Sygy Posted July 5, 2007 Posted July 5, 2007 yeah, fox, that seemed really pretty. i pectiualy liked the final sentence! Quote iam mors sola fuga est [broken External Image]:http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/9977/n76430001741552817731hb2.jpg
Greyfoxx Posted July 7, 2007 Author Posted July 7, 2007 thanks guys for commenting! *hugs* Love my fans Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
Greyfoxx Posted July 7, 2007 Author Posted July 7, 2007 County Family The dinner bell rings on the country farm The family comes in from their daily chores “Wash up” says the mom. They rush around to get cleaned up Dinner smells fill the air Chicken, sweet savory beans, homemade potatoes Dad sits down at the head of the table Waiting for the rest to come to eat Uncles and Aunts seat themselves The kids rush to find a place With gleaming smiles on their face. The steam rises from the food As the family bows their heads for a prayer At least they can eat the great food With old time music in the background Laughter and chat fill the air Intertwining with the smells of dinner The sun goes down, with the family still talking Night stories and happy memories Fill the light of the country family. this was done waiting for dinner....lol Oh, sowwie for double post 1 Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
Robocopper Posted July 7, 2007 Posted July 7, 2007 County Family The dinner bell rings on the country farm The family comes in from their daily chores “Wash up” says the mom. They rush around to get cleaned up Dinner smells fill the air Chicken, sweet savory beans, homemade potatoes Dad sits down at the head of the table Waiting for the rest to come to eat Uncles and Aunts seat themselves The kids rush to find a place With gleaming smiles on their face. The steam rises from the food As the family bows their heads for a prayer At least they can eat the great food With old time music in the background Laughter and chat fill the air Intertwining with the smells of dinner The sun goes down, with the family still talking Night stories and happy memories Fill the light of the country family. I read this with a rap beat . Very good, and if I didn't have breakfast I'd be hungry too right now. Quote
Greyfoxx Posted July 17, 2007 Author Posted July 17, 2007 Rise Up… I’m sitting here in the cold, heartless night Tired and worn out from the fights. My life has come to a stop When I feel that all I have is my glock People attempt to end my life Attempt to rid the world of my strife. I speak my mind and I speak my emotions Something they can’t even understand. All the hate in this new world All the agony created by the leaders Yet when I try to stop it, Try to make peace, I’m hated and marked for death. They want to get rid of me Rid the world of my independence. I walk in the night Watching over my back Always ready to fight Always prepared for an attack. They hate my personality My no-fear persona. As I walk the night and twilight Citizens help in my fight Silently supporting me Or hiding me from the authorities. I call to them Tell them to fight And they will rise up And overturn the corrupt new policies And egotistical leaders. We will rise up to fight To protect our natural rights So fight for your freedom Fight for your voice to be heard The new world will fall And we will rise up to live free Rise up… (for those of you who don't know, a glock is a gun manufacture)) Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
Jeezy Posted July 17, 2007 Posted July 17, 2007 well...what can I say.... you are one of the best writers..maybe the best on this forum Quote
DarknessLover Posted July 17, 2007 Posted July 17, 2007 Wow, I couldn't stop reading once i started, it flowed sooo well. Have you ever tried getting anything published? Quote The Park is Back? No way!
diana Posted July 17, 2007 Posted July 17, 2007 Ah, yeah...I'm with Jeez...I don't know what to say...but this is awesome! It starts so depressing and stuff...but at the end it turns into rebellion...fight...greatly written...love it! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
Greyfoxx Posted July 29, 2007 Author Posted July 29, 2007 Dedicated to a special person in my life Lost Life… Intro It seems I’ve lost myself Nowhere to go from here I don’t think I’m whole My strength has left me I can’t go on Verse One You left me without a goodbye Left me on the streets as I cry My heart is blackened As if hit by acid Shaking I try to find you But all I can do is wait I ask myself why Would you want my heart to die Why…. Chorus When I’m lonesome And I scream for you When all I want is my love I want you to be true You’ve torn my heart out Bleed me dry Yet still I find myself Loving you Verse Two At last I hear from you I can hardly believe it’s true Loving the thought of you My heart can beat again Wash the tears from my eyes Sooth the worry away I can finally breathe again Loosing you was hard But gaining you saved me From a dark life Be my light My fire Warm my soul Chorus Ending Finding myself Finding your love Leaving the dark behind And into the light We head… Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
DarknessLover Posted July 29, 2007 Posted July 29, 2007 I like that! I felt your pain, since it is all to familiar...Fantastic work! Quote The Park is Back? No way!
diana Posted July 29, 2007 Posted July 29, 2007 It's...woah, so awesome...I almost shed a tear...sounds familiar to me also only that there's no come-back really...ah well... ps: can you believe I came here without you noticing me? Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
Greyfoxx Posted July 29, 2007 Author Posted July 29, 2007 It's...woah, so awesome...I almost shed a tear...sounds familiar to me also only that there's no come-back really...ah well... ps: can you believe I came here without you noticing me? Thanks so much and i am SO SURPRISED that u came without me telling you Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
Jeezy Posted July 29, 2007 Posted July 29, 2007 nice one reminds of some country music *runs out* Quote
Greyfoxx Posted July 29, 2007 Author Posted July 29, 2007 nice one reminds of some country music *runs out* O___O Thats okay jeezy. I havent written lyrics inna while so that is fine. I'm just glad ya'll like it Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
Greyfoxx Posted August 1, 2007 Author Posted August 1, 2007 SPEAK Verse One The time has come near To live without fear Say what you feel But you’d better get real Rise up and be heard From the jock to the nerds Let your voices rise Let them hear our cries! Chorus Let your fears go Let your will rise Don’t feel low Look up at the prize Stand up for yourself Don’t sit on a shelf Speak your mind And all will be fine Verse Two They can’t hold you back Remember that helpful fact Speak for what you believe In that you’ll be free Shout it from the hills Scream from the high risers Shock all the liars Remember your voice And that it’s your choice! Chorus Ending Speak your mind Speak your thoughts Whatever you find Forget what they sought Speak freely Speak strong Speak. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
Jeezy Posted August 1, 2007 Posted August 1, 2007 Tha's pretty much describing what you should do in your personal situation right now I like it a lot Quote
Greyfoxx Posted August 1, 2007 Author Posted August 1, 2007 Tha's pretty much describing what you should do in your personal situation right now I like it a lot lol.....ya think?! how so? And u didnt say it was good or not! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
Jeezy Posted August 1, 2007 Posted August 1, 2007 lol.....ya think?! how so? And u didnt say it was good or not! I said that I like it... yeah it's good the foxx strikes once again Quote
Greyfoxx Posted August 1, 2007 Author Posted August 1, 2007 I said that I like it... yeah it's good the foxx strikes once again Thankies. And it reflects what i should do cause thats what i'm feeling, just need to get it out of me thats all. lol Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
DarknessLover Posted August 1, 2007 Posted August 1, 2007 I like it! It is very catchy! I just don't feel the same emotion as usual Grey... I do like the chorus though and the bridge is intresting Quote The Park is Back? No way!
Sygy Posted August 1, 2007 Posted August 1, 2007 that was good foxx, its so good bc it can applied to any situation where some one is being pushed around, very good! Quote iam mors sola fuga est [broken External Image]:http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/9977/n76430001741552817731hb2.jpg
diana Posted August 1, 2007 Posted August 1, 2007 It's amazing...so powerful...and I love it cuz it's saying the truth...something that we should all be doing...speaking our mind...we're all afraid to at some point...or the majority of time...*shrugs* Great lyrics to encourage someone... Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
Greyfoxx Posted August 9, 2007 Author Posted August 9, 2007 CHEATING AND LIES Verse One Every time you talk to me Lies flow from your mouth Your words make my heart flee Made my trust go south Lies and cheating Keeps your heart beating Stab me in the back Over and over again Dig the knife in deeper Just to see how I react. Chorus Lying through the fake smile Acting like I’m worth your while Another has you from me Two-timing sets you free Remember our good times And see them walk a fine line Walk a fine line Walk a fine line… Verse Two Cheating is what you do Everyone and their crew Lies are your life And digging into me like a knife Take my love for advantage I can’t believe how you’ve managed To ruin everything we had Like you were crazy fucking mad Keep away from what once was I’m done with your flaws Chorus ((Dedicated to DarknessLover)) Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
Victim Posted August 9, 2007 Posted August 9, 2007 Very nice..I like this alot.. Something alot of people can relate to.. and thats import.. Flows nicely.. Very nice work! Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/305186a372bb061b2ab713febbdc560a.jpg
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