Pyro_Storm Posted July 17, 2005 Posted July 17, 2005 Hide and seek You cant find me Aggression is too strong Play the puppet master Cover your tracks While I take this Bullet straight to my Heart Don’t tell me things Say stuff im doing When I know it Is the truth Put on a mask while I take this bullet Right into my Heart Clog the air ways Fill the gaps Open the newly healed wounds Laugh out loud at the pain Clenching my jaw Stabbing my wounds Taking the last bullet to My heart to dull this Everlasting regret, pain Guilt and sorrow.. Just to see the look on your face… Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/5d41cad541cb99e851cc86e189b31b53.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/760db76fa57a9e3c2a63d299d03c32c7.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/c420507aea37de91fb9a2b6b73a6e595.jpg
brokenangel Posted July 17, 2005 Posted July 17, 2005 whoa... it's like i could feel it. intense Quote
Marizka Posted July 18, 2005 Posted July 18, 2005 omg u 2 get a room no, you do. and lock yourself in it. anywayz..very good poem, as brokenangel said: intense. that's the right word. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/1f3f1672c41a196591ae77f9d8e11a0a.jpg This one world vision Turns us in to compromise What good's religion When it's each other we despise Damn the government Damn their killing Damn their lies Placebo-Sleeping With Ghosts
immortal89 Posted July 18, 2005 Posted July 18, 2005 ^indeed, that is intense Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8718bef602fa810e1299dc63e8069e3a.jpg
gaia89 Posted July 19, 2005 Posted July 19, 2005 ^indeed' date=' that is intense[/quote'] i agree with this too.. Also,the imagery's good.. i love these lines: Clog the air ways Fill the gaps Open the newly healed wounds Laugh out loud at the pain Clenching my jaw Stabbing my wounds Taking the last bullet to My heart to dull this Everlasting regret, pain Guilt and sorrow.. Quote Email: jiamin89@hotmail.com http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/981ff142ac4c3ed391fddac3619480e8.jpg
4gottenSoul666 Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 This os amazingly intense!!! Emotional, inspiring, and awesome...That is a beautiful poem. Great job! Props to you.. Quote
4gottenSoul666 Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 This is amazingly intense!!! Emotional, inspiring, and awesome...That is a beautiful poem. Great job! Props to you.. Quote
Pyro_Storm Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 Thank you, im glad ppl like it Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/5d41cad541cb99e851cc86e189b31b53.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/760db76fa57a9e3c2a63d299d03c32c7.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/c420507aea37de91fb9a2b6b73a6e595.jpg
Hyper Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 mmk, i'm starting `[cA] (club angst) wanna be in? XD Quote Dec 13, 2004 -------- Joined LPF as the 2351st Member Apr 30, 2005 -------------------------- Promoted to Elite http://www.lpstreetteam.com/CDA5240F87574D8387EBDE8FEC733210/tracklink.asp?guid=8F1721DCBF774CCA9064DA56BC6E7DD8
Pyro_Storm Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 mmk' date=' i'm starting `[cA'] (club angst) wanna be in? XD me? uh.. sure. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/5d41cad541cb99e851cc86e189b31b53.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/760db76fa57a9e3c2a63d299d03c32c7.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/c420507aea37de91fb9a2b6b73a6e595.jpg
Hyper Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 yes, you, rofl, XD, sweet, wewt, x-) Quote Dec 13, 2004 -------- Joined LPF as the 2351st Member Apr 30, 2005 -------------------------- Promoted to Elite http://www.lpstreetteam.com/CDA5240F87574D8387EBDE8FEC733210/tracklink.asp?guid=8F1721DCBF774CCA9064DA56BC6E7DD8
Pyro_Storm Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 yes' date=' you, rofl, XD, sweet, wewt, x-)[/quote'] hehe im blonde , what do you expect? Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/5d41cad541cb99e851cc86e189b31b53.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/760db76fa57a9e3c2a63d299d03c32c7.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/c420507aea37de91fb9a2b6b73a6e595.jpg
Hyper Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 meh.. i'm.. brunnetted/blacked, rofl, idk.. Quote Dec 13, 2004 -------- Joined LPF as the 2351st Member Apr 30, 2005 -------------------------- Promoted to Elite http://www.lpstreetteam.com/CDA5240F87574D8387EBDE8FEC733210/tracklink.asp?guid=8F1721DCBF774CCA9064DA56BC6E7DD8
Pyro_Storm Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 meh.. i'm.. brunnetted/blacked' date=' rofl, idk..[/quote'] ok so its a dark blonde but i still got the ditzzyness Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/5d41cad541cb99e851cc86e189b31b53.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/760db76fa57a9e3c2a63d299d03c32c7.gifhttp://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/c420507aea37de91fb9a2b6b73a6e595.jpg
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