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You pretty much hit the nail on the head. Yeah its not a slashie. ew. Im trying my best to have a plot becuase like you said without it its just shit. On pretty much all of my previous stories i just based it around really descriptive battles and thats it there was no reall story lines...i just ended it with some no sense making ending.

 

So heres the whole plot

 

2 lead characters

 

Rachael and Shani.

 

Both have to diffrent things.

 

Shanis just a teen going to a fort minor concert with her friends and brother. when she goes weird shit starts happening

 

Rachael is a reporter. Stenners is her cameraman they go to an abandoned church after rachael is tipped off about a possible supernatural or just damn freaking things happening there

 

some how both of their lives get tied up and a villian is exposed...but theres a really crappy twist i came up with....muahahaha

¿whysoserious?
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can i be the Villian(ess)???

lmfao

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plz post some!!! I wanna be an evil person! w00t for evilness

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i agree with fox I cant wait to see it azem *jumps up like a moron* ok I'll stop. you know you have my ear for it

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when the hell are u gonna post this thing?

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youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote']

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when i finish babe, see this shit is actually be worked on...ive leaked some info to certain peeps and that info will be out soon.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Azem is not a main Character In this story. There are two focused on Characters. Imagine playing Halo 2 and you have an idea of what it'll kind of be like.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yup Very Soon

¿whysoserious?
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ahhhh, i see..... hmmmpf... *sits and waits....reluctently(sp?)*

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Posted
i did.... and i still wanna read it!!! -_-

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“Lipstick?”

She grabbed the picture from Hamid’s hand and frowned. “What would lipstick be doing there?”

“Because the killers a chick.”

“How do you know he didn’t kill a female?”

“If someone was about to kill you would you take time to put on lipstick?”

“Could be a pre-op transvestite.”

“Could be’s are about as useful as you are in bed.”

“Shut up Hamid!”

 

Quote from Chap Cinco

 

 

Cuz i love yall :thumbsup:

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Posted
lmao.... nice azem

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aww mann how much longer r u gonna make us wait? *pulls up chair and stares at screen* im not moving untill you post the story

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