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hey,

this is my first attempt at writing song lyrics,

what you think of them?

 

 

Alone

 

CHORUS:

Sitting on my bed, crying myself to sleep and

Cutting myself up again

Slicing and dicing

And hurting myself again

 

Why do I feel alone again?

With all my friends around me

Shutting them all out again

In my own negativity

I lie and cry to myself waiting for the big sleep

Where no one can ever wake me

Trying to get back on my feet

Feeling insecure again

And as the pain comes back

Depressed and I’m so tired of this deceit

Being lied to and I feel alone again

 

 

CHORUS:

Sitting on my bed, crying myself to sleep and

Cutting myself up again

Slicing and dicing

And hurting myself again

 

Alone and in my own dreams

You’re haunting me

Stretching me beyond my means

I can’t think of nobody but you

Tearing me apart again

I wish what you say is true

You tell me you love me time and time again

Is it worth fighting for?

Breaking me down time and time again

And I cry asking myself ‘why do you do this to me?’

In my own little world, alone again

All these lies and I can’t see

 

CHORUS:

Sitting on my bed, crying myself to sleep and

Cutting myself up again

Slicing and dicing

And hurting myself again

 

BRIGDE:

Thinking of you

Crawling into my wounds

And just like me, you’re alone too

Out with the one I love

As the pain goes away

We use to fit like a glove

But now you’re shutting me out again

 

CHORUS:

Sitting on my bed, crying myself to sleep and

Cutting myself up again

Slicing and dicing

And hurting myself again

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i thought it was very poetic *snaps fingers* but I'm not really into suicidal kind of stuff. I know LP do it sometimes but there's something inbetween what they do. Try doing something with more revenge... nice though.
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hmm good... But..hmm..yeah.. Just the words are kind of sadistic or whatever you want to call it. But if that is the Goth way then sure.

 

Nice Job, but yeah this should be in Writers Corner.

 

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thanks guys

your gonna have to bear with me in the whole writers cornes thing, i haven't been in here this long so at the min everything goin a bit tits up!!!! :rolleyes:

It's not really anything to with sadistic acts, it was just about what i was goin through at the time when i wrote it. But thanks for the comments, i really appreciate them :D

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It's very good. Nice writing. :)

 

I can see what everyone else means saying it's suicidal, but personally it doesn't bother me. Sometimes writing is the only way we can express ourselves on these things, and suicide is a real issue.

 

Yeah, nice lyrics Goth. ^^

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