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--- Nothing special xD --

 

Help Me

 

A little human is left alone

Crawling in shadows, oh, it's so cold

Out of the chest right into the light

One-way ticket, a likely short flight

One dry tear goes down his single bone

Crashes the floor like a heavy stone

There was no soft breast made of silk

That ever cried a single drop of milk

 

And so this is why my fate

Is to never have any faith

In the heart, another crate

Am I too early or too late

 

His head slowly tries to move down

His blind eyes can touch the ground

He cannot see the light or the night

Forever lying in eternal dawn

Angels climb down a sunray

They'll seek him forward from this day

A shining light waits on paradise

This will be his only compromise

 

And so this is why my fate

Is to never have any faith

In the heart, another crate

Am I too early or too late

 

The angels seek me

 

Help me

Help me

The angels are gonna get me (the angels seek me)

[x4]

 

They surround me, there's no escape

They approach me, they're now my mates

They elevate me, I'll meet my mum

Going up, towards the sun

 

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Left Alone

 

I wander with no place to go

Walking through where I don't know

Trying to remember the way back home

But seems there is no trace and I'm left alone

 

I pick up a stone a step from the edge

I throw it inside

Just like you have put me aside

 

Left alone

I won't survive

Left alone

I can't even stay alive

Left alone

Being Left alone feels so terribly weak and cold

Time goes by and I feel I'm just getting old

 

What am I supposed to live for

There is no real life for me anymore

Lying down I stare at the sky

Oh, how it's high

I just wish and hope you die

 

Left alone

I won't survive

Left alone

I can't even stay alive

Left alone

Being Left alone feels so terribly weak and cold

Time goes by and I feel I'm just getting old

 

Left alone

 

Lying down I stare at the sky

Oh, how it's high

I just wish and hope you die

 

Left alone

I won't survive

Left alone

 

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And i made this one changing some words of Dumb Lyrics xD

 

DUMB

 

The world is filled with things not making sense

Feeling so blind, lost under my mind

Don't know why my head's getting so dense

It can't be just me cuz nobody understands this *crap*

(What the hell is wrong with me, what the hell is wrong)

Nothing of what I see does make any sense to me

(What the hell is wrong with me, what the hell is wrong)

 

.I've become so dumb Now I'm not so wise

.Can't distinguish the desert from some polar ice

.I need to do something or get the hell outta here

.I don't wanna stand on the edge of fear

 

Why hell can't I see anything straight

Not that I'm drunk but I wouldn't need to be

'Cuz everything that this world was for me

Is falling apart in front of my eyes

(What the hell is wrong with me, what the hell is wrong)

Everything is rotating, spinning and causing pain

(What the hell is wrong with me, what the hell is wrong)

This unstoppable fear will just explode my brain

 

.I've become so dumb Now I'm not so wise

.Can't distinguish the desert from some polar ice

.I need to do something or get the hell outta here

.I don't wanna stand on the edge of fear

 

BUT I KNOW

EVERYTHING CAN SOON BE GETTING FINE

BUT I KNOW

IF YOU WANNA KEEP THIS WORLD THE WAY IT IS JUST COME ON SING

 

.I've become so dumb Now I understand

.It is all your fault, I won't take your demand

.Just keep the mind clean, keep the sanity

.Or else screw this world, fuck humanity

 

.I've become so dumb Now I'm not so wise

(BUT WHAT THE HELL DID JUST HAPPEN TO ME)

.I've become so dumb Now I'm not so wise

(BUT WHAT THE HELL HAS JUST GOTTEN INTO ME)

 

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xD

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lol "DUMB", um there all right. But one thing u should consider (which i'm trying to do at the mo, and its hard.) is don't be so negitive, i started writing stuff for a new song and it was all negitive, probably because im trying to be like L.P. (because i listen to them all the time), so i'm tryin to write a song with some meaning, a moral, and story, something thats proper, not just negitive.

I'm not trying to dis you XD.

I geuus its just part of being a good writer.

 

Note: even tho LP's song are still negitive, they seem to dwell on neutral topics, that y i never get bored with there lyrics!

:D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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thanks for the coment d00d \m/ but actually, i made some songs quite positive i think, maybe those are the "most negative ones" or somethin..

and LOOOOL! Dumb, we (i and one friend) did it while we were listening to Linkin Park. I Started "Ive become so duuuumb" and we wrote it.

My favourite (of those 3) is Left Alone. Wat u think of Left Alone?

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they are a good effort.

I write alot and all i seem to write about is negative stuff.

It seems harder to write about positive stuff.

*shrugs*

unless its just me.

Over and out,

.::[hP]::.

 

 

in this farewell

there is no blood, no alibi.

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