Goth Posted June 10, 2005 Posted June 10, 2005 hey, this is my first attempt at writing song lyrics, what you think of them? Alone CHORUS: Sitting on my bed, crying myself to sleep and Cutting myself up again Slicing and dicing And hurting myself again Why do I feel alone again? With all my friends around me Shutting them all out again In my own negativity I lie and cry to myself waiting for the big sleep Where no one can ever wake me Trying to get back on my feet Feeling insecure again And as the pain comes back Depressed and I’m so tired of this deceit Being lied to and I feel alone again CHORUS: Sitting on my bed, crying myself to sleep and Cutting myself up again Slicing and dicing And hurting myself again Alone and in my own dreams You’re haunting me Stretching me beyond my means I can’t think of nobody but you Tearing me apart again I wish what you say is true You tell me you love me time and time again Is it worth fighting for? Breaking me down time and time again And I cry asking myself ‘why do you do this to me?’ In my own little world, alone again All these lies and I can’t see CHORUS: Sitting on my bed, crying myself to sleep and Cutting myself up again Slicing and dicing And hurting myself again BRIGDE: Thinking of you Crawling into my wounds And just like me, you’re alone too Out with the one I love As the pain goes away We use to fit like a glove But now you’re shutting me out again CHORUS: Sitting on my bed, crying myself to sleep and Cutting myself up again Slicing and dicing And hurting myself again Quote
Hahninator Posted June 10, 2005 Posted June 10, 2005 I would do a song for that like we did for You're Killing Me but this is too suicidal X_X Quote
gaia89 Posted June 10, 2005 Posted June 10, 2005 it's good...but erm..i thought this should be in the writers'corner? Quote Email: jiamin89@hotmail.com http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/981ff142ac4c3ed391fddac3619480e8.jpg
Mizz Shinoda Posted June 10, 2005 Posted June 10, 2005 i thought it was very poetic *snaps fingers* but I'm not really into suicidal kind of stuff. I know LP do it sometimes but there's something inbetween what they do. Try doing something with more revenge... nice though. Quote MIKE loves MIZZY and she loves him!! :thumbsup:
spike91232004 Posted June 10, 2005 Posted June 10, 2005 hmm good... But..hmm..yeah.. Just the words are kind of sadistic or whatever you want to call it. But if that is the Goth way then sure. Nice Job, but yeah this should be in Writers Corner. Welcome to LPF "Goth"! Quote
Goth Posted July 8, 2005 Author Posted July 8, 2005 thanks guys your gonna have to bear with me in the whole writers cornes thing, i haven't been in here this long so at the min everything goin a bit tits up!!!! It's not really anything to with sadistic acts, it was just about what i was goin through at the time when i wrote it. But thanks for the comments, i really appreciate them Quote
uwantme2b Posted July 8, 2005 Posted July 8, 2005 It's very good. Nice writing. I can see what everyone else means saying it's suicidal, but personally it doesn't bother me. Sometimes writing is the only way we can express ourselves on these things, and suicide is a real issue. Yeah, nice lyrics Goth. ^^ Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/9b54002b9ea728de39c3770316d52169.jpg Shark picture by Graham Lambert Rep me please :-)
lpfan95 Posted July 10, 2005 Posted July 10, 2005 good jop on the song Quote [broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/1520/lpfan95sig24ql.png
chazgurl Posted July 10, 2005 Posted July 10, 2005 awsome lyrics,the song sounds great :thumbsup: Quote [broken External Image]:http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/...zgirlsig7ux.png
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