Foxx's Poetry Corner

[GraDoN]

:O a little dark for me but nice poem must say good work

[Greyfoxx]

:O a little dark for me but nice poem must say good work

thanks for saying that even if its dark for your taste, that it is good work....it's good that you're willing to read stuff that is darker than your taste and still like the quality of the writing

[Greyfoxx]

Tell me…

 

Chorus

Tell me what it means

To be hurt like I am

Tell me what it’s like

To be loved like you are

Tell me why I’m here

Pushed away from the world.

Verse One

People say this is how it should be

Keep on about trivial worries

Saying they were hurt

And that they aren’t loved

Yet they don’t know

What it means

To be pushed away from the world

So I beg youuuu

Just tell me what its like

To be in the limelight

 

Chorus

 

Verse Two

Tired of the way

People look at you?

Trying to get out of the light

Wishing you weren’t here.

Please tell me now

How you feel now

Welcome to my world

Now you know what its like

To be pushed away like me

 

Chorus

 

Verse Three

Still can’t take it

Complaining of the life you once had

Telling of the hurt

Or bragging of the love you have

So why now do you tell

Of the lies you have told

Why do you care

About us,

The ones you pushed away.

 

Chorus

 

These are new lyrics, my friend Kevin inspired me to write more lyrics so here they are

[Jeezy]

nice one...your last one has been some time ago...so I'm glad to read something new...

and you always make it sound so personal...which makes it really great

[GraDoN]

nice lyrics damnit lol when i went throught i even made a beat and raised my voice to it haha i seem to think i can sing.. but nobody els does

[Greyfoxx]

@Jeezy- Yeah, i've had writers block, but i'm slowly coming out of it!!! Glad ya like it!! i was worried people might think it was TOO personal feeling.... :thumbsup:

 

@GraDon- Thankies!!! I hope when u 'sung' it..... it didnt sound too bad.... heheheh

[LPpinkfreak821]

I Love It!

[GraDoN]

haha ya foxx i sung it and i liked it

[diana]

Nice lyrics...and yes, very personal but I like that kind...

It's just one thing that bothers me a bit...in the 2nd verse...there are too many nows for my taste...I'm sure it would sound good but I just can't imagine the beat and stuff...

[Greyfoxx]

thanks ya'll for reading it. I thought for a moment since i havent put anything up, nobody would read it....BUT Ah-HA! I WAS WRONG....w00t

[Greyfoxx]

Jeezy Birthday Poem V.1

 

 

As he sits in front of the screen

he listens to the Tears of a River

and remembers how long it's been

since he seen the effects of the Butterflies.

He types away on the keys

Making the signature of the lates hues of Blues.

The clock ticks the minutes away

as he works as long as he can.

tick tock goes the clock

Counting down til the rememberance

the Rememberance of the day of his birth

He goes to his favorite fourms

to see what has been updated.

Alas! He sees a new post

In Foxx's Poetry Corner

Click goes his mouse

to read his gift from me

So this poem goes out to you

One of the best friends i've had

here at the Linkin Park Fourms.

To Jeezy from da Foxx

Manny Happy Greetings to last you a lifetime

and do us all a favor, dear Jeezy,

Never ever change

For you will always be you,

The 21 year-old who rocks these fourms

 

 

 

I hope ya like this....

 

(Notice in the title V.1 =maybe more???)

[GraDoN]

awwwww thats so sweet foxx he'll love it

[By_My-elf]

Thats fuckin Good Foxx =D

I like it alot.

Keep up the good work,Would be cool to see some more soon.

[Greyfoxx]

thanks guys, i hope he likes it

[Jeezy]

wow...that is so awesome...probably the best thing you ever wrote(because it's about me lol)...thank you so much...it's already one of the best presents I ever got....

 

and the same thing to you: never change and stay the great and cool person you are...

[MrsBennington-Delson]

this poem is damn cool! idk if someone of you felt a lil beat in it... idk

[Greyfoxx]

thanks guys

 

and Jeezy- I'm Soooo glad you liked it! Makes me feel loads better that ya like it

[jackie]

how nice of u foxx

to do this

its a great poem

[Greyfoxx]

how nice of u foxx

to do this

its a great poem

I'd do this for anyone who asks this of me

I'll i'd need is some basic info, like i asked jeezy in his Journal.

 

Maybe i should do that

 

LADIES AND GENTS!!!! I'M NOW TAKING REQUESTS FOR POEMS/LYRICS!!!!

[jackie]

hey foxx umm... can u plz make me poem to share at my doggys funeral

thank u

[Greyfoxx]

Okay, i'll do that, its a good cause

 

This is what i'll need to know

 

1-doggies name

2-colors (fur)

3-eye colors

4-Name

5-how old

6-how it died

7-male/female?

8-When the Furneral is(day and time please if u can)

9-doggies fun things it used to do (how it played, funny things it did to get attention ect)

10-anything else you would like me to add

 

 

If i have all of these, i can have it done in about two days tops.

[MrsBennington-Delson]

you want to make a poem about me?

it hasn't to be right now

[Greyfoxx]

you want to make a poem about me?

it hasn't to be right now

i will, promise. But after i get jackies done. That one will take lots of thinking about.

when i'm done with hers then i wll work on yers. I will put questions up for you to answer. Expect it up within the next three days

[MrsBennington-Delson]

i will, promise. But after i get jackies done. That one will take lots of thinking about.

when i'm done with hers then i wll work on yers. I will put questions up for you to answer. Expect it up within the next three days

ok no problem i can wait

thanks :thumbsup:

[jackie]

1-doggies name - sandy

 

2-colors (fur) - white as snow

 

3-eye colors - the darkest black

 

4-Name - who me? jackie

 

5-how old - 8 months

 

6-how it died - car ran over her

 

7-male/female? - F

 

8-When the Furneral is(day and time please if u can) - monday like noon-ish

 

9-doggies fun things it used to do (how it played, funny things it did to get attention ect) it peed in mii moms shoes and its really liked its bed pillow thingy

 

thats all thank u foxx u rock *hugz*