I See

[powerxxx]

my eyes

watch

 

the time passing by

the day ending

 

i see the sun rise

and i see the night fall

 

i see my heart fade

and i see others hate

and others love

 

walking

talking

 

living

and dying

 

i see

every drope around me

 

but what i hate

is seeing people

watching me

 

the thing i can not bear

is their eyes staring at me

 

i see their surprise

when i begin to talk and they listen and see

 

i see you happy the moment i cry

i see you smiling the moment i get hurt

 

i hate it when you see me

becuase when i look back at you

i see hell in your eyes,,,,

[aloneme]

i don´t know what to say...you are good writer.it is so sad.I can see myself in some parts.hmmm...just continue in writing.you are good.

[Friðbjörn]

Okay, next poem you post...make a thread for new poems. Don't post a gazillion new threads. And don't post the same poems again and again. I just tossed that one you had posted already.

I'm askin nicely, and nicely for the last time.