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been thinking/working on writing one...need some characters....need some opions...if im gunna write it that is....what do u guys want in it?

 

more guns, nun, sluts, cuts, violence, gore, crappy ass story lines?

 

lemme know....My writing has been enhanced with steriods so hopefully we wont have a shitty ass ending or anything

¿whysoserious?
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I wanna be a character Azem!! *jumps up and down with her hand raised* your stories are fine the way they are. suprise me you know I'll read it

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Ohh I've heard about LPF Con 1 and 2, I'll have to read this one :p I wouldn't mind being a character... tehe. And violence and gore is always entertaining XD

i still love you, girl from mars.

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i need names for u dudes...not like black angel i need like sam, jo, beth....names like that

 

 

i made 1 chapter...i wanna make the whole story so that when i post it i wont just post half the story and never finish also so that i can take my time

 

I think LPF Con 1/2 were good but the whole story was kinda weak...there was no purpose...i won best story on lpf...but i kinda despised them...this one...Hopefully will overall be kickass

¿whysoserious?
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i want to be in it too....plzplzplzplzplzpzl.....err if u need a name for me just call me um........what should i call myself....i'll be my name...whats my name again....oh yeah!!! Rachel. Now I remember....plzplzpzlpzlz let me be in this....*why do i sound desperate?*

Hi.

cram it.

you're pretty ugly

hahaha

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If I do end up finishing it this is a taste of what you'll be reading

 

“Mark. Sit down. Please, just take a sit and that raggedy, rusty, possibly unsafe chair. But don’t do it because your legs are possibly tired from standing for such a long period time. Do it because if you don’t your cranium will be permanently removed from the rest of your skeleton. Do it because if you don’t I’ll make sure nuts don’t even get buried underneath the ground with the rest of that piece of shit you call a body.”

 

So im just on chapter 3

¿whysoserious?
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Ooo, id like to be in it... tho i dunno, if ya want *hint hint*

 

The names' Meaghan if ya wanted to know... *HINT HINT* lmfao

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Oh plz plz plz!!! *begs* I'll give u a cookie! *offers cookies*

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Oh plz plz plz!!! *begs* I'll give u a cookie! *offers cookies*

 

 

I found a perfect spot for you :D

 

 

Rachel walked into the dusty building looking around in amazement. She pulled out a flashlight and flipped it on. She looked ahead and what she saw gave her the chills. She turned around to Stenners. “Are you getting this stuff?” She asked. But Stenners wasn’t there.

 

A preview of chap dos

 

 

 

im on chapter 4 right by the way

¿whysoserious?
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I think I died in the last one, so I can't be in this one :( lol. I'm looking forward to reading it though.

 

Edit: Yep, after rereading the last chapter of LPF Convention 2, I certainly did die :)

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Well heres the thing. LPF Con 3 has nothing what so ever to do with the last two....so that means anything can happen...i might not add to much more ppl in becuase i have a certain storyline and if i just added in random people it might throw off the whole thing, but post in here if u wanna be in just incase i need an extra....

 

I think the name will be

 

LPF Convention III : The Sophistic Cogitation

¿whysoserious?
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POST some of it PLEASE!

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Ryu stood up and dusted the dirt from his pants. He picked up his dodgers fitted and put it on his head. “I’ll go out with ya Tak, just lemme get a beer. Yo Josh! Pass me a beer!” An acne-faced teenager ran up and tossed Ryu a cold miller genuine draft. “Thanks man, I really need this.” Josh nodded and ran back to the Cheapshot’s equipment. “That’s the thing I love about being on tour…we get the best groupies. Haha I just wish we had more ladies…haha nah what I mean?” Ryu laughed.

“Haha if your wife heard what you were saying she’d kick your ass.” Mike laughed rubbing his eyes. “I guess we better get down there and sign some shirts.”

 

heres a preview of chapter tres

¿whysoserious?
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why dont u post some chapters!??! PLEASE!!! *begs* *offers more cookies*

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Well personally having more than one character with the same name would be confusing for the reader, so as much as I'd like in I'll opt out. (Name is also Rachel. Hmm).

Anyway, as for my imput; as an avid fan fic reader I'll tell you what I don't like; slashies. I'm not sure that's even allowed here which suits me fine, love is good but not in that context.

I do like drama. I like a degree of realism, even if it's set in an unrealistic (created) environment. For the element of amusement, violence, guns, sluts and all that degenrative crap is nice too. But I like stories with a purpose of some sort.

Yes, a plot. Ho-hum. Otherwise it's an endless fount of mindless drivel. Personally I think posting in sections is a better option, cause it gives you a sense of what works as the story progresses but that's just my opinion. Posting in one lump sum means the story isn't corrupted by anyone else's way of thinking,.... but still, it could end up shallow and not live up to it's full potential. Just a thought.

Anyway, best of luck with it. Look forward to eventually reading it.

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but... plz post some!!! i hate it when i knwo somebodys writing something and i cant read it

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