Blue Entries

[Shadowed Heart]

Greyfoxx and Shadowed Heart will post their poems here, in Blue. Comments for these poems will also be posted here. After both contestants have posted their entries, LPFers can vote, PM all votes to me (Shadowed Heart *please, remember, NO underscore, it's a space, don't forget, or your votes won't be properly sent*) Both poems must be posted in 36 hours, and all votes must be cast within 48 hours.

Good luck.

-Riss

[LPShinodaFM]

WHEEEE!! i can't wait

[Shadowed Heart]

The way I love you

 

The Way I Love You

How many times have you said

That you love me too?

I could even count babe,

But I do love you.

 

From the first time I met you

I felt something new

Not like with the cutie in second grade

I didn’t know what to do

 

Baby, I love you,

You don’t even know,

But I want to so bad

I don’t ever want you to go

 

If you were to walk away

I think I’d cry

You don’t know if you do,

But without you, I’d die.

 

You tell me

That I wasn’t your first love

But I don’t care,

Nobody loves you like I do.

 

Babe I always want you to know

That I whatever you do,

This is always be

The way I love you.

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[LPShinodaFM]

That was really cute ^^

[LPHybridSnax]

reallllly nice man, too bad you got Greyfoxx first round lol XD

[Greyfoxx]

reallllly nice man' date=' too bad you got Greyfoxx first round lol XD[/quote']

lol, wouldnt be too sure, i cant even agree with myself on a topic

[Greyfoxx]

Memories Of...

 

Memories of….

 

Sitting in this chair

Your mind not in the present

You have thoughts of the past

Of the years gone by.

Memories fill your head

Of your friends and family.

The stupid times and the fun

The dark and disheartening.

You are alone now

In the current time

Your friends have gone on

Left you in this town

Your family has all but forgotten you

But you still have the memories.

Their laughing faces

The times of tears.

The times of fun

And the rainy days

Tears stream down your face of today

Recalling the times past

We all know they go by too quick

Now is the time where the memories stick

And now is the time

Where the memories hurt

Remembering the fun

That has all gone away

But you smile anyway

Remembering the friends

Missing them

Wishing they would call

But that was years ago

And now, you are alone

But you’ll always remember

The years gone past

And the fun

Remember….

[Jeezy]

Both are nice..it's a pretty tough competition...

[Shadowed Heart]

I really would vote for you over me if I could.

[Esaul]

Both are terrific but i won't vote at all.

[Shadowed Heart]

I'm not ever voting either.

[Greyfoxx]

i refuse to vote....i simply wont

[LPHybridSnax]

... i voted... lol, it was actually a pretty easy decision for me.

[Greyfoxx]

really? wow, thats either

 

1)really bad for me and really good for riss

 

or

 

2)really good for me and really bad for riss

 

 

*bites my nails like crazy*

[MrsBennington-Delson]

Both are very nice!