darkprincess Posted June 4, 2005 Posted June 4, 2005 Diseased Crying Revolution, Crying out the disease, sickly manifestation if you please, bleeding scars, sharp thorns to my eyes, your simple requests, foreshadowing demise. Analyzed tears, results within the hour, breaths of my soul, agony you devour, plausible revision of my absurd thought, leading onto the musty path of distraught. Dust on the soles sticks like the pain, causing the heart its strength to feign, hail the conqueror, the mighty force, as portrayed upon his black arabian horse. criticism/comments is/are welcome <3 Quote
diana Posted June 8, 2005 Posted June 8, 2005 Hey, thats soooo deap! You need to read it again and again to get it_what is it bout... Its like real poetry, its not symple but accually very hard to understand... Great job! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
ForgottenKid Posted June 8, 2005 Posted June 8, 2005 That was a really deep poem. I like it...alot. Quote Disposable, at risk for every right, there is a wrong Click Here Yo
darkprincess Posted July 9, 2005 Author Posted July 9, 2005 kool u guys liked it. i thank you both for commenting!!! :thumbsup: Quote
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