gaia89 Posted June 1, 2005 Posted June 1, 2005 Darkened Rose The petal cuts through the gentle wind, Caught up in the phantom of fear. A chill pushing close to my arms, Another sign of mystical disgust. A silent scream echoes with the motion, As the sky erupts into pieces. Falling through the light, Fading in the distant sight. As I hold on tight, I slowly lose my drive. The color of white, Darkened by the fading of light. Spinning close to the beat of my heart, Slowing down the crying of the night. Crimson delight lingers for too long, Holding on to the edge of its thorns. As I hold on tight, I slowly lose my drive. The atmospheric run stopped in its time, Fragrance of life soured its rhymes. Taken a path to the other side of life, Watch the tainting of the night sky. A petal from the rose sits here alone, Letting go of its nebulous glow. My reflection fell to the next low, Fading away just like the melting frost. Quote Email: jiamin89@hotmail.com http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/981ff142ac4c3ed391fddac3619480e8.jpg
keza Posted June 1, 2005 Posted June 1, 2005 wow, thats really cool it even has an awesome title...really very cool!!! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/ce845b5e1cfffbb4e7ea78abcb7bf1ae.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/3b7255122472a9285083158e67a4c66b.jpg
LPpinkfreak821 Posted June 1, 2005 Posted June 1, 2005 i absolutey fuckin love it. i mean that is really really good. its like spiffy.. lol... you did a great job on that Quote When my time comes, forget what the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind reasons to be missed Don't resent me and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory [[it isn't an official goodbye, but I'll be gone for long time]]]
Marizka Posted June 1, 2005 Posted June 1, 2005 one word: WOW. truly amazing..can I print that out? Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/1f3f1672c41a196591ae77f9d8e11a0a.jpg This one world vision Turns us in to compromise What good's religion When it's each other we despise Damn the government Damn their killing Damn their lies Placebo-Sleeping With Ghosts
Xblackwidow20X Posted June 2, 2005 Posted June 2, 2005 i like that alot good job Quote [broken External Image]:http://www.powow.com/hinacnj/BLACKWIDOWLP.gif I don't need you anymore, I dont want to be ignored, i dont need one more day, Of you wasting me away................ WITH NO APOLOGIES!!!! http://www.myspace.com/xblackwidow20x
gaia89 Posted June 3, 2005 Author Posted June 3, 2005 thanks a lot for the comments! its my lst time posting here,didnt expect to get a reply actually..im glad u guys did..haha keza: haha..i considered several titles,but finally decided on this.. LPpinkfreak821: Marizka:sure.im glad u like it. Xblackwidow20X: thx Quote Email: jiamin89@hotmail.com http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/981ff142ac4c3ed391fddac3619480e8.jpg
Tack Posted June 3, 2005 Posted June 3, 2005 Holy frickin' shit! Awesome poem! Incredible! Wish I could write like that! Quote
gaia89 Posted June 3, 2005 Author Posted June 3, 2005 Holy frickin' shit! Awesome poem! Incredible! Wish I could write like that! thanks! i got the inspiration from this *points to my sig* Quote Email: jiamin89@hotmail.com http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/981ff142ac4c3ed391fddac3619480e8.jpg
ShadowMachine Posted June 4, 2005 Posted June 4, 2005 wow that is awesome, that is true skill! ^_^ Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/c2fc017313cf75f023fd7d433a3619af.gif "Those Humans who betrayed me will be cursed till the end of the world...They will regret for the rest of their lives....."-Gaara
keza Posted June 4, 2005 Posted June 4, 2005 thanks a lot for the comments! its my lst time posting here,didnt expect to get a reply actually..im glad u guys did..haha keza: haha..i considered several titles,but finally decided on this.. LPpinkfreak821: Marizka:sure.im glad u like it. Xblackwidow20X: thx good choice on the title...lol Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/ce845b5e1cfffbb4e7ea78abcb7bf1ae.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/3b7255122472a9285083158e67a4c66b.jpg
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 4, 2005 Posted June 4, 2005 Nice job. Good work. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
gaia89 Posted June 8, 2005 Author Posted June 8, 2005 Nice job. Good work. thanks for that Quote Email: jiamin89@hotmail.com http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/981ff142ac4c3ed391fddac3619480e8.jpg
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 8, 2005 Posted June 8, 2005 no problem whatsoever. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
diana Posted June 8, 2005 Posted June 8, 2005 Yeah, its OK song and I like it but I read it very quickly and so I didnt have time to really thought about it...ups...but anyway...great song... :thumbsup: Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
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