MrRandomGuy Posted May 17, 2005 Posted May 17, 2005 The closet is full of shit It is like an endless pit Everything bad in the past is there Like what I saw on the internet I didn’t share Or inner peace between Glenna I can never get What hurts me the most of all Is that I can never look at it all I see the shit that I do And I wonder and think Why must I push evil to the brink? The closet will only be here It will never be seen by my peers Quote backwards-sdrawkcab luaP m'I !selur dlofneveS degnevA http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/e826bc5c9f32fe33e0fffbc53963e0cb.jpg drawrof-forward check out my myspace! Join my message board All Music
Pain Posted May 17, 2005 Posted May 17, 2005 The closet is full of shit It is like an endless pit Everything bad in the past is there Like what I saw on the internet I didn’t share Or inner peace between Glenna I can never get What hurts me the most of all Is that I can never look at it all I see the shit that I do And I wonder and think Why must I push evil to the brink? The closet will only be here It will never be seen by my peers wow P that was good but i already read it though but very well written Quote [broken External Image]:http://srjava.coconia.net/sig/index.php
ForgottenKid Posted May 17, 2005 Posted May 17, 2005 Cool. *snaps finger* LOL I had to do that, sorry if you got freaked out but our teacher is a poet and she makes us do that everytime we hear a poem. Quote Disposable, at risk for every right, there is a wrong Click Here Yo
Victim Posted May 17, 2005 Posted May 17, 2005 thats awsum.. nice work Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/305186a372bb061b2ab713febbdc560a.jpg
LPpinkfreak821 Posted May 17, 2005 Posted May 17, 2005 wow that is really good. i like that alot.... im gonna steal it from here and put it on my wall... lol if thats ok.. it will be credited to you.. lol... of course..but anyways i like it alot Quote When my time comes, forget what the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind reasons to be missed Don't resent me and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory [[it isn't an official goodbye, but I'll be gone for long time]]]
Xblackwidow20X Posted May 18, 2005 Posted May 18, 2005 I like Quote [broken External Image]:http://www.powow.com/hinacnj/BLACKWIDOWLP.gif I don't need you anymore, I dont want to be ignored, i dont need one more day, Of you wasting me away................ WITH NO APOLOGIES!!!! http://www.myspace.com/xblackwidow20x
MrRandomGuy Posted May 20, 2005 Author Posted May 20, 2005 thanks guys, you've convinced me to post more of my work on here Quote backwards-sdrawkcab luaP m'I !selur dlofneveS degnevA http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/e826bc5c9f32fe33e0fffbc53963e0cb.jpg drawrof-forward check out my myspace! Join my message board All Music
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