bam_bam_darkslide Posted November 9, 2005 Posted November 9, 2005 Acrostic Poem F-ighting for a reason A-dding dead bodies in tranches L-osing every soldiers' L-ife as they tightly hold on E-ternal like devastation N-umbing sensation as they release their souls A-s the guns are being fired L-eaving their beloved families L-oved, but now they stumble I-nnocent lives being crushed E-very soul prays for victory S-atisfactory had settled them *Emotion Poem* War is fog grey It smells like soldiers' blood It tastes like rusted metal It feels like my flesh is burning It sounds like bombs being set off It looks like dirt smeared on soldiers' skin War is like being trapped in a burning house *Cinquain Poem* War Fearsome, destructive Shooting, screaming, dying Leaving their beloved families Battle well, thats all i did... Quote [broken External Image]:http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y12/Shadow_Serpent/darkslidesig.jpg Madd props go to Shadow_Serpent ::~proud member of the CoS::candle lighter~:: I'll drag your body to the car as blood races down my arms
Jacx Posted November 14, 2005 Posted November 14, 2005 wow...i like 'em! specially the acrostic poems... nice job Quote [broken External Image]:http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y216/jacx_lp_chazluver/mikeybanner11.jpg I'll never let them hurt you, I promise http://www.myspace.com/jjacxter
bam_bam_darkslide Posted November 17, 2005 Author Posted November 17, 2005 thank you! Quote [broken External Image]:http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y12/Shadow_Serpent/darkslidesig.jpg Madd props go to Shadow_Serpent ::~proud member of the CoS::candle lighter~:: I'll drag your body to the car as blood races down my arms
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