My Dark Poetry Section

[babiangel1191]

His eyes

So red, so

much hatred.

Believing in

something

unbelievable.

His whip hurts

like a thousand

knives dropping to

your body.

He lets go of his anger

on me.

I feel I am under this betrayl

forever.

[Vash_the_Stampede]

As I said earlier, I love it. I think you have real talent.

[babiangel1191]

here is another poem:

Dark Heart

Blood dripping

at the

bottom of my

core.

You may think

my heart

is red

but it is

black.

Black like the

darkest of days.

Blades entering my heart.

[gaia89]

full of emotions!

[Marizka]

I love ur style of writing!

[babiangel1191]

thank you everyone

[babiangel1191]

Here is something I wrote while i was in class:

 

Big Fall

At my existance,

I see

a

big cliff.

To jump, to

end my

life.

Or to continue

my existance.

I jump,

see the end

of my

life.

Memories

of my life

flashing.

The wind

hitting

my face.

[keza]

wow, theyre really good!!!

im late as always but you have real talent...!!

*claps*

[babiangel1191]

thank you keza

[gaia89]

great emotions

[meteora500]

oohh, so much emotion! I like...

[Greyfoxx]

Very much emotions! I like your style of writing!

[uwantme2b]

I like your poems a lot, especially the last one you posted up. Your writing style is very unique, I like a writer who feels comfortable writing 'outside the box', so to speak. Good work, and I hope to see more of your writing soon.

[babiangel1191]

I was sad when I wrote this:

Flashback

I can still rememember this day like it was yesterday. Her body in the coffin all relaxed. I cannot look at her like that.

I know she is in a better place but, i dont know what to do. I will always love her. She is in my heart. A heart that gets bigger and that will always beat.

She may not be on this earth but she is always in my heart.

[Black_Angel]

I like the style of your poems... the lines are short, and I think that adds alot of depth to your writing.

 

Aww and the flashback thing is sad... you feel sorry for the person whos having it

[bam_bam_darkslide]

ooh...nice. darkness always gets rid of my stress. always on the dark side coz they have cookies and milk.