4everLP_Shinoda Posted June 22, 2005 Posted June 22, 2005 Great chapter,keep updating as always:D!. Quote
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 23, 2005 Posted June 23, 2005 LMFAO!!!! I guess I'm a drunk? LOL. ANYWHO, great chapter, keep it up. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 23, 2005 Author Posted June 23, 2005 yeah shani's xrockin....glad u all liked it...decided every one of my story has to have some sort of violence Quote ¿whysoserious?
XrockinfreakX Posted June 23, 2005 Posted June 23, 2005 Hahaha nice chapter... keep it coming. Quote August eighth, two thousand and seven was the best.
stupidsoul1 Posted June 23, 2005 Posted June 23, 2005 awwwwwesome!! congrats on killing the monster =) Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/25cb22d29f0c2f027cf1acc5b7bf6cf4.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/459bb3c6fed65d05781dbdae0319d254.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/0dcf45273040e11bc56a99d4601a58d5.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/bfdf068f8fa963062b979cec565ff7f7.png Fiona is teh Fionizzle... and we all love her ^^
Dark_Nights_Death Posted June 23, 2005 Posted June 23, 2005 nice chaps Azem Quote [broken External Image]:http://www.cenman.bitshop.com/images/200x200/fl3-pOdn.jpg Dark_Nights_Death is me i am Dark am i like Night and i am like Death
4everLP_Shinoda Posted June 23, 2005 Posted June 23, 2005 When are the next chapters comming Azem?I can´t wait for more of them:D Quote
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 25, 2005 Author Posted June 25, 2005 Before I Forget I stood up and looked down at Shani. “You ok?” She nodded I held out my hand and pulled her up. “Ok, Look. I need you to hide. Some people are going to come and take me away. I need you to remember where they’re taking me. Then you need to find your way back and inform Treeves and Jasmine were I’m at ok?” She nodded. I could hear footsteps in the distance and rushed Shani to hide underneath some cloth. 44 came into view. “Vell vell, mista Azem. Looks like you kill all oft me monsters. I gift you a handed clap for zis.” 44 walked towards me. He sniffed my face. “You are a pretty boi. Yes. I like you Askem. You are very sexi. Ze devil will like you a lot.” He kissed me on the cheek. I glared at him and he laughed. “What boi? Do you’d think I am gay? I am not gay. I just love to freakish out you ZAMN amereekins! You stupid. You smell oft burger and coke.” I stared at him “What the fuck?” I said under my breath. He walked over and grabbed a whip. He spoke softly “Don’t cho say fuct to me! Choo hear?” He whipped me. The whipped ripped my flesh from my body. “Ahh!” I screamed. I fell to my knees. “Choo say fuck to me American? Choo SAY IT NOW ZAMNIT!” “Fuck.” I whispered. He whipped straight into my bodylines of flesh ripped away flying in midair. Shani flinched. She gripped her gun. “Azem, please don’t let me regret this.” She ran out and shot 44 to the ground to henchmen ran up to her she shot one. I grabbed 44’s gun and aimed at him. “Oh oh. Mr. Askem hast mi gahoon. Vat r you’t to do? You shoot me in nads? I die go to hell eat pancakes and havet gewd time. You still wont have Brittany. You still wont be happy Hamid. You will still be a little bitch sucking from your mother’s tits. You are a pathetic piece of Cambodian shit.” He spat at me. Shani had knocked down the other guy and was staring at me. “DO IT HAMID!” she screamed. I turned to her and pulled the gun to my temple. A cold rush ran through my body. The metal tip tingled on my temple. “He he. The damn American is going to kill himself. You a fucking cock sucking bitch. You’d probably take my dick your such a pussy.” I turned back to 44 and aimed at him. “Look man. Shut the fuck bitch.” 44 looked at me shocked. “You’re my ho know and you do as I say.” I turned to Shani. “Hey catch this.” I tossed her the gun. “Shoot him in the balls. Please.” She grinned and nodded. I herd the gun click and then fire. A loud scream filled the room. “Zo stooped son oft a bitch!” I turned around and saw 44 chocking Shani. I ran over and pulled him off her. “You fuckin bitch.” I slammed him to the ground. I lifted my arm and slammed it into his face. He lifted his arm and struck me. I flew back. He leaped at me. “Damned Amereekin shalt die.” His nails grew long. He slashed my face. Blood flung into the air. I pushed him off me and backhand sprigged onto my feet. I grabbed a piece of wood that was lying on the floor and swung it at his face. Spat and blood flung out and hit Shani in the face. I kicked him in the stomach. I swung the board on his back. He fell to the ground. I leaped onto him pounding his face into the ground. “You fuckin French dick wipe.” I drug his face across the ground. I lifted him up by the head and slammed him into the wall. Blood flew everywhere. He fell to the ground and started to cry. “You stooped baish. You shall payed fo zat. Cause Fort Minor ist hell. Andt I am zey Devil.” He stood up. I positioned myself. He walled jump and turned around kicking me in the face. I flew back into the wall. The wall fell on me. He shoved his hand into the bricks. And yanked me out. He slammed his fist into my skull. My eyes filled with blood making it hard to see. He picked me up and dropped me onto the cold hard floor. He picked up the wooden board and broke it over my back. I screamed. Shani took aim. “Hey 44!” He turned around “Say hi to the real devil for me.” She blasted him in the heart. The bullet drove into the flesh blowing out a big hole in his back. He fell to his knees. “You may haft kilt me. But the demons still run loose. You must take them on. You fuckin bitch.” I walked over to him and pulled out my gun. And kneeled to his level. “Heh. You’re my bitch.” I tapped him on the cheeks. I stood up and walked away and Shani fallowed me. I turned around. “Oh Before I Forget.” I aimed my gun and blasted off his head. I turned away and walked into the darkness. Quote ¿whysoserious?
4everLP_Shinoda Posted June 25, 2005 Posted June 25, 2005 Woah that was awesome,specially the fight part. Great chapter Azem! Quote
Mike Shinodas Gurl Posted June 25, 2005 Posted June 25, 2005 Woooowiez!! lmao That was a really really awesum chapter Azem. ^__^ Quote Rawr. I moved to this account Sayoko
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 25, 2005 Author Posted June 25, 2005 Thankyou! I like the whole graphicness of it. Quote ¿whysoserious?
stupidsoul1 Posted June 25, 2005 Posted June 25, 2005 whoa thats so cool!! the graphics are great i could picture that.. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/25cb22d29f0c2f027cf1acc5b7bf6cf4.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/459bb3c6fed65d05781dbdae0319d254.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/0dcf45273040e11bc56a99d4601a58d5.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/bfdf068f8fa963062b979cec565ff7f7.png Fiona is teh Fionizzle... and we all love her ^^
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 25, 2005 Author Posted June 25, 2005 Yeah it took a while for me to update but i think it was worth it Quote ¿whysoserious?
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 25, 2005 Posted June 25, 2005 whoa, It was worth the wait. Awesome chapter. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 25, 2005 Author Posted June 25, 2005 id like to thank slipknots before i forget song...it helped me think up the violent parts Quote ¿whysoserious?
DJ BloodFrost Posted June 25, 2005 Posted June 25, 2005 Kickass update. Awesome fight scene, too. Getting shot in the balls...yikes. Quote [broken External Image]:http://xerofocusstudios.com/xfs_lpf.png Frost. Here's the deal. Either you give us an EP now' date=' or I kill Mark and all the hot ladies in the world...you pick. [/quote']
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 26, 2005 Author Posted June 26, 2005 Yeah, agent we have to make sacrafices in order for me to produce a better outcome. Unfotunately for you, your balls got aquainted with the ground Quote ¿whysoserious?
Treeves056 Posted June 26, 2005 Posted June 26, 2005 Unfotunately for you' date=' your balls got aquainted with the ground[/quote'] Damn...thats a little harsh Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 26, 2005 Posted June 26, 2005 That sucks... Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
Treeves056 Posted June 26, 2005 Posted June 26, 2005 I liked the chapter...but it was annoying reading the french accent Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
DJ BloodFrost Posted June 26, 2005 Posted June 26, 2005 Yeah' date=' agent we have to make sacrafices in order for me to produce a better outcome. Unfotunately for you, your balls got aquainted with the ground[/quote'] LMAO, there's another sig quote. Whatever, I know I still have my balls. As a matter of fact, I'm going to take a shower right now. Quote [broken External Image]:http://xerofocusstudios.com/xfs_lpf.png Frost. Here's the deal. Either you give us an EP now' date=' or I kill Mark and all the hot ladies in the world...you pick. [/quote']
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 26, 2005 Author Posted June 26, 2005 I liked the chapter...but it was annoying reading the french accent dpesnt that explain why its annoying? lol well at least we know ur not french agent on aacount that frech ppl hardly take showers Quote ¿whysoserious?
DJ BloodFrost Posted June 26, 2005 Posted June 26, 2005 dpesnt that explain why its annoying? lol well at least we know ur not french agent on aacount that frech ppl hardly take showers haha...better hope nobody in france reads this, azem Quote [broken External Image]:http://xerofocusstudios.com/xfs_lpf.png Frost. Here's the deal. Either you give us an EP now' date=' or I kill Mark and all the hot ladies in the world...you pick. [/quote']
misery Posted June 26, 2005 Posted June 26, 2005 haha...better hope nobody in france reads this' date=' azem[/quote'] Or Quebec.. lol. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/9403/untitled28ic6.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1118/22wc5.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2756/7mi3.jpg
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