My worlds Caving in....A story

[By_My-elf]

Okay this is Based on a true story about a friend of mine

This happened not to long ago

and sorry for the bad Grammer -.- I'm not good at it >.<

but heres the story hope you guys like it ^^;

 

This Girl her Name was Claire Mckay,

She was a normal person but thats what they thought,

She was secretive,Constantly Angry.

 

As she was snapping out of her deep sleep,

She layed their tired Thinking to her-self "Shit just another day."

 

Claires mom walked through the door,

Claires mom was a happy lady, but she secretly worries over her Daughter

Constantly, Givin her hints all the time but Claire didn't care.

"WHAT!?" Claire shouted to her mother

Her mother replied saying "I'm just making sure your up and make your-self breakfast The bus should be here soon."

Claire just looked at her mom and said,

"Get out, Can't change with you in here unless you wanna watch."

Her mom Chuckled Than said "okay I'm sorry"

Her mom left the room laughing,

While Claire was changing,

She thought about The upcoming:

"Hi Claire","Is everything okay claire?","Hows your mom claire?".

Claire was already getting annoyed From just the thought of her

High school teachers asking her the same old questions.

 

She quickly ate her breakfast, after she was done she ran to the

washroom,

Putting some hair products on, Then she washed her face.

 

Claires mom Shouted through out the house "C'mon claire The bus is here."

 

She took one more look in the mirror "Shit it's too fucking early"

She quickly grabed her black vest on her floor,

Running to the school bus.

As she walked onto the bus,

their was no fre seat she stood up the whole ride,

Claire did'nt really notice.

Looking out the window thinking about what she should do,

"What To do hhhmmm I'll quickly go to the store Buy a cup of coffee,and try to catch my first class."

 

The big yellow vehicle came to a stop

She got pushed and shoved

She than shouted loudly "FUCKIN HOLD ON!!!"

 

The childrens laughter and screamin came Silence.

Claire thought nothing of it, She continued walking out of the yellow thing

they called a bus.

 

Claire stood outside having a cigarette with her friends,

They stood in a circle talking,teasing,laughing,.

 

Okay I'll post a bit more later

Remember this is based on a true story about a friend of mine

and the situation she's in I'll be in the story later on

but I'm not the main charectar

My friend on her is

The story is true but the names have been changed

okay please keep reading would

be appreciated ^^

[Jeezy]

I'm excited how it carries on...

[By_My-elf]

okay I just went to go get my cooking started -.-;

here's some more that I said I would post ^^;

 

She forgot that she was going to head to the Store,

Still talking teasing and laughing with her friends.

The Bell for her first class rang,

She said to her friends before she left

"Oh fuck I was gonna head to the store, Might as well just go to class"

She than Sigh'd.

 

Walking into the porch, She played her MP3 Put the Volume on Max

To ignore all the crap she usually heard every morning.

 

Walking through the hallways seeing it busy full of students,

going to their class'.

 

Claire arrived at her locker Tired as hell pulling her books out,

She continued on to her classroom.

Her teacher said Cheerfully "Hello Sit down we're just starting."

 

Well sorry thats all I got down so far I've been writing this in my note book ^^;

and now theirs no-more -.-;

I'll be writing more often for this story

I promised my friend I would base a story on her ^^

[crazy robster]

I'm excited to see what direction it takes Shaun....

[By_My-elf]

Claire Looked at her class and saw no-one intersting to sit with

She looked around for an Empty seat,

She found one in the corner of the class and took her seat their.

 

She sat alone thinking about the same things she usually done

each day.

Her Teacher than asked "Claire Can you come up and answer a few questions"

Claire looked up and took the loud earphone she had in her ear

and tugged it out and asked "What?"

He than said "Oh sorry but no music allowed during class and come please answer a few questions"

Claire replied angrily "NO It's TOO FUCKING EARLY FO0R THIS SHIT I'M JUST GONNA SIT AND LISTEN!!"

Her teacher said "Okay I'm sorry can you atleast turn your musci down so you could hear what I"m teaching"

Claire grabbed her books and walked out of her class room

she saw her friend Gary Sainnawap

He asked "hey claire where you going?"

Claire just looked and said "the store, I'm just not up for this boulshit dismorning"

Gary just said "Yeah no-shit well C'ya"

Claire just continued on walking.

one of her teachers asked "WHERE YOU GOING!?!?!"

She stared at her teacher "and Said whats it to you whyn't you fuck off!!"

Claire continued on walking through the long hallway

looking at the porch she walked through the doors

and saw another one of her friends

"Hey" Claire said,then her friend looked and said "Hello the morning is always shit aye?"

Claire Replied "It always is and always will be."

as she was walking out the front of her schools door.

her friend shouted out "HEY WHERE YOU GOING!!??"

Claire looked back at her friend saying "I'm just going to the store have a cup of coffee"

Her friend's name was Kerry.

Kerry was a bright person but always overcomed with the feelings of stress,anger, and annoyance from evereyone around her she was a nice person thats if you never got on her nerves.

Keery said "I'm commin too"

Claire responded "Go ahead I don't own you or anything"

Kerry started laughing.

 

They were at the store Claire hated the store cause

their were so many Old men older than her in their 40's

and always checking her out and tlaking their fantasies about her.

One whistled.

Claire turned back with fire in her eyes "FUCK OFF MAN YOUR TOO FUCKING OLD YOU SICKO".

 

They were inside and Cliare saw her cousin working at the cashier

her cousins name was Jessy

Jessy was the kinda girl that drank often,she was a quiet person but

once you get to know her she's fun.

 

She walked to her cousin jessy

and said "Hey whats up?"

Jessy looked and said "Oh hi,nothing much really just being bored"

Claire just chatted with her for a while and then went to go get her

Coffee in a little restaurant that was connected to the store,

She walked in and Said "Large Coffee"

The clerk said "Okay that would be 1.75$"

Claire handed the clerk the money and walked outta their

kerry was at the bank talking to her friend their.

 

Claire just went back to school without her.

she was walking and noticed it was already break time

And saw her friends standing around having a smoke

Her friends always done that every break.

 

Okay this is it for now I'm gonna have to update in a few minutes -.-; just going out side for a smoke I need some time to think ^^;

[crazy robster]

Interesting Shaun...Just making me so curious about what's next...

[Jeezy]

Yeah...Shaun go on with it please....

[By_My-elf]

As her friends turned back and saw her comming CLAIRE!!!

CLAIRE they shouted.

She looked up pulled her earphones out of her ears...

"Heh?" she replies with

They ran towards her saying did you hear

"Hear about what?" Claire said.

Than Gary told them "don't say anything To her"

They didn't tell her anything at all

Claire looked up and said "Don't tell me what?"

 

The bell to the second class went

Claire just started walking to the stairs wondering what she hadn't heard

she saw her friend Kaiden

Kaiden was a Pretty funny girl she acted her-self

and acted retarded like her cousin, She was a fun person to talk to

one of Claires best friend she would be Glad to see not like claires other friends.

 

And Kaiden Told Claire "Party Tonight"

Claire answered "where?"

kaiden said "I don't know yet"

Claire just said "Why are you telling me and you don't know yet..."

Kaiden started laughing "oh shit I have to go now"

Claire just said "bye nice seeing you"

 

Claire continued on walking through the livened hallways

Full of students she felt sick of seing the same old faces,

She finally reached her classs room and walked through the door

her Teacher asked "Why are you late?"

Claire just looked at the board and started copying her Notes down ignoring her teacher..

 

Then Claire was so deep into thought she almost didn't hear the Lunch bell go

Her teacher snapped her out of it by reaching over and tapped her shoulder

Claire almost jumped off her seat "WHOA YOU ASSHOLE DON'T DO THAT!!"

Her teacher stared and said "I'm sorry about that but it's lunch"

Claire walked out the door sunning down the hallway

Scared she would miss her bus...the bus was just about to close the door.

but she got their in time and stopped it..and jumped on.

[crazy robster]

You're getting so mysterious Shaun...I wonder why all this secrecy...More?

[By_My-elf]

LOL I'm just typing stuff i know about her...this story is based on my cousin ^.^

And pretty soon I should be in the story but that won't be for another while

its when she goes out to hang around with her friends than I'm in the story for a while -.-; but I'll have a diffrent name too -.-;

[xLMiRoChezPx05]

Hey Shaun... I would love for you to keep going forward with the story, please?

 

You have me intriguied. I can't wait for more! :thumbsup:

[By_My-elf]

As she rode home Claire was expecting another day

another normal usual day to her, she just felt bored

She was going to head home and do her usual chores

as she listened to her music looking out the window of the bus

she saw her friend and waved and sat back down

Sighing thinking that just gonna go home do my chores and

go visit my cousin at work, and than go and get high

she got up and walked off the piece of shit bus

she Claire ran inside and closed the door

and looked back and saw her older brother standing their

and said "Whoa shit you Freaked the shit outta me"

her bro started laughing and Asked for a smoke

as she pulled it outta her black vest

she grabbed the pack of smokes out and handed them to her older brother

she walked into the kitchen and grabbed somthing quick to cook and eat

After Claire started cooking it she walked over to her room and threw her vest

to the florr and layed on her bed thinking

about all the shit happening in her life

Claire got caught up in her deep thought and didn't realise that

her food was burning

Her sister Elizabeth Shouted out "WHOS COOKING!!!"

Claire jumped up and ran to the kitchen and turned the oven off

and ate her lunch down quick and looked at the clock

realising it was the bus was goin to come soon

Claire ran over and grabbed her vest from her floor

and ran outside Grabbed her lighter from her ants and a Smoke

from her pack she had a quick smoke before the bus showed up

as she butted her smoke out

the bus was comming she ran down the little road and jumped on

she was on her way to school in the piece of shit

it was barely even holding it's-self up

 

Well sorry that I haven't updated

I was just busy these days and I finally wtrote some stuff down

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