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Fallout

 

“Dudes, we aren’t going anywhere! If you don’t listen, then you sure as hell ain't leading!” Treeves stared at me. “T, I saw Fiona in there with Misery. She needs us!” Jasmine stood. “Fiona?” She looked at Treeves. He turned away. “Azem, she’s dead. She came here with Misery. They both stared into the eyes of the monster. And they died.” Jasmine turned away and walked outside of the room. “Look, Zem ever since the convention you’ve changed. You’re not the same old guy I remember. You used to be ready for anything! Now you’re just a washed up bum getting all the girls to kiss your ass. Man just get over yourself.” I stared at him. I slightly opened my mouth. “You stupid white ass bastard. You think it’s easy trying to be a hero?” “You are not a fuckin hero!!” Treeves was fuming. “We are all God Damn people you fuckin idiot. Get over yourself man. You are nothing special!” I stared into his eyes. He was right I was and am nothing, a worthless piece of shit. I wasn’t a hero. I couldn’t even save my own fiancé from dieing. And Fiona, I let Misery take her away. “You are right T.” I whispered. He frowned and walked out. I sat looking at the one light bulb. I though of Brittany’s face. They only brought chills through my spine. Jasmine walked in the room. She sat in front of me. “Hamid, look. You are a good guy. You care about everyone. All you do is try for us. Most people wouldn’t give a damn about us. You are a hero to me. And I know Fiona and Brittany would feel the same.” I stared into her eyes. They made me think of what I might have been living for. “Jas,” I sighed. “I’m, not a hero. Heroes are saviors. They are famous. They are brave. I’m none of that. I’m a failure. I’ve tried. But I can’t be. I’m just a nobody. At the end of the day nobody will know who I am. If I die tomorrow no one will care.” She stared at me. “I will. Hamid, your like a bro to me. You’ve always been there for all of us. In the end you seem to be the only one who cares.” I looked at my hands. I placed my and on my shotgun and cocked it. Jasmine looked at me strangely. I aimed at her head. Stared at me. He started to back up. “Ha…Ha…Hamid? What are you doing?”

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Duck

 

“All my life, I’ve searched for a meaning Jas. And I have found it.” She stared at me. She walked back words feeling for a weapon. I held the gun in my hand still aiming at her. I opened my drying mouth. “It’s to be a hero.” I laughed. “And Heroes kill right?” “Hamid… be rational”, She begged. “Oh, I’m being rational.” I said. She started to cry. “Duck” I whispered. She looked at me strangely and did as I told her. I blasted the monster that was standing behind her. It leaped at me and I fell to the floor. It jumped on me and started to slash away at my chest. I punched it in the face causing it to fall backwards. I back handspring back onto my feet and ran towards the monster. I shoved my hand into its mouth and gripped its long tusks. I yanked on it each time. Punching it occasionally so it would stop fighting. Then I pulled and the tusk ripped from the flesh. Guts and blood flung into the air. I flipped the tusk and jammed it straight into the monsters eyes. A loud ear-scorching scream came. “Jas! Hand me your gun!” I screamed. She tossed it me. I aimed the other gun hole straight at the monsters eyes. “Look, bitch.” I spoke sternly to the monster. “I’m going to take your little mind trip but the minute you fuck up I’m pulling the trigger.” I stared straight into the remaining eye of the monster. I fell into a sleep. I could here what was going on around me but I could not see. I picture started to fade in. It was Misery and Shadow. They were walking down the hall. Some how I managed to blink. I could see again. I blasted out the other eye of the demon and tossed Jasmine her gun and opened the door. There was Treeves but mat had him in a neck lock with a gun at his temple. “One move Hamid, and Treeves meets his maker.” Matt sneered. “I don’t think T is ready for the devil yet!” I said raising my gun aiming at Matt. “Azem, you bitch do what he wants.” Treeves cried. My eyes stayed locked on Matt’s. “Well, I could always kill him and Fiona.” Jasmine stepped out wiping blood from her face. “Misery? I thought you were…” Shadow shoved her gun into Jasmines mouth. “We could also kill miss pretty pretty also honey. Your choice baby!” Shadow laughed. I stared at Jasmine then at Treeves they looked scared. I dropped my gun. “What do you want Matt?” He looked at me jokingly. “Isn’t it obvious…you?” Shadow aimed at my leg and shot me I fell down to my knees. “AHHH” I groaned. The bullet gave a scorching sensation. Misery shot Treeves in the back and let him fall. He walked over to Jasmine. “He He, you’re a beauty.” He leaned to kiss her but it was no use. She spat on him. Swung and smacked her. She fell to the floor and started to cry. “You stupid fucking whore!” he screamed. “You’ll never be Christian! You dirty little bitch” Matt walked over to me and started to drag me away. “Nooo!” I groaned. I could only watch as Jasmine got up and hovered over Treeves. They disappeared into the shadows. Misery stopped dragging me after about five minutes. “Whe…where are you taking me?” I strained. Shadow turned to me and squatted down and pushed back my hair. I stared at her. “Baby, we’re going to the boiler room.”

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Awesome chapter :D Lots of action.. it's getting really intense :) Great work!

 

Edit: Haha, no, I don't mind at all Azem :)

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lol thanks Misery

 

yeah i have to bring more dialoge and intense moments in...it makes it sound better. i think...

 

I would agree. I think there's been enough action for a while. But still awesome chapters anyway.

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Forty-Four

 

Matt dragged me into the boiler room. He picked me up and chained me onto a chair. I rested my head back and felt a bump I turned around to see what it was. “Fiona? I asked. She turned around and stared at me. “Ha…mid?” she whispered. She had dirt lines on her face from where tears had fallen. She forced a grin. “I’m glad you’re here. I was beginning to think no one would come to save me. I stared at her eyes. They were dull. As though she was lifeless. “Fiona, I am here to save you. I’m going to be your hero. Just don’t give up. Because, I need you to help me k?” She stared at me with a smile still on her face. “You know, you always were my lil’ bro. ‘Cuz no matter what you were always there for me. You were here for all of us. You are a hero.” A tear dripped from her face. She slowly opened her mouth and forced herself to speak. “At first I didn’t believe it…but now I know we are going to make it.” I turned around to prevent her from seeing me from crying. I couldn’t hold it in. A white man and Matt walked in. “Hmm, das ist Mr. Azem?” Misery nodded. “Very vell ‘zen.” The man pulled out a gun and aimed it at my foot. “What are you doing?” The man looked at me. “Vell, ze boi speks!” His face was worn with scars all over. He was missing an eye and he was missing a middle finger on his left hand. “Mine name ist Agent Forty-Four. I vork for ze’ Francis government. But I come to Ft. Minor for different purposes. I come for revenge. Revenge on zu. Hamid Ali, you have kilt mi brothers.” He spat on me. “Arogol and Avante’. You killed zem all!” “They diserved it!” I shouted. “Vrong answer boi!” 44 shot me in the foot. I screamed and I could here Fiona start to cry.

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“We have got to save him Treeves!” Vero shouted. “Fuck that, we need to save ourselves.” Vash retorted. Jasmine sat in the corner looking through her things. “Look, we just can’t barge into the boiler room. This whole building is fucking infest with weird ass creep monsters. I’ don’t know if I want to risk it all for one guy. There was a knock on the door. “Come in” Treeves said softly. A young girl walked in. “What do you want Renai?” Vero asked impatiently. She stared at Jasmine. “You might want to see this Jasmine.” Everyone followed Renai into the cafeteria. On the floor laid Azem and Fiona. They were bleeding and were huddle up to each together. Everyone was looking at them and the cafeteria was silent.

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I lied there on the floor breathing heavily. I looked up and all I could see was bright lights. I saw Jasmine and Treeves faces come into view. There were whispers all around the room. I pushed myself upright. I looked for Fiona. She was lying there. Her chest was slightly moving up and down. I brushed her hair back. I looked up at Treeves. “Get some guns. They’re coming!” He frowned at me, “Who?” The lights flickered. “Them” I said softly. The lights went out. The vents started to rumble violently above us. Rusu walked over and handed me my shotgun. I cocked it. I could feel the air rising up above me. “Everyone! Listen up!” The whole cafeteria went silent. I lifted up my gun. “We are about to go under attack! The majority of you don’t have any weapons. Use what every you can get to fight these things! If some one is being attacked help if its possible! NO More running away! ITS TIME TO FIGHT!!!” the whole cafeteria stood in their positions staring at the ceilings. There was one vent held together by 4 screws. Slowly one screw began to unwind and fell to the floor. Then the next screw fell to the floor. I could hear the hearts around me pumping. Treeves and Jasmine retrived their guns. Treeves leaned over to me to me. “Azem,” he whispered, “Good luck man.” I kept my eyes locked on the vent screws. The third one dived slowly to the ground. I nodded and Treeves took aim. “Fiona…” I whispered. She looked at me. “Be careful.” The fourth and last screw slowly turned. It fell diving like a gymnast towards the ground. It hit the ground with a loud thump. I held my breath and the vent opened.

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Great chapter man :) Keep it comin'! :D

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whooooaaaaaaaa!!!!! u updated so much!!

 

 

 

OMG im alive!!!!

 

thats so exciting =)

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Fiona is teh Fionizzle... and we all love her ^^
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Battle

 

Tons of demons leaped out onto the ground. Guns began to flare. Screams and agonizing screeches filled the room. I loaded my gun and shot a monster that leaped at me. I spun around and swung at another demon. I flipped my gun coked and laid five bullets into the monsters body. The monster flew back “Ahh Azem!” I turned around and saw Shani being attacked. I ran and knocked down the monster. I picked her up and gave her my gun. “Shani! Its cock, aim, and fire ok?!” She nodded and I left to fight. Bodies were flying everywhere. It was complete pandemonium as people fought to stay alive. Treeves took his gun and shot a monster in the eye. Blood flung up in the air. A monster charged up and tackled me. I punched him in the face, and stood up. I found a metal rod and the floor and picked it up. I swung and hit the monster. The ground rumbled as I attacked. Every one stopped fighting and turned to watch me and the monster fight. I stuck the monster again but missed. He lashed back out at me. I swung at his legs causing him to fall. I spun my stick and impaled him in the heart and yanked it out and slashed the monster that was running towards me from behind. Another one leaped at me. It punched me in the face. I kicked him off me. Treeves tossed his gun towards me. I cocked, loaded, and blasted the monster back to hell. My world only became a blur. As I fought everyone watched. I remember ripping the head off the monster and throwing it at another one then taking the rod and impaling him by shoving it down the his throat. I yanked the rod back out and a heart was stuck to it. The world went back to a normal view. I was breathing heavily. Blood mixed with sweat dripped from my face. Vash stood there. A beer can fell from his hand. “Wha…what the fuck just happened?” vash stuttered. I looked at Fiona. She was wiping blood from her forehead. I looked around and realized they had formed a circle watching me fight. Shani walked back to me and handed me my gun. I dropped it and hugged her. She looked around and then hugged me back. “Shani…” I whispered. “Yes…?” she whispered back. “Do you know why I am hugging you tightly?” “…You’re madly in love with me and wanna savor the moment?” she whispered. “Close. In five seconds we are both going to fall into a trap door.” She looked down. “What?” “One, two, three, four” “Wait I don’t wanna go” “Five.” The floor opened up and we both fell through. The floor above us closed up. Vash stared at the floor. “I really need to stop drinking.” Treeves frowned, “Jasmine, get some weapons. Hamid’s in trouble.”

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