Hyper Posted July 14, 2005 Posted July 14, 2005 Early one May morning My stomache started to churn My world was soon to change I'd be left with no where to turrn As I look back, I should have known Everything was out of place And then it happened Thank God only she saw my face Now it's more than a month later In fact it's more than two I still haven't become a hater What the fuck should I do? My world upside down My head spinning Apparently God has a plan for me But it has nothing to do with winning Night after night As I lay in my bed I start crying Images of her in my head She'll never know how I truly feel That's the way it has to be I love her with all my heart But the only one that feels that way seems to be me As I sit on the sideline And watch everyone live their life Horrific thoughts flood my mind Maybe I should take my own life I've tried everything else But to no avail That's the way my life is to be I'll always be the one to fail As she moves on I'll still be here When she forgets me She wont shed a tear Will I always feel incomplete? Will I always be the one to beat? All I can do is pray Pray that she'll change her mind That she'll see the big picture And that I can't live without her Quote Dec 13, 2004 -------- Joined LPF as the 2351st Member Apr 30, 2005 -------------------------- Promoted to Elite http://www.lpstreetteam.com/CDA5240F87574D8387EBDE8FEC733210/tracklink.asp?guid=8F1721DCBF774CCA9064DA56BC6E7DD8
Vash_the_Stampede Posted July 14, 2005 Posted July 14, 2005 Damn dude, that was deep. Good job. Quote Good bye, auf wiedersehen, adiós, sayonara Gone
gaia89 Posted July 15, 2005 Posted July 15, 2005 i like this =) Quote Email: jiamin89@hotmail.com http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/981ff142ac4c3ed391fddac3619480e8.jpg
brokenangel Posted July 16, 2005 Posted July 16, 2005 wow.... it's like a love poem, but not all that mushy-gushy crap..it's really deep! Quote
Shadow_Serpent Posted July 17, 2005 Posted July 17, 2005 i can relate perfectly to this poem. very emotional and inspiring >.> :thumbsup: Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/6d904e9fab4dcd2e39de1caf6a339f56.gif Official Fort Minor Foot Soldier OFFICIAL FORT MINOR MILITIA MEMBER!
4gottenSoul666 Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Aww...what a beautiful poem. Man, I wish I was that good. *Wishes I could write that good even though people tell me I'm good* Your poem is inspiring. Great job! Quote
acdcrules04 Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 *hugs* i'm so sry isaac, it is a beautiful poem, you know that you can always talk to me Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/bb2dcf01aaef6417df375864d8457158.gif myspace|peta2
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