good stuff right here. Man, you know it's good when you immediately get involved in these character's dilemma. I like wanted to reach out and gently take Sam by the shoulders - then shake the living crap out of her. Aargh! Where's Draven?!? OMG! I'm hyperventilating! Haha. But seriously, great stuff. -Rav Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8a6798b252d89e12b3d476bb0fa63027.jpg ~ If I'm not here, I'm there ^ ~ ~ All new general discussion forum ~ Click pic !!! ~
Fainting_LP_Fan890 Posted March 19, 2006 Author Posted March 19, 2006 AH. I feel so loved. xDDD Mm. Thanks guys. -- Silence enveloped both ends of the phone line, the white noise of nothing filling the blanks precariously between them. Melissa's fingers wove around the shape and texture of the diamond engorged ring, gently prodding each little gem that portruded from its center. Slowly, her mouth moved to form words but nothing came, jaw moving like a hooked fish. Finally, Chester's voice shook both Melissa and himself back to reality. "I'm going to go find him." Chester said softly, his breath now ragged and audible as he huffed into the phone, making it obvious he was seething with rage. "You go find Sam. Here, I'll give you her cell." The vocalist muttered a few numbers before bidding his farewell, the sound of beeping leaving Melissa and Alyssa the only ones on the line. The hung up the phone, and they started to dial the number Chester had given them... ----- Chester heard an outraged yell from the next room, and he pushed the pillow over his ears, letting the theropedic pillow drop back on the bed only moments later. Chester struggled with his clothes, trying in vain to pull them on his body for what seemed like hours, each moment ticked away at Chester mind, knowing every moment could cause him to be too late to save his son. Staggering to his barefeet, he slipped on his shoes and headed for the door, hand groping for his back pocket as he stuffed his cell and wallet in. ----- Mike had calmed, staring out the window of the hospital as he waited to be fitted for his casts, his having to take longer because they were a harder plaster then normal. He looked to Anna, his face weathered and he looked worn and tired. Anna felt her heart break for him, and she made her way to his side, sitting next to him. Grasping his hand in her own, she gave him a peck on the cheek, earning a grin from her stressing husband. "Don't worry, things'll be okay." She said, though she was unsure what the next five years would bring. -- Done for now. Sorry if its short, but eh, I'm not the best writer. xD -Lyssa < 3 Quote Hypnotize It Propaganda Left Us ♥Blinded♥
Jelly Posted March 20, 2006 Posted March 20, 2006 i hope chester finds him!!..poor mike! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/0f9ca8954da15d34f02dbae2b1111ce1.gif Thanks to ForgottenKid for the signature.
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