Pheonix791989 Posted June 25, 2006 Posted June 25, 2006 man, hey savanna, dont make me hurt you. thats my rob. well.... most days. great chapter it was really good. like i said before leave it to chester to ruin a moment. he certaintly has the gift Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
andrea Posted June 25, 2006 Posted June 25, 2006 Omg! I just realized that I've been spelling Savanna's name wrong I most of my reviews *slaps self on forehead*. I loved this update. Aww, there love in the air, but damn Chester to have to go and run the moment, hehe. When you manage, can't wait the next update. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/9817f20118b56e96c66653dc59770583.jpg RIP Scott Kalitta, who lost his life during an NHRA race (6/21/08). Projekt Revolution - 8/9/08 - Mountain View, CA. Secrets
MysteryLpChick Posted June 25, 2006 Author Posted June 25, 2006 Omg! I just realized that I've been spelling Savanna's name wrong I most of my reviews *slaps self on forehead*. I loved this update. Aww, there love in the air, but damn Chester to have to go and run the moment, hehe. When you manage, can't wait the next update. Oh, don't worry there is more than one way to spell her name, I believe Quote LiveJournal | MySpace
Ravynlee Posted June 26, 2006 Posted June 26, 2006 Haha - yeah, Chas has the knack for speaking his mind, regardless the situation, huh? XD Gotta love it. As for Rob and Savanna... hmm... wonder how Angela's gonna take to having this 'crazy lady' hanging off her father if anything was to come of this... situation. Not that either one could be blamed for it anyway, the whole world's going to hell... why not seek comfort where you can get it I reckon But Mel, *ahem* I thought Rob was mine too? XD Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8a6798b252d89e12b3d476bb0fa63027.jpg ~ If I'm not here, I'm there ^ ~ ~ All new general discussion forum ~ Click pic !!! ~
Pheonix791989 Posted June 26, 2006 Posted June 26, 2006 you can have him too, but still lets take him to the moon with the other respectable looking guys and start a colony Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
MysteryLpChick Posted June 26, 2006 Author Posted June 26, 2006 you can have him too' date=' but still lets take him to the moon with the other respectable looking guys and start a colony[/quote'] Man, look what I started. ROB-FANGIRLS ARE TAKING OVER THE STORY!!! EVERY ROB HATER RUN FOR THEIR LIFE! OR GIRL THAT TRYING TO STEAL HIM AWAY FROM THEM But I like have Rob-fangirls read my story... consider, I have a confession to make that I'm myself is a Rob-fangirl... working on update now Quote LiveJournal | MySpace
Pheonix791989 Posted June 26, 2006 Posted June 26, 2006 yay! wait im a fan girl? your welcome to the club of rob fan girls. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Ravynlee Posted June 26, 2006 Posted June 26, 2006 So this is what I have become - a mere fangirl? *lol* Only joking, I am a fan and the whole damn world knows it too. But aside from the fact Rob's an 'easy' character to write about (cause he is so quiet and mysterious you can pretty much 'invent' him in many respects) you write so well and descriptively and with appropriate pace (wish I could do that! but then I wouldn't be the ranter, huh?) that it's enjoyable to read regardless the fact who's in it. Even though I don't really reply much to your other one this one, at least plot-wise, grabs my interest... and that's to be commended. I look forward to your updates, and all the other updates of my other fav stories on here. When I read a great update it makes my day. Between you and Sarah and Fox and Rashell I'm having an awesome time here lately! Thanks for keeping me entertained, even a little... anxious when an update calls for it! Oh and Mel - I'll consider that proposal and get back to you, okay? *hugs* ~Rav Oh - and welcome to the club. Bourdist or Bourdonite? Either way... it's all good! \m/ Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8a6798b252d89e12b3d476bb0fa63027.jpg ~ If I'm not here, I'm there ^ ~ ~ All new general discussion forum ~ Click pic !!! ~
MysteryLpChick Posted June 26, 2006 Author Posted June 26, 2006 Chapter 12 Frozen Heaven Decision and Living Savanna rolled over bumping into something hard. Her eyes fluttered open, and she almost jumped out of her skin. She at up quickly checking to see if she still had her clothes on, she sighed. Happy that she still had her clothes on, but she was still a bit frighten that Rob was lying next to her. She did not even remember when or how they fell asleep. She looked over at the far corner of the room, and saw the bucket of now warm water, and the bloody sweatshirt. Rob slept next to her, snoring quite loudly. It did not really bother her at all. She thought it was cute. He turned away from her, his back facing her. Smacking and scratching his leg at the same time. She giggled quietly, shaking her head at him. She looked at the doorway, and saw the Nun holding some folded clothes. The Nun looked over at Rob, and back at Savanna. “I thought you and your friend might need some change of clothes,” she whispered. “Oh, thank you. Do you mind if I use your showers?” Savanna stood up, crossing her arms. “Of course, follow me,” the Nun waved her hand for Savanna to follow her. The Nun led her down the hall into the shower room. “I don’t know how good the water is, but you can at least try. And as for breakfast, well… we don’t have much…” “Don’t worry, but do you have enough for the children and my friend? He might be a bit weak from the lost of blood,” she asked, as the Nun handed her the clothes. “We can see, but I’m not for sure… I have seen your friend’s condition yesterday, and it looked as if he was walking corpses. However, I was quite impressed at how you seem to handle his condition. You nursed him back to health quite faster than I expected.” “Oh, well… I guess it is a gift… I guess. Thank you for the extra clothes.” Savanna nodded her thanks to the Nun, and in return, the Nun said a small prayer for Savanna. Savanna closed the door, and stared at the shower room. It reminded her of your typical shower room, but a lot better than she was use too. There were four sinks with mirrors hanging above them. There was bench at the end of the room, and the four showers in between the shower and the sinks. Savanna closed her eyes, and sighed. Churches made her nervous, but of course, she had a reason to be nervous. She did not have much to believe, and that was that. Rob staggered out of the room, with Angela holding his hand for support. Even thought she was much smaller and much lighter than her father was. She knew he needed her help, she pointed to the closed shower room door. “Come on, daddy. You need to wash your face at least. Get the cookie out your eye.” Rob smiled at his daughter’s words. He opened the door of the shower room, but stopped when he saw one of the shower were in use. He wanted to turn back, but Angela did not seem to understand. “What’s wrong, daddy?” “There’s someone in there using the shower. I don’t think it’s polite to barge in when someone is not fully clothed,” he said, his eyes staring at the slender outline behind the shower curtain. He knew exactly who that was, and he did not feel like being caught in a situation that would leave him uncomfortable. The shower stopped, and Rob pulled hid daughter back and slammed the door closed. He took in a sigh of relief, knowing that the person in the shower room would come out question him or keep it to herself about it. Angela blinked in confusion about it. “Daddy why did you do that, I’m sure they wouldn’t mind at all, besides they were just getting out.” “Um… well, uh… Angela…” Rob stuttered not sure how to go about Angela question. “Unless you wanted to see her naked, because you were standing there for a looong time, daddy,” Angela looked up at her father with a smile “Okay, time to for breakfast,” Rob pushed his daughter down the hallway, did he really want to answer that question, no not really. He hoped he never would. It was not until noon, that everyone met downstairs. Chester chewed on bagel that the Nun was able to find in the kitchen. Savanna declined the offer for food, leaving the Nun quite stun when she asked her how long had not eaten. When Savanna answered seven days, Chester choked on his bagel. Talinda chewed silently, and the children played together. Jamie being the oldest tried being the quieter one, but he figured since there was really no time for having fun he played with them too. Savanna eyed Chester, but her attention turned back to Rob, “So, leader where do we go from here?” “Me a leader,” Rob pointed at himself staring at Savanna, who nodded in response. “I don’t know about that?” “Yeah, I can trust you as a leader. If we haven’t found you we would have been running in circles with bombs on your ass.” Chester smiled at Rob. “Well, I have been thinking… since I’ve found you Chester. I have a hope, but little that we can find the others. Savanna you and that old man told me about the camps, maybe we can go up North before we find Kenji and find the others. Maybe they are in those camps. It is not a guarantee, but we can look… and if that fails we can go to Kenji.” “Yeah, but how do we know which camps to go to without being caught?” Talinda stepped in, crossing her arms, clearly picturing the situation with much thought. “A few miles ahead of here there is an underground station… thousands of rebels and runners go there. Lucky that the government has not found out about the station, since the public doesn’t have access to computers, they have a lot of information on each camp, government post, and many other useful information,” said the Nun. Savanna realized that the Nun was hesitating to give out the information. “I can tell that you didn’t want to give us that information…” “The Priest has been offered money to capture anyone who comes to the church,” the Nun watched as everyone fell silently, glares spread through his or her eyes. “I have nothing to do with this, but he didn’t expect for your friend here to finish the soldiers off. I want you to get out safely, before he awakes.” “You heard her, we better get going before. The God-betrayer tries to turn us in,” said Chester. “I’ll watch you out, just in case he awakes,” said the Nun. Talinda gathered the children, and they followed the Nun outside to their car. Talinda, Chester, and the children hopped in the backset. Chester handed Rob the keys, as Rob shut the driver door. Savanna stopped and looked back at the Nun. “What about you, what would the Priest say when he find us gone?” “… Don’t worry, I’ll be fine… just go, please?” the Nun walked over to Savanna and handed her necklace, she balled Savanna’s hand into a fist. “Please be careful. God will watch over you.” Savanna nodded and got in the car. She closed the door, keeping the necklace in her hand. Rob sped off, leaving the Nun to deal with the wrath of the Priest. _____________________________ Thanks for the beautiful comments. I started to tear up reading yours Rav. I am glad I could entertain you with this story. Writing fan fiction is actually great practice for me, because I take what I know and try new things with my talent---I guess that is what you call it. I mean this story deals with a lot more elements than Mike’s Guide to Surviving High School does, in which that one deals with trials of being a teenager and more dialogue and the new use of first and third person. I guess all this writing really is gearing me up for my very first book, which I completed but working on revising, then trying to publish. I know I was not readying in ninth grade to publish, but now that I am a senior and writing more than before. I have the confidence, and people like you, Phi, and Andrea give me that confidence. Well, I have said a lot. In addition, thanks for letting me be in your club. I have to do a few things, before I post there. I have been thinking of redoing my LPF Journal--since no one posted on it. I might start a version two. 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Pheonix791989 Posted June 26, 2006 Posted June 26, 2006 love the update i cant wait to see if they find the others. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
andrea Posted June 26, 2006 Posted June 26, 2006 That was really nice of the Nun to help the group out. Hope that they can find the others to before something else happen to them. Can't wait for more when you manage to do so. -Rashell Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/9817f20118b56e96c66653dc59770583.jpg RIP Scott Kalitta, who lost his life during an NHRA race (6/21/08). Projekt Revolution - 8/9/08 - Mountain View, CA. Secrets
Ravynlee Posted June 27, 2006 Posted June 27, 2006 ^ agreed! But I am still wary even of her... in this situation who can they really trust??? What if she's just setting them up or something??? But anyway... glad that they found a degree of peace, however brief with the nun etc. Going to find the others sounds dangerous... I hope they all make it through this alive and still relatively sane. Angela's eye cookie was cute. The mounting sexual tension between Rob and Savanna is also developing nicely. Anyway, great as always. Just a sidenote, welcome to the club. And as for the whole journal thing don't take it too personally. If I replied to everyone's journals I'd never have time to do much least of all read or write fan fics. But rest assured I meant what I said before. You've a gift. Believe in yourself and I reckon this gift will take you far. *hugs* Thanks, great, and can't wait for more! ~Rav Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8a6798b252d89e12b3d476bb0fa63027.jpg ~ If I'm not here, I'm there ^ ~ ~ All new general discussion forum ~ Click pic !!! ~
MysteryLpChick Posted June 27, 2006 Author Posted June 27, 2006 Chapter 13 Frozen Heaven Kyle the Saint of Rebels Rob leaned against his car, watching Savanna investigate with Chester the railroad station. What other station could the Nun is telling them about. After a four-hour ride heading into Chicago, Talinda pointed out the old railroad. Savanna gave the suggestion that they should check out, and by few words of name-calling between Savanna and Rob. They came to an agreement that Savanna would be the one check out the place. Rob watched as Savanna appeared down the track. It seemed to him that Savanna came straight out of a movie, with her black hair flying in the wind, and her blue eyes so icy it was scary. She walked up to Rob, and stood beside him taking out a cigarette. “So, what did you find?” he asked finally, after she took a few puffs of her cigarette. “Well, there’s a tunnel down ahead. It is big enough for the car to fit, but I do not know how deep it is. I’m sure my hunch was right, this was the station she was talking about.” Savanna blew out the smoke from within releasing all her tension, or much as possible. “And if your wrong I know who to blame it on,” he said sternly. He was being a bit too harsh towards her, especially with the name-calling. He should not have called her “crazed manic bitch”; it shocked the hell out of Chester and Talinda. He rarely ever called anyone such names, lucky for him the children were sleep. He did not want to be mean towards Savanna; she saved him and his daughter. However, he was running from her, because, well he did not understand it either. Savanna smiled, and headed towards the passenger side of the car, smashing the cigarette under her boot, before she got in. She peered over the hood, watching Rob turning to face the door. “I should be the one to be mad… you watched me take a shower, pretty boy.” Savanna got in giggling at her comeback, leaving Rob blushing red. He huffed and got inside the car. He turned on the car. Chester peered at the two wondering if it was too much tension for either of them to handle. He looked over at Talinda who stared out the window, and then he looked back at Savanna. Chester had to admit Savanna was hot, but she was dangerous. Rob was the quiet and mysterious drummer of the group, who shared fun times and the bad with his friends and family. “What’s up there?” he asked, shaking his thoughts and back to reality. “A tunnel is up ahead…” Rob answered, driving closer and closer to the tunnel. As Rob drove inside, the light became dimmer, the scenery inside the tunnel became dark, and dreary, fallen boards from the tunnel over time, and the smell of rotting pipes, boards, and steel from the railroad. The children awoke realizing that the scenery of day had drastically changed. Angela lifted her head up, and felt fear. She looked out the back window, watching the light becoming smaller and smaller. She looked back, at her father. “Maybe we should turn back… this is starting to remind me of a roller costar almost.” Rob slowly said, getting an unsure feeling. BOOM! Everyone started screaming loudly, as Rob slammed on his brakes. A man jumped on the hood of the car, smiling evilly at them. He had wild black hair that fell into his eyes, wearing black pants and leather jacket with a white ring around the middle of the sleeves. He held a long black stick in his hand; he gripped it tightly ready to smash it into the windshield. Savanna kicked opened her passenger door, and jumped out. She charged the man wrapping her hands around his neck; they both fell off the hood of the car. Rob got out seeing if she was all right, but the man she attacked was willing and ready to fight. The man dropped his stick, but he kicked Savanna in the stomach while they wrestled with each other. Throwing her back into the wall, she got back up and so did the man. Savanna ran towards him kicking him ten times in the side, she thought that she broke a few ribs in the process. He grabbed her by the leg and held her upside down, but she kicked him the face. He dropped her hard into the ground; she got back up to punch him in the stomach. The man stumbled backwards, but he ran towards her. When he came towards her, she did a back flip, kicking him the chin hard. Rob headed in front of his car to watch as the two fist fought. That was the first time that anyone was able to compare to Savanna’s fighting skills. She dug her nails into his neck, while blocking his other arm. With all her strength, she wrapped her hands around his neck she threw him clear across the tunnel. He landed into a pile of cans, crashing loudly, echoing throughout the tunnel. Savanna turned towards Rob, and smiled. “See I could take care of that… you still think that I’m a crazed-manic-bitch?” Rob smiled at her. She leaned against him. Chester stepped out of the car rolling his eyes. Yes, it was too much tension for both of them. Savanna’s icy blue eyes grew wide, and her breath staggered almost as if she was in shock. Rob looked over her shoulder and saw the man standing up smiling at her. Rob felt her lower back and felt a knife sticking out. Savanna closed her eyes, shaking in pain. Rob’s eyes grew wide hoping that this was not the end. “Savanna… I-I’m sorry---” Savanna snapped opened her eyes, taking one hand and reaching for the knife. She pulled out quickly, narrowing her gaze and turning around to stare deeply at the man. “You bastard…” the sound of the knife pulling out of her flesh made both men display looks of disgust over their faces. “Eww…,” they groaned unpleasant. Savanna ran towards the man, she jumped in the air and kicked him in the face. He fell on his side, trying to crawl away, but Savanna grabbed the back of his leather jacket dragging him towards the wall. She pulled him by his black hair. She was ready to smash his head in, but she stopped when he grabbed something that made her uneasy. Rob held his breath, that man had the nerve to grab her butt. “You know you’re kind of cute,” he said slowly. “But your fiery temper is even cuter…” the man stood up, happy that Savanna had released him from her grasp. “You can be perfect as the right hand woman… to the leader of the rebels.” Rob narrowed his eyes, as he watched the man circle her. He stopped and grabbed her by the hips, pulling her closer. Rob wanted to charge the man himself, but Chester stopped him. The man grabbed her chin and brought her lips closer to his, still eyeing her, but he turned his gaze towards Rob. Ron had to mask his anger, but it seemed as if he knew something. Still eyeing Rob, he kissed Savanna gently. Rob watched as Savanna brought her hands to cup the man’s cheek. Did she like what he was doing? Rob was about to pass out from shock and anger, when the man pulled away from her yelling. “You bit my mother-fucking tongue!” he shirked loudly. “I came here for one thing only, and that was to find peace from running everywhere. Now, my friends need your help, and if you want to play silly games with me… I will play games with you. Next time you put your tongue in my mouth… I will bite it clear off. Now, HELP US OR I WILL KILL YOU!” Savanna stood motionless, her eyes burning at the rebel. She clearly was not taking any chance with silly games with pitiful men in her book. ___________ Rav do not worry about the journal, in my sig I opened my own LiveJournal. It gives me a lot more freedom with decorating and different avatars I can us. I do not really mind at all… I am usually busy myself. Quote LiveJournal | MySpace
Pheonix791989 Posted June 27, 2006 Posted June 27, 2006 im gonna bet that the dude kissing savanna is Joe. only joe could be that stupid. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Ravynlee Posted June 28, 2006 Posted June 28, 2006 Haha - game man that rebel leader! XD Aww, Rob's jealous streak comes out - and Chas' usual witty observations, very him. I thought it was poignant that scene where they were driving and Talinda was looking out the window kinda distantly, that with everything happening it was a moment of quiet contemplation. But yeah, great update as usual. Love it. ~Rav Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8a6798b252d89e12b3d476bb0fa63027.jpg ~ If I'm not here, I'm there ^ ~ ~ All new general discussion forum ~ Click pic !!! ~
andrea Posted June 28, 2006 Posted June 28, 2006 I loved the update. Rob sure was jealous, aww that was sweet, hehe. God Savanna sure can kiss some ass. I wonder what going to happen how and if that guy will really help them, hmm. Can't wait for more when you manage. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/9817f20118b56e96c66653dc59770583.jpg RIP Scott Kalitta, who lost his life during an NHRA race (6/21/08). Projekt Revolution - 8/9/08 - Mountain View, CA. Secrets
MysteryLpChick Posted June 28, 2006 Author Posted June 28, 2006 Chapter 14 Frozen Heaven Blackmail, Tension, and an Asshole Savanna stared at the man, as he hissed in pain. His hand over his mouth, and his eyes staring angrily at her, He wiped his mouth off spit and blood, and stood up straight. He coolly walked past Savanna, over to his black stick, He tested it for damages, and then he turned towards Rob and Chester. “My name is Kyle; they call me Saint of the Rebels. I founded the Rebels four years ago, only at the age of sixteen. Originally, the rebels were a bunch of protesters of the Iraq war. However, it transformed into an organization to help people in need,” he said, his eyes staring down at the two men. Talinda got out of the car, and shook her head. She stood beside Chester, and whispered in his ear. “I’ve been watching this whole thing… this guy has a big head.” “I heard that…” Kyle hissed at Talinda, but she did not seem phased by his words. Savanna walked over to her group, and stood beside Rob. Kyle knew from the start when Rob ran out that car that he had something for her. Kyle knew Rob’s soft spot. Four children also hopped out of the car, and headed to their parents. Angela jumped in her father’s arms, and he hugged her gently. Kyle smirked to himself and turned on his heel. “Follow me; we’ll get one of my men to bring your car.” Kyle headed into the darkness, and the group followed. Talinda grabbed her children‘s hands and made sure they all held hands. Chester followed ahead of them, with Rob holding Angela in his arms, and Savanna walked beside Rob. She kept quiet; she did not have anything to say really. Was she aware how Rob felt about the incident? In all honesty, she did not like the fact she had to play along with the kiss. She did not like kissing men she did not trust or took advantage of her. She had too much of that, she had been around men all her life. The tunnel dimly lit, and the sound of their feet against the ground echoing throughout; Kyle walked coolly holding a smirk on his face. Savanna had caught this earlier, she knew he had tricks up his sleeve, but she had a job to do. If anything was to jump off she would be ready to kick his ass again, and she would not stop either, even if he grabbed her ass again. There was opening on the left side of the tunnel where light shone through the tunnel, casting shadows on the other side of the tunnel wall. They turned and they entered a completely new world. There had to be thousands of people working hard, dozens of large tents spread across area. “Welcome to my kingdom. This is the rebel headquarters, where we keep in contact with every rebel around the world,” he waved his hand to follow them. “Follow me, please.” The group followed Kyle; he showed them to an area with computers. “We were able to steal a few computers from our last fight. These are the latest computers around the world. Actually, they are not any new computers, but this is the newest you can get.” “So, how advance is this process?” Chester asked, leaning over one of the computer workers. “We have the best hackers in the whole world. The government hackers are amateurs compared to our hackers. They can find anything,” Kyle nodded to a young girl, around Angela’s age. “This is Malika; she will show you to your tents for tonight.” “Follow me please,” said Malika, eyeing Angela with a happy smile. She had been around rough men almost all her life; it was nice to see a girl around her age. Malika headed towards their tents, and pointed to the food station and showers as she headed for their tents. Kyle smiled as an idea came to mind. He turned to one of the hackers. “I want you to look up that woman with the icy blue eyes.” “Do you know her name?” asked one of the hackers, turning around to face him. “No, but I have an idea… hack into the Washington database we found a few weeks back.” Meanwhile, as Malika showed Rob his tent, Savanna looked over towards the clothes bin. She did not take the clothes the Nun had given her, because she thought that the others needed more than she did. Malika tugged the end of her pants leg. Savanna looked down and smiled faintly at the girl. “You can take a bath at the Hot Springs over in there. It is inside a cave, where the water bubbles are hot. And you change you clothes, we have enough clothes to last us,” she said sweetly. Rob yawned loudly, and looked down at his daughter. “Angela, I know that haven’t been able to spend much time with you, but daddy really tired and weak,” he said kneeling down to meet his daughter’s eyes. “I understand daddy, as long as you never leave me.” Angela touched her father’s cheek, and gave him a pout. “I’ll never leave you, because you know why?” “Why?” Angela tied her hands behind her back, and swayed back and forth on her heels. “Because I’ll always be in your heart… no matter what happens,” Rob leaned towards his daughter and kissed her forehead. “I’ll play with you while your daddy rest, okay?” Malika offered smiling shyly at Angela. “Okay,” Angela said sweetly. Then the two girls ran off playing, the three boys happened to find some more keys playing football. Savanna scanned the area; she could not believe that so many people decided to retreat underground. From all the chaos above ground, they took their abilities and created a city. It was so surreal. She turned around and found that Rob had retired to his room. Talinda and Chester had gone their separate ways, probably exploring the underground city. Savanna wanted to talk to Rob, or maybe she wanted to be next to him. She entered the tent calmly. She stopped in her tracks. Rob had fallen out on mat; he lay on his stomach with his sweatshirt off. She pulled the tent closed, and sighed. “Rob, are you feeling okay?” she asked softly, walking over to him. Savanna kneeled next to him. “Yeah, I’m just tired and my back is sore…” he stared at her giving her a faint smile. “Do you want me to give you a back rub?” she asked, a small smile curved on her face. Rob could not believe his ears. He closed his eyes. “Sure,” he buried his face into the soft pillow. However, he almost chocked in surprised when she felt Savanna straddled his waist. She gently worked magic on his sore back, humming that same song he heard a few days ago. “What’s that song your singing?” he asked softly, he stared at the tent wall before him. “I don’t know… just something that pops in and back into memory sometimes,” she said gently, running her hands down his spine. “You never told me why you were running. I told you why, but you never told me your reason.” Rob did not know why he decided to ask her that question. It just slipped out. He was not going to ask her, because he figured since she was helping him there was no need. “I wish I could explain, but if I told you--you would hate me.” Savanna felt a wave of tears slowly come to her eyes, she blinked them away, but her face burned hot. Rob rose up, causing Savanna to jump off him. He stood up, and so did Savanna. “What are you trying to say? Are you saying that if you told me the truth then I would find out something that would ruin something for you?” “Yes, but its better left alone Rob, let things go along naturally, okay?” She did not get where he was coming from. She saw it as a relationship question. She knew that he felt her and she felt him. “Are you leading us somewhere? Are you working for the government?” Rob did not know what to think either, maybe she was setting them up for a trap. It seemed logical in this world, so why not think it. “No, Rob I would never put you and your daughter in danger like that. You saw me fight those people what’s your problem?” Rob saw that tears were starting to form. She caught his stare and turned away, but he grabbed her arm and twirled her around to face him. He leaned down to touch her lips just once, but he heard an amused laughter enter the tent. They broke apart and saw Kyle, giving them that smirk. “Oh, how my hunch was right? You two are feeling each other… feeling each other real nicely…,” he laughed. “What do you want?” Savanna hissed at him, crossing her arms. “I know something about you… I am sure your friend does not know. Or did you tell him?” “Tell me what? Savanna what is he talking about?” “Savanna… oh, not only was the information we picked up on you right. Your friend does not know. Savanna, or should I say the government’s test dummy. You belong to a lab… you’re the key to the government defense,” Kyle looked at Rob and smiled. “My friend… Savanna here is the government’s secret weapon to this war.” Quote LiveJournal | MySpace
andrea Posted June 28, 2006 Posted June 28, 2006 OMG! She's what! No that can't be right. Wow that was just...I don't know what to say, but just wow. Never saw that coming, hehe. Can't wait for more to come when you manage to do so. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/9817f20118b56e96c66653dc59770583.jpg RIP Scott Kalitta, who lost his life during an NHRA race (6/21/08). Projekt Revolution - 8/9/08 - Mountain View, CA. Secrets
Pheonix791989 Posted June 29, 2006 Posted June 29, 2006 aww maan, robs been out galavanting with the secret weapon? so not cool Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Ravynlee Posted June 29, 2006 Posted June 29, 2006 ^ In his defence he didn't know he was galivanting with the secret weapon... haha... oh so much I could say to this - but I won't Save to say awesome update... I don't trust this rebel leader - I guess it would be hard to exist in this age of sheer chaos without trusting somebody, but still... would hate to be in their situation. Wonder how Rob's gonna take the news. 0_0 Great. Looking forward to more. Enjoyable read. ~Rav Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8a6798b252d89e12b3d476bb0fa63027.jpg ~ If I'm not here, I'm there ^ ~ ~ All new general discussion forum ~ Click pic !!! ~
LPfan4lyfe Posted June 29, 2006 Posted June 29, 2006 kso i just started reading this i have much to catch up on. seems i will become a frequent reader on this story as well. =] Quote [broken External Image]:http://img183.exs.cx/img183/4621/ngd2wc.gif [broken External Image]:http://img84.exs.cx/img84/6002/faintwater3mg.gif thanks mikes_shadow for my avy. PRO Mike&Jazz. ANTI Mike&Anna. PRO foxx&Andy. ANTI-Rob
MysteryLpChick Posted June 29, 2006 Author Posted June 29, 2006 Chapter 15 Frozen Heaven Blue Eyes Rob stared at Savanna with confusion. He could not believe what he just heard, he was he was running around with a secret weapon. So, many questioned plagued him about the past events. Was she the caused of the army attack him and his daughter? He was not for sure, and did not know where to begin with the situation. He looked over at Kyle. It seemed as if Kyle was trying to sabotage something more than friendship. Savanna began to unbutton her black shirt. Rob shook his head, and his eyes wide with surprise. Kyle smiled in amusement and deep interest. Savanna walked over to Rob, pulling her top down slightly, just enough to expose Rob with blush across his face. “What are you doing…?” Rob felt his face becoming hotter and hotter, his eyes darting everywhere but the image in front of him. “Don’t be afraid to look,” she said softly. Rob looked down and saw a barcode on the upper area. “This is what I am to the government… and I didn’t want to be that towards you or anyone else…” Savanna pulled her shirt back up, and turned towards Kyle. “I don’t want to, and nothing you can say or do, Kyle can change my mind. Savanna saved my daughter and me countless of times. And she will always be apart of what I do.” Rob narrowed his eyes at Kyle. Kyle laughed and turned on his heel. When Kyle left, Savanna backed away from Rob with her head lowered. Rob still did not know what to say to her. He was not sure what he told Kyle was what he wanted to say to Savanna. He trusted her, but in reality, it was the simply fact she did not tell him the truth. However, he could understand where she was coming from. She wanted to be known an as human, not a toy like the government made her into. Rob just stared at with a blank look. Savanna sighed, and headed towards the door. “I’m going to try out the Hot Springs… I have to clean my wound anyway.” she left leaving Rob to think over his thoughts. Savanna headed towards the small cave opening. Malika had said there was Hot Springs in there, but before she that she needed to find some clean clothes, or at least a sleeping shirt and pants. She grabbed a few clothes from the clothes bin, and headed towards the Hot Springs. She smiled at the smell of sweet bread and rice being cooked somewhere in small little city of theirs. Savanna entered the cave, and the hot bubbles were lit up with lights hanging from the ceiling. It reminded her of stars in the sky. A cluster of rocks formed up ahead, a great place to change and hide from everyone else. After undressing, she slipped into the hot water and sighed deeply. She really did not want to think, she really just wanted to sit back and relax. She jumped when she heard someone jump in, splashing her. She shook her head, and her eyes narrowed. Kyle swam over to her with a wide smile. She really did not want to see him. “I really hope you have shorts on,” she said bitterly. “I understand your pain, because me and you… we are one in the same…” he swam over to her, and played with her wet hair. “You see I myself was cast away, because of my views and opinions. However, I built upon that… and all those people work for me.” “Your point is?” Savanna asked dryly. “Forget about what others think, and use what you can to survive. To save all humankind, obviously he has not touched those beautiful lips already. Has he put you under his spell… you seen how he reacted. I saw how he didn’t understand his own words… my dear; I’m only thinking what’s best for you.” “Oh, really,” Savanna said sweetly, she crawled over to him and wrapped her arms around him. “You’re the first person to say such kind words to me…” she licked her lips, and touched his cheek. “I knew you would come around… a strong man like me, and a strong woman like you can change this world.” He stroked her backside, smiling at her touch. “You know there’s one thing I hate about men… and that’s the small egos they really have… just like you.” Savanna sounded her words in a sultry matter. She punched in the stomach. She swam away, and got out. Not afraid to show Kyle her bare backside, even though he more in pain than pleasure, Savanna grabbed the clothes she retrieved from the clothes bin earlier, and stalked away. Kyle growled angrily at his failed plan. He wanted her, and he knew that Rob was her eye candy. What made him so special, just because he was in some stupid band? The Kyle smiled, another plan raced through his head. He collected himself out of the water. After he dried himself and changed back into his clothes, he went to visit Rob. Rob sat reading a book on his sleeping mat when Kyle walked in. Rob looked up, and rolled his eyes. He too did not want to see Kyle either. He just wanted to think, unlike Savanna. “I heard you two in here earlier,” Kyle started, smiling. “She sounds so beautiful when she hums… I can’t believe you don’t know that tune?” “Well, without music for four years it’s hard to remember much of anything anymore,” he said, not really interested in the conversation. “It seems you don’t remember much of anything… not even what you use to be. She sings such a fitting song, for the perfect world.” “What the hell are you talking about?” Rob hissed, getting anger at Kyle’s talk. “Don’t get mad at me for just pointing out the obvious… you’re the one who forgot there own song. Don’t you get it she is a secret weapon that could quite possible destroy everything in your path, if she gets mad enough. I mean Rob remember… In The End It Doesn’t Matter How Hard You Try.” Quote LiveJournal | MySpace
andrea Posted June 30, 2006 Posted June 30, 2006 Kyle certainly want to cause trouble for Savanna and Rob, but to what point will he go to cause major trouble for them, especially Savanna? Can't wait for more as always. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/9817f20118b56e96c66653dc59770583.jpg RIP Scott Kalitta, who lost his life during an NHRA race (6/21/08). Projekt Revolution - 8/9/08 - Mountain View, CA. Secrets
Pheonix791989 Posted June 30, 2006 Posted June 30, 2006 wow haunting lyric reminder. really good update. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/905b4d5028c3e3d1ceb11b9069165e4b.jpg "You can't please everyone and trying to do so is the kiss of death."- criss angel
Ravynlee Posted June 30, 2006 Posted June 30, 2006 ^ agreed. On all counts actually. Glad kyle got what was coming to him (in a small way) but as for making future trouble... 0_0 And the lyric? Part of me already guessed as much *smirk* Nice touch! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8a6798b252d89e12b3d476bb0fa63027.jpg ~ If I'm not here, I'm there ^ ~ ~ All new general discussion forum ~ Click pic !!! ~
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