lpp Posted June 6, 2005 Posted June 6, 2005 I'm lost ,confused/ my thoughts are twisting around me ,lies just eat me alive as i beg and plead for my life and i put up a fight to win.Who am i ,someone who is lost and confused,my thoughts tie me down to the ground,lies flowing through her mind.her heart turning black/she now has gone from angry to bitter and sweet.She now is covered in thoughts she now to deep and lost and there might be a chance she can't be never be found. by lpp Quote
Frominsidegirl Posted June 6, 2005 Posted June 6, 2005 I like it , i think its something most people could identify with at anytime. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/24df4eed227f2b28bf0c4234b6da9eba.jpg
Treeves056 Posted June 7, 2005 Posted June 7, 2005 LPP you should have your text look better or more poetic I'm lost ,confused my thoughts are twisting around me lies just eat me alive as i beg and plead for my life and i put up a fight to win. Who am i Someone who is lost and confused,my thoughts tie me down to the ground,lies flowing through her mind Her heart turning black/she now has gone from angry to bitter and sweet. She now is covered in thoughts she now to deep and lost and there might be a chance she can't be never be found. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
Treeves056 Posted June 7, 2005 Posted June 7, 2005 Fuck you then I was only trying to help your wannabe emo bitch ass out Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
MrRandomGuy Posted June 7, 2005 Posted June 7, 2005 no need for flaming Quote backwards-sdrawkcab luaP m'I !selur dlofneveS degnevA http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/e826bc5c9f32fe33e0fffbc53963e0cb.jpg drawrof-forward check out my myspace! Join my message board All Music
misery Posted June 7, 2005 Posted June 7, 2005 shhh i don't wanna here your shit treeves He was just giving you some helpful advice. No need to lash out like that.. Quote [broken External Image]:http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/9403/untitled28ic6.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1118/22wc5.jpg [broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2756/7mi3.jpg
Treeves056 Posted June 7, 2005 Posted June 7, 2005 no need for flaming After I put out my hand and attempted to help her she calls my opinion shit I got all the right to get her back! Quote [broken External Image]:http://img167.echo.cx/img167/581/treevesnaruto53cg.gif
diana Posted June 8, 2005 Posted June 8, 2005 Well, I think you dont have to fight eachother with that hard words...and just cause of this stupid reason! I think the poem is great and if lpp want it to be like that let it be but lpp_treeves056 just wanted to help you...I think you shouldnt be so hard and agressive...Sorry cuz I dont mind my own business but I just had to wrote this...please dont be angry and be good to eachother...sorry... Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
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