Shadowed Heart Posted November 8, 2006 Posted November 8, 2006 LP~Shinoda~FM and Esaul will post their poems here, in Purple. Comments for these poems will also be posted here. After both contestants have posted their entries, LPFers can vote, PM all votes to me (Shadowed Heart *please, remember, NO underscore, it's a space, don't forget, or your votes won't be properly sent*) Both poems must be posted in 36 hours, and all votes must be cast within 48 hours. Good luck. -Riss Quote {Fool me once, shame on you; fool me twice, shame on me.} http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/2f43bfab2b64268a8552c7de93432ec4.jpg Write "Love" On Your Arm. MIH Photography. Myspace. Facebook.
Esaul Posted November 8, 2006 Posted November 8, 2006 Believing these Lies Verse I You left me in this world alone I cannot take it anymore The pain is too much for me Oh I cried Yes I cried You told me that you loved me You left me blinded by love I couldn't see Oh I died Yes I died Chorus: Believing these lies.... Wrapped up inside... Believing these lies.... Leaving me to die.... Believing these lies... Verse II: It's too late to go back My heart is broken It will never mend Oh no it won't You left me in this world alone I can never take you back Why don't you just go away? You've wounded me too much I will never forget your touch You left me alone to die Why did you hurt me so? What did I do to you? You left me alone to cry Oh yes I cried Chorus: Believing these lies.... Wrapped up inside... Believing these lies.... Leaving me to die.... Believing these lies... Verse III: (raps) Tears fall down my face I can never erase My heart is broken It will never heal My pride is wounded It will never mend Tears fall down my face I can never erase My heart is broken It will never heal My pride is wounded It will never mend (echoes) My heart is broken My pride is wounded Believing these lies... (My heart is broken) Believing these lies.. (It will never mend) Believing these lies... (My heart is broken) Believing these lies (It will never mend) Believing these lies Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/eb36fb23d296c3a7b0596731eb64b09c.jpg
Shadowed Heart Posted November 8, 2006 Author Posted November 8, 2006 *claps* bravo! bravo!!!!!!! Good job, I like it. <3 Quote {Fool me once, shame on you; fool me twice, shame on me.} http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/2f43bfab2b64268a8552c7de93432ec4.jpg Write "Love" On Your Arm. MIH Photography. Myspace. Facebook.
LPShinodaFM Posted November 8, 2006 Posted November 8, 2006 That was really nice! Well... here goes nothing... *takes deep breath* My Name is Skater My name is Skater Though other than that I don’t know much about But I do know Slick and Ink Jet Brooker and Black Jay Though other than that I don’t know much about I know Slick had a girlfriend And his girlfriend loved him Though this love didn’t last forever Cuz she started seeing her ex Jim On that day Slick went a bit high on coke He started laughing and got a bit mental Jumped into the road and got hit I don’t think I saw her at the funeral Though other than that I don’t know much about I know Ink Jet was a dealer And often had to push it to kids But I also know that his dad walked out on them And Jet started going on Acid His mom became a drunk And often beat him till he passed out All ever she did was drink and gamble She didn’t care how Ink Jet was supporting it all Though other than that I don’t know much about I know Brooker had a beautiful family Parents live and well and an older brother, Shark His parents wanted the best out of them And pushed them for that perfect mark Brooker went paranoid when he saw Last mid-term Shark came home with a C Left home with all his clothes Wallet, phone, and car keys Though other than that I don’t know much about I know Black Jay definitely wasn’t white And his father has a tumor in his head His mother disabled, and two younger ones Caught him wandering in the streets “I hafta find a job” he said Cuz he has to ditch the one he does right now Paying minimal wage and stinking with flies He has to find a better one to support his family “But I ain’t white” He says with the despair in his eyes Though other than that I don’t know much about I know I had a past Though it’s like it’s been wiped from my memory No images, no sounds, nothing i can recall Everytime I think of this I always feel so empty But the farthest back I can remember Was these four faces when waking up in a bed in the trailer Don’t know how I got there, nor of anything else The only thing I know is that My name is Skater Though other than that I don’t know much about Quote
Shadowed Heart Posted November 9, 2006 Author Posted November 9, 2006 I like it. I like how you wrote it into people's lives and stuff. Quote {Fool me once, shame on you; fool me twice, shame on me.} http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/2f43bfab2b64268a8552c7de93432ec4.jpg Write "Love" On Your Arm. MIH Photography. Myspace. Facebook.
Jeezy Posted November 9, 2006 Posted November 9, 2006 Hey Esaul..that was pretty good...could be a LP song Quote
mundo119 Posted November 10, 2006 Posted November 10, 2006 hehehe i imagined LP actually sang Esauls song... Believing these lies....(Chester screams this out) Wrapped up inside...(Mike says this right after the scream) Believing these lies....(Chester screams out again) Leaving me to die....(once again, Mike says this right after) Believing these lies...(yup yup, u guessed it. CHESTER!) then i would add something here to round out the chorus...make it sound more catchy i guess. hehehehe i got really into it. I really like it. great job :thumbsup: Quote -breaking a part of my heart to find release- -taking you out of my blood to bring me peace-
Esaul Posted November 15, 2006 Posted November 15, 2006 LP is a huge inspiration and i listen to them 24/7 and I just think of what is hurting me the most and i write from there. Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/eb36fb23d296c3a7b0596731eb64b09c.jpg
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