Foxx's Poetry Corner

[Greyfoxx]

Thanks a bunch ya'll. I'm glad you guys like it. I was a bit worried for a moment there that it wouldn't be too good but thanks!

[MrsBennington-Delson]

sorry for not commenting your poem last night i had to get off right away ...

but I read it!

and its awesome!! love that darkness in it ^.^

[diana]

Yeah, yeah...I know I promised...*shoots herself*

 

Great poem...it makes me wanna be as strong as the character in there...sweet...

[Greyfoxx]

Thanks ya'll

 

and don't shoot yerself Di.

[Greyfoxx]

Make me alive…

 

 

Lurking in the shadows

Watching my prey

I smile grimly as he panics

His fate known only to me

My coat flutters silently in the wind

I breathe in his fear

Opening my eyes fully

He sees the red glint in the darkness

Dread freezes him to the ground

Unable to move from the spot.

Fangs shine from my upper jaw

Lethal weapons for my personal use

I walk slowly to my victim

Circling him slowly

I grin as his eyes widen

His terror showing clearly

I marvel at the simple frame of the man

His muscles tense as I drag a claw over his spine

I laugh menacingly at him

My voice echoing in the night air

I slip my hand around his neck

My cold fingers turning his head to one side.

My hand feels his heart beat

Pulsing strong against his flesh

My fangs swiftly pierce his neck

Forcing his blood to flow to me

Drawing it to me for my satisfaction

Living in the moment of the blood

As my eyes turn red

And my heart beats again…

[DarknessLover]

Wow...That...was...really...good actually, i had a sickengly good visual of it...wow...nightmare time! lmfao

[Greyfoxx]

“Battles of The Ancients”

 

 

running through the dense forests

 

feeling the wind snap at my face

 

My comrades fallen, laid to rest

 

I fear I have left my place.

 

Fire rains down from the skies

 

Trees burn before my eyes

 

Lightening splits the heavens

 

Thunder rings out fear in the peasants

 

Screams from far and near

 

Call for help to ease their fear

 

With my bow drawn back

 

Ready for the brutal attack

 

Hoping the gods are on my side

 

As I climb on my sturdy ride.

 

My steed gallops towards the fight

 

Ready to make this world right.

 

Blood stains the dagger at my waist

 

Stained from the enemies I face.

 

My troops rage against their oppressor

 

Never thinking of the lesser

 

Clashing of Good and Evil

 

Never acting like they’re feeble

 

A war started by the gods of men

 

But as a warrior, we’ll defend

 

Of Honor, Duty, and Grace

 

I'll forever defend the Human Race.

 

[DarknessLover]

tsk tsk...I expected...

 

THIS TO BE AMAZING!

 

guess what though....

 

 

IT IS!! I LOVE the "elemental stuff" like the thunder, it's so cool...great work again

[diana]

Make Me Alive is great...I pictured it and all...sweet...

 

Battles of The Ancients...nice...I love your choice of words...it's excellent...like always...^^

[Greyfoxx]

The Unknown

Living this lie

 

Throughout all my tries

 

To make you believe

 

To make you see

 

You refuse to see the truth

 

To understand what I am

 

To know who is here

 

Standing next to you

 

You reject even the thoughts

 

Of what I am

 

From being raised to understand nothing

 

Unless your priest told you so

 

You say you believe in the Divine

 

But what of the others?

 

The ones who roam in the darkness

 

For all time

 

Forced to listen to all the lies

 

To the myths

 

To hear you say we don’t exist

 

Yet here I am

 

Living

 

Breathing

 

To your thoughts

 

I’m a normal person

 

But under my appearance

 

I am not…

 

Believe in the unknown

 

And you’ll understand your world

 

Believe in what you don’t see

 

And you might just be set free

 

[DarknessLover]

Okay Greyfoxx, we allllll know you are a vampire! JESUS stop hogging all the attention, what about us zombies?

 

*moans for brains*

 

God!

[Greyfoxx]

erm....thanks? i think. I write about vampyres because the topic is something i know very well. I cant help it, but thats normally what i write about when i'm in a bad/mad mood.

 

and i dont write about zombies because i just dont......i don't really like zombies extremely a lot like i used to...maybe i'll write one some time....maybe

[diana]

Ah, I love The Unknown! It's just...ah, perfect...I especially love the first half...<3

 

Btw, where is your new stuff??

[Greyfoxx]

WARNING!!!!: If you don't like reading my poems because they are about vampyres, stop now. This is a new style i'm trying, so deal with it or don't read.

 

 

 

 

As I stand in front of a broken mirror

I realize what has caused all the fear.

Blood stains my hair

My face is un-naturally fair.

I smile grimly as I stare at my face

As red liquid drips in a single place.

A reflecting piece of glass is in my hand

It’s shaking, wanting to taste the blood of man.

Two nights I’ve been this way

Hiding from the light of day.

A pair of red eyes stares back at me

When I realize my Master has set me free.

Free of the world I once called my own

Free to play, tease, drink, and roam.

If I wish to stay, I may

If I tired, I’ll sleep by day.

My Master tells me to listen and learn

And some day it will be my turn.

To ensure our race continues to exist

That we won’t be the last to wander the mist.

In these two nights, I have changed

My new speed improves my attacking range.

My newfound sight lets me see for miles

And I can hear even the softest child.

In the next night, my change shall be complete

And I’ll be capable of any feat.

I now know why people flee

They know not how it is to be free.

My master calls to me tonight

To feed the thirst in my own right.

[Jeezy]

You are still the master of poetry

 

is there a female form for master?

[Greyfoxx]

You are still the master of poetry

 

is there a female form for master?

That'd be mistress i believe

 

and thank ye much *huggles*

[Greyfoxx]

Try to see the world through anothers’ eyes

Try to feel their happiness, their cries

Understand how they feel

Understand the way they go about lives wheel.

If you do these things today

Maybe you’ll understand different ways to pray.

Different religious views divide us,

Make us kill in the name of our gods’ trust.

Relief will only come to the human race

When all of us understand the differences of place.

We come from all sorts of backgrounds

But we are all still walk the same ground.

Don’t look down on another human

 

We are all the same sort of being.

**Tis a work in progress**

[DarknessLover]

Hey nice to see you back round, I like the last two poems, but the first one it stilled seemed like a vampire one no? Dunno, I still think, as Jeezy said, you are THE mistress of Poetry

[Greyfoxx]

Visions Arise

 

I waslk alone throughout the land

Seeking meaning or perhaps a friend.

A rushing river blocks my way

and I'm soon loosing the light of day.

I sit on the rivers' misty edge

Thinking about what makes my mind dread.

I remember what those people have taken

But my eyes drift upwards to a cawing Raven.

He speaks to my mind

Calming any troubles he may find.

A Lynx suddenly walks to my side

And lays his paw on my right thigh.

A warm sensation of guidance swarms over me

These two creatures will surely help set me free.

A light comes through the clouds above

And these animals around me help my eyes see the love.

[Jeezy]

I like how it flows....

 

but I don't really get the meaning

[MrsBennington-Delson]

I agree with Jeezy it's flow is very nice ^.^

[Greyfoxx]

thanks. I was trying for like an native american like Vision type thing. *shrug*

[Friðbjörn]

very strong image, that one with the raven, I must say

[Greyfoxx]

Our Time

Whenever I cry out

You’re there to comfort me.

If I ever get frightened

Your protective arms wrap around my frame.

You know all there is about me

All the good as well as bad

Even the scars that are upon my soul

And yet you still love me.

I look at myself with disgust

Yet you make me see the beauty.

I try to be strong and not care

But you’ve seen the part of me

Locked away deep within

The caring, passionate side of me

The one who hasn’t been shone

To none other but you.

You help me let her loose

Even if it’s for a short time.

You give her comfort and love

Protection and confidence.

Unknown to me,

You let my true soul arise

And with your help

Be accepted and certain

Your voice rings out in my ears

Soothing me, whispering my name

Speaking to all of me

Loving my entire being

Comforting me when emotions run high

And I shake from my feelings

No soft voice has ever caressed my ears

Like your gentle tone.

You accept me even when I ask otherwise

Because you know what I’d really want

You’ve seen my troubled past

And sheltered me from my pain

Scars upon scars you’ve seen

Yet you don’t ever look away

Comforting arms and soothing voice

Are the things I receive

When my frightful and painful past

Returns to me.

Whenever I talk to you

My troubles seem to vanish

Where they go, I don’t care

As long as I know that you are there

If my eyes ever meet yours

I’m sure I’d melt

That one of me that’s locked away

Would burst out for you

And I’d be helpless to stop it

Because my soul desires it

[Jeezy]

Foxxy is back at it again