stupidsoul1 Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 ahaha that is funny!! beer lmao neat!! cant wait till the next chappie =) Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/25cb22d29f0c2f027cf1acc5b7bf6cf4.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/459bb3c6fed65d05781dbdae0319d254.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/0dcf45273040e11bc56a99d4601a58d5.png http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/bfdf068f8fa963062b979cec565ff7f7.png Fiona is teh Fionizzle... and we all love her ^^
DJ BloodFrost Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 I dunno why the beer quote is so funny...it just is... Not what I expected the next chapter to be, but excellent nonetheless. Quote [broken External Image]:http://xerofocusstudios.com/xfs_lpf.png Frost. Here's the deal. Either you give us an EP now' date=' or I kill Mark and all the hot ladies in the world...you pick. [/quote']
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 19, 2005 Author Posted June 19, 2005 well cuz its like...out of every thing thats going on they are worried about beer. Quote ¿whysoserious?
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 19, 2005 Author Posted June 19, 2005 T I gazed into the large cafeteria. People were all over laying some standing, playing cards, dancing. Every one turned and stared at us. A large cheer filled the room. “AZEM!!!!” Jasmine waited for the noise to calm down. “See I told you we would find him!” She shouted. “Oh, and Vash is tagging along.” I turned back to look at Vash. He frowned but smiled slightly and waved. Every stood up and ran towards me. People were chanting and gleeful. “You’ve come to save us! Save us from them!!” The world suddenly went black. All I could see ahead of me was this wonderful light. It captivated me. I slowly walked towards it. It was the girl. Her back was towards me. The world stopped spinning. All I could hear was my heartbeat. I extended my arm slowly towards her. I slightly touched her shoulder. She slowly turned around. Her eyes met mine. Her lips began to form a smile. I couldn’t help but feel a sense of relief. I found what I needed. But then, the world around me began to spin. The surrounding environment lit back up. And she was gone from my sight. I fell to my knees. I looked up at everyone. They were all silently staring at me. I was shaking and felt cold. “He needs rest damnit. He’s been in a damn car for who knows how fucking long.” I looked up and heard a grungy familiar voice. He extended his hand in my direction. I grasped it and he pulled me up. “Some things never change. You’re still a weirdo. You can share my room.” He started to walk away. Then he waved at me to fallow him. We left the bright cafeteria into the dark hallways. “Where are we going?” I asked softly. He turned to me. “The leaders share a separate room. Looks like your going to join in on our leader group. So you’ll have to have our own space in the room. I’ll also get you a gun.” He led me into a large classroom. There were sleeping bags two fridges and a large stock of ramen noodles. There was one center light hanging dimly. Hey cleared out a corner and laid a sleeping bag down. He walked to a filing cabinet and opened it. He pulled out a rather large shotgun. He then pulled out a box of shells. He walked back over. “This is yours take good care of it. It’s all we got left. I’m going to go to sleep. If you need anything wake me up k?” I nodded and went to my sleeping back and laid down in it. It was nice and soft. I stared at the single light. It started to spark up and then died out. “Hey Treeves, your light died out.” He got up and looked at the light. “Dude, I just put a new bulb in that this morning.” I heard footsteps and the door swung open. It was Vero. “T, the power has been cut-off.” He turned to her. “Get Jasmine.” Quote ¿whysoserious?
Treeves056 Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 w00t....it's gonna take more than a bullet in a heart to hold me back Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 19, 2005 Author Posted June 19, 2005 lol u guys catch on quick Quote ¿whysoserious?
Mike Shinodas Gurl Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 ^_^ That was really good..lmao Treeves... your not dead yet ^__________^ Quote Rawr. I moved to this account Sayoko
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 Nice update. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
4everLP_Shinoda Posted June 19, 2005 Posted June 19, 2005 Nice chapter,please update more soon^_^ Quote
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 20, 2005 Author Posted June 20, 2005 :thumbsup: be on the look out for boiler room the next chapter Quote ¿whysoserious?
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 20, 2005 Author Posted June 20, 2005 Boiler Room Treeves grabbed his shotgun and cocked it. He turned to me. “Azem, What ever you fucking do, do not stare these fuckers in the eyes got me?” I nodded. We stepped out into the deserted hallways. Jasmine came running up with a small glock in hand. “T, do we need Vero for this?” Treeves looked at me then turned to her. “We got Zem. Leave Vero to protect the people in the cafeteria. We walked down the halls. The air felt as though it was thinning. It became harder and harder to breathe. I herd rustling up above me. I aimed towards the vents. We stopped moving. Treeves aimed upwards. Jasmine aimed straight ahead. I looked onto the vent. ”T, I think we should aim downwards.” He turned towards me. “What the hell do you mean?” Two hands sprouted out from the ground and grabbed Jasmines ankles. Treeves spewed 2 rounds into the ground. Then the monster leaped from the ground. “That’s why!” I aimed and fired a few rounds blood spewing everywhere. Clouds of smoke caused us to seize fire. There complete silence. I cocked my gun. The monster stood hanging from the ceiling. His eyes shined brightly. I gazed into them putting me into an internal trans. I had a vision Fiona. She sat on a chair with a bandana wrapped around her soft face. Her hands where tied behind her back. Misery walked into the room. “Well Fi, how do you like my humble little abode? Hmm? Shadow and me put it together very nicely if I do say so myself. It's tough making the best of a boiler room. But, I’ve always wanted to be an interior designer so in a sense my dream came true eh. You know why I am torturing you? Well, there are many reasons.” Misery walked up to Fiona and kissed her on the lips. She tried to fight it but it was useless. “It’s because you are a damn slut! You are a poor excuse for a woman. You know my love Christian was a real woman. She was worth living this hell filled life. But that brings me to my second reason. During the first convention, she was on the floor fighting for her life from the demons. I was laid out dieing and you know nobody stopped to save us. Christian was lying begging for you to save her. But what did you do? You skipped her and picked up Brittany. You left her to die. YOU CUASED THE MOST PERFECT WOMEN ON THIS EARTH TO DIE! YOU SACRIFICED HER FOR SOME OTHER SLUT!!! YOU FUCKING BITCH YOU LEFT MY GODDAMN FIANCE’ TO DIE!!” Misery turned away from her. Tears fell away from his eyes. Shadow walked up to him and hugged him. Misery turned around and lifted the bandana from her eyes. Her eyes were red and tear-filled. He walked over to her and took of his shirt. His chest was filled with large scars. “You see this? See them? I ripped off my own flesh and used them as bandages on Christian to prevent her from infection and bleeding. And yet it only proved useless. I would do anything to have Christian again. I loved her. I really loved her. That’s why I need you. With you around Hamid is sure to come and save you. The demons want hi. They want…” I gained back focus and I realized I was laying in my sleeping bag. Jasmine was standing over me. She sat down next to me and gave me a cup. I drank from it. It tasted really good. “Its my last bit of Gatorade. Figure you might want some.” She whispered softly and brushed my hair back. I stared into her eyes and saw my reflection. My eyes looked red. I saw Treeves appear behind her. “Ass wipe. Thought I said don’t stare at the eyes. Your fucking lucky you didn’t die. The last two people that did dropped dead.” Jasmine smiled. “I don’t know T. This guy is way different. He is definitely different from us. I’m just glad to know he is here with us.” I swallowed the last it of Gatorade. “Guys.” I said clearing my throat. “We need to go to the boiler room.” Quote ¿whysoserious?
misery Posted June 20, 2005 Posted June 20, 2005 Woo, great chapter Quite dramatic, awesome work Everything was great except for this.. But, I’ve always wanted to be an interior designer so in a sense my dream came true eh. Haha, just kidding! Awesome, can't wait for the next chapter. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/9403/untitled28ic6.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1118/22wc5.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2756/7mi3.jpg
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 20, 2005 Author Posted June 20, 2005 Lol thanks for the review...yeah gotta have some drama in this God forsaken story Quote ¿whysoserious?
Vash_the_Stampede Posted June 20, 2005 Posted June 20, 2005 Okay, that was awesome. Poor Matteh the interior designer.......^^ Tis really good so far, & I can't wait for more. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
4everLP_Shinoda Posted June 20, 2005 Posted June 20, 2005 Great chapter,this story is getting good so please continue with it^_^. Quote
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 20, 2005 Author Posted June 20, 2005 LOL im glad u guys r likeing it!! Quote ¿whysoserious?
Treeves056 Posted June 20, 2005 Posted June 20, 2005 Its good...but I like the first better Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
Mike Shinodas Gurl Posted June 20, 2005 Posted June 20, 2005 This is really good! ^___^ It's getting really interesting ^_^ Quote Rawr. I moved to this account Sayoko
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 20, 2005 Author Posted June 20, 2005 Its good...but I like the first better I h8 both of them lol thanks jasmine Quote ¿whysoserious?
Treeves056 Posted June 20, 2005 Posted June 20, 2005 Azem's a hater on himself =P Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 20, 2005 Author Posted June 20, 2005 eh it happens...man o man... Quote ¿whysoserious?
LPGirl Posted June 20, 2005 Posted June 20, 2005 i like this 1 more, there is more detail and its not just people shooting and dying, lol good work azem! Quote
shahfire Posted June 20, 2005 Posted June 20, 2005 nice chapters hamid. good work. keep it coming. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/190/02/shahsig.psd Proud member of the CoB Thank you IK for the sig!!
azemkamikaze03 Posted June 20, 2005 Author Posted June 20, 2005 Thanx Sha and yeah LP girl me two. Beforevery thing was quite blunt. Not much detail. Ill try to bring more of that into the newer chapters Quote ¿whysoserious?
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