Penguinscanfly_88 Posted May 21, 2005 Posted May 21, 2005 Hmmmm...... Well just let me know what you think..........Its about how I feel since my mom found out about my cutting. Alone There is hatred in this place I can see it in their face They haunt me all my days I hope this is just a phase As I cut no more upon my wrist I find it is something I miss The smile on my face is gone Everything in my life has gone wrong I hide the way I really feel I don't know if this hurt will ever heal They say my life is a mistake My whole life is a fake What they see is a lie They don't know Ijust want to die I am numb inside These things I should no longer hide But I do so they don't know I put on for them a pretty good show I wish I was gone but I've no place to go I don't want to keep this inside but I must Cuz there is no one that I can trust So as I go through this alone Their lives still go on I have so many problems And no way to solve them. Quote To whom this may concern.... Mine death was immient, You lead me there with thy staff For thine purpose You suffocated me to the end, You smothered me with hate Now I am gone and free from you http://www.myspace.com/lovinulovinme2
babiangel1191 Posted May 21, 2005 Posted May 21, 2005 wow i love this poem.. i like the way u write. Awesome :thumbsup: Quote [broken External Image]:http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/9624/babiangelsig9gq.png Thanx A Bunch Hybi :thumbsup:
Marizka Posted May 21, 2005 Posted May 21, 2005 wow, that is very good, you translated(?) your feelings very well into a poem! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/1f3f1672c41a196591ae77f9d8e11a0a.jpg This one world vision Turns us in to compromise What good's religion When it's each other we despise Damn the government Damn their killing Damn their lies Placebo-Sleeping With Ghosts
Penguinscanfly_88 Posted May 22, 2005 Author Posted May 22, 2005 Thanx you guys!!!!! I really like writing I can't cut know so I need a new way to deal and that is why I wrote it. Quote To whom this may concern.... Mine death was immient, You lead me there with thy staff For thine purpose You suffocated me to the end, You smothered me with hate Now I am gone and free from you http://www.myspace.com/lovinulovinme2
Mikes_Shadow Posted May 22, 2005 Posted May 22, 2005 holy shit.. that's awesome :p Quote hurr durr [broken External Image]:http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3860/dffhgfhfghfgfghhg.jpg http://www.last.fm/user/fAgalloch
shahfire Posted May 22, 2005 Posted May 22, 2005 "I don't want to keep this inside but I must Cuz there is no one that I can trust" nice lines. cool stuff. ill give it 9/10. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/190/02/shahsig.psd Proud member of the CoB Thank you IK for the sig!!
Penguinscanfly_88 Posted May 24, 2005 Author Posted May 24, 2005 "I don't want to keep this inside but I must Cuz there is no one that I can trust" nice lines. cool stuff. ill give it 9/10. holy shit.. that's awesome :p Thanx!!!!! That poem is the best of the 2 I wrote I think Quote To whom this may concern.... Mine death was immient, You lead me there with thy staff For thine purpose You suffocated me to the end, You smothered me with hate Now I am gone and free from you http://www.myspace.com/lovinulovinme2
ROCKSLIDE Posted May 24, 2005 Posted May 24, 2005 That's pretty tight man. You have impressed a pro writer of poetry. I'd take my hat off 2 u but i ain't wearing 1 right now. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img281.echo.cx/img281/5030/aaronsigcopy5it.jpg And I got respect and I dont neglect The people that I really care to protect (thanks for the siggy Vash)
Xblackwidow20X Posted May 24, 2005 Posted May 24, 2005 I really like that. very expressive. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: two thumbs up Quote [broken External Image]:http://www.powow.com/hinacnj/BLACKWIDOWLP.gif I don't need you anymore, I dont want to be ignored, i dont need one more day, Of you wasting me away................ WITH NO APOLOGIES!!!! http://www.myspace.com/xblackwidow20x
Penguinscanfly_88 Posted May 25, 2005 Author Posted May 25, 2005 That's pretty tight man. You have impressed a pro writer of poetry. I'd take my hat off 2 u but i ain't wearing 1 right now. Thanx!!!!! Like I said its the best out of the two I have written I really like that. very expressive. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: two thumbs up Thanx!!!!!!! I am glad you are impressed lol Quote To whom this may concern.... Mine death was immient, You lead me there with thy staff For thine purpose You suffocated me to the end, You smothered me with hate Now I am gone and free from you http://www.myspace.com/lovinulovinme2
diana Posted May 25, 2005 Posted May 25, 2005 Oh, this is so owsom! I really like it and I think its great! Emmm, and Im so sorry cuz you dont have nobody to trust...so sad... Anyway, I hope youll feel better someday... Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
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