Mike Shinodas Gurl Posted June 11, 2005 Posted June 11, 2005 That was very good. haha Great story Azem! ^.^ Quote Rawr. I moved to this account Sayoko
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 12, 2005 Posted June 12, 2005 That was great.Can't wait for more! Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
Pheonix791989 Posted June 13, 2005 Posted June 13, 2005 i love it azem keep it up man Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Treeves056 Posted June 13, 2005 Posted June 13, 2005 You got to stop killing off cool people azem Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
shahfire Posted June 13, 2005 Posted June 13, 2005 a bit of romance coming up in the story, i can see. waiting for the next chapter! Quote [broken External Image]:http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/190/02/shahsig.psd Proud member of the CoB Thank you IK for the sig!!
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 13, 2005 Author Posted June 13, 2005 You got to stop killing off cool people azem never sed vash died lol Quote ¿whysoserious?
Treeves056 Posted June 14, 2005 Posted June 14, 2005 Lol oh I thought you bumped him off Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 14, 2005 Posted June 14, 2005 never sed vash died lol Well, that's good, lol. I can't complain. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
DJ BloodFrost Posted June 14, 2005 Posted June 14, 2005 I think everybody just assumes that, at some point, they will be killed off in Azem's stories Quote [broken External Image]:http://xerofocusstudios.com/xfs_lpf.png Frost. Here's the deal. Either you give us an EP now' date=' or I kill Mark and all the hot ladies in the world...you pick. [/quote']
Rusu_luvs_LP_4ever Posted June 17, 2005 Posted June 17, 2005 lol Agent! But rocking chapter! keep it up!! Quote HAHAHA i love you ruth! [broken External Image]:http://img84.exs.cx/img84/1907/rasu.jpg <3Steph|Shabana|Fiona|Renai|Gemma|Al|Azem|Ahmed|Vero|Chantal|Heather|Basmah|Tina|COB kids<3
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 17, 2005 Author Posted June 17, 2005 LOL...summer break has officially began im im ready to come back!!! so be preped Quote ¿whysoserious?
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 17, 2005 Posted June 17, 2005 I'm ready....I think....^^ Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
4everLP_Shinoda Posted June 17, 2005 Posted June 17, 2005 Me 2,please post the next chapie soon^_^! Quote
LPGirl Posted June 18, 2005 Posted June 18, 2005 good chapter azem, lol i like the high lighting Quote
DJ BloodFrost Posted June 18, 2005 Posted June 18, 2005 lol Agent! But rocking chapter! keep it up!! Well, that's how it looks to me, anyway Indeed, summer vacation. Now I can start working on my remixes...and my story too, haven't updated in a while... Good work Azem, keep it up. Quote [broken External Image]:http://xerofocusstudios.com/xfs_lpf.png Frost. Here's the deal. Either you give us an EP now' date=' or I kill Mark and all the hot ladies in the world...you pick. [/quote']
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 19, 2005 Author Posted June 19, 2005 Well just so you know i deleted 5 chapters and im currently rewriting them. So hear is the newest addition...i hope its good. Just A Pretty Face I stood staring at Vash his chest pumping slowly. "Az ...Hamid." He said softly. "Am I in heaven?" He asked. I stared at him wildly. This obvioulsy was more hell than Heaven. "No....why?" He pointed. "The who is that really hot chick coming up towards us?" I turned and saw this really pretty girl walk towards her. "Lemme guess...Your Azem." I looked at her. "How do you know?" She grinned well ive seen your pic on lpf. It's me Jas." I turned to Vash who was already forcing himself up. "He...hey Jasmine its me Vash." She stared at him like she didnt care. "You look a little beat up. Did Azem kick your ass or something?" He laughed. "No we were...", she quickly cut him off " I already know Vash, don’t bother wasting the little bit of air the earth has." She turned to me. " 'Zem look, we need to get to the FT.MINOR High School for cover. Alot of people are there. So I suggest we hurry." I stared at her. “What do you mean a lot of people?” She gave me a weird questioning look. “Members from LPF, duh.” I turned to Vash he shrugged. So we fallowed her. Vash tried to keep up with Jas and make small talk but she showed no interest in talking to him. I fallowed behind both of them. Who was that girl I was seeing? The mere thought of her being present uplifted my soul. The thought of her presence evaporating from my memories made me feel less of a man. As we walked we entered the city of Ft. Minor. The streets were abandoned and dirty. Deserted buildings were filled with graffiti and broken windows. Jasmine turned around to us. She looked frightened. “Whatever you do…do not make any sudden nor loud noises.” She whispered. We walked slower and more aware. In front of me laid a huge building. It had graffiti all over it. The windows were boarded up. “Welcome to Ft. Minor High.” She whispered sarcastically. We walked to a boarded up door she tap the door once slightly and quickly. A whisper came from the door. “Code?” She whispered “Feel Good Inc.” Three slight kinks echoed and the door slowly opened. “Hurry!” The voice whispered. We rushed in. I looked at the person guarding the doors face. It was a girl. She grinned at me. “Vero? I thought you died…?” She opened her arms and hugged me. “Hamid, you have no clue. You just have no clue.” She looked down at my hand. “You brought beer! Oh my God! Hurry to the cafetria!” We ran down the old dusty hallways into the cafteria. Vero opened the huge doors. A bright light blinded me. Vero shouted, “Hey guys! We got beer!” Quote ¿whysoserious?
4everLP_Shinoda Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 Nice chapter Azem,that part u wrote about me just cracked me up,it made me look funny. Keep it comming:thumbsup:! Quote
misery Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 Cool chapter I liked it. Can't wait for the next one. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/9403/untitled28ic6.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1118/22wc5.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2756/7mi3.jpg
Mike Shinodas Gurl Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 That was really good. ^_^ lmao haha Thankx for including me and what Vero said was so fucken hilarious! “Hey guys! We got beer!” hah I love that part Quote Rawr. I moved to this account Sayoko
4everLP_Shinoda Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 That was really good. ^_^ lmao haha Thankx for including me and what Vero said was so fucken hilarious! hah I love that part roflme 2:p Quote
Treeves056 Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 I think its funny that everyone here hates drugs and alcohol but yet they say we got beer Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
misery Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 I think its funny that everyone here hates drugs and alcohol but yet they say we got beer I <3 alcohol Quote [broken External Image]:http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/9403/untitled28ic6.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1118/22wc5.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2756/7mi3.jpg
Treeves056 Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 Cheers then motherfucker But then again...we argued about how good alcholol is to the dark room so I know your little kegger ass likes alchohol but I was talking more of the "No drinks I got my razor blade" or "I'll die if I take a sip" type people on LPF,Besides this is LPF where if we say "Fuck you" everyone screams and crys and says "ZOMG!!!11 THE THREAD IS GETTING CLOSED" Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
LPGirl Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 lol funni chap.. quote "we got beer" <-------lol yay Quote
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 Good chapter Azem. I like it & I can't wait for more. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
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