What do I have to do to Write a Good Story?

[bam_bam_darkslide]

omg. school is giving me a major head throb. i don't know how to write a story anymore!!!! i know poems, yes, but not a story! im worried about the story i wrote for english class...the teacher there is real cool, but when it gets to assignments...no one can get a good mark. last year, i was the best writer there is. i have a friend that gives me feedback from a story im undergoing, and she begs me to write some more, but i cant post it here because the audience here is different.-_-...what should i do...azem gave me some advice before, but then i got messed up, so, yeah.

[Shadowed Heart]

Maybe you should try reading other stories that people have been complimentned on, or ones that you think are good. I'll give you a couple stories for you to read if you want, but there are already alot of really good staries in LPF, alot of talented people here, but I'm sure you're still a good writer. Let's see somthing you've writtne. We won't say anything negative, we're not monsters. The worst thing that could happen is us giving you some advice. I'm sure you're a very talented writer. Maybe a little late... but thought I'd still say somthing. What happened with that paper? I'm sure you've gotten a grade on it by now...

~Riss

[psychobunnyyel-yor]

take it from your mind and be random, live for the moment and keep the charater in mind, i have alter egos that help, yel-yor is my chester alter ego and kelly notte is my alter ego and derek is a werid, spaz-out psyhobunyy alter ego, i have loads, alter egos are different charaters i make up and act like in their charater, it does not mean i am schizo, like previously denoted, i am sort of sane (depends on my mood) and my charaters aren't real but they sometimes come out in my personality and it's funny

much love

kels