DarknessLover Posted January 27, 2007 Posted January 27, 2007 Ok the few posts going up now are songs already seen Leave Comments, use Constructive Criticism and Enjoy! The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted January 27, 2007 Author Posted January 27, 2007 "I Love You" (Verse) I love you So what do I do I need you so what do I say I say You are right for me You can love can't you see I love you more then tragedy You are the only one for me I love you Can't you see? Or are you blinded by the enemy? (Chorus) I love you (You) I don't know what you want from me I love you (You) Can't you see? I can't see what you want from me I love you (You) To be free is nothing Nothing compared to what I can give to you I love you (You) Can't you see? (Verse) To be loved is everything And you are everything Everything I need to be free To be free from the hatre-d You have made me so goddamn happy I don't care don't you see? I don't want many things I want you to see I want love from you, you see? (Chorus) I love you (You) I don't know what you want from me I love you (You) Can't you see? I can't see what you want from me I love you (You) To be free is nothing Nothing compared to what I can give to you I love you (You) Can't you see? (Bridge) When has love been the enemy? you just don't seem to see! Why don't you understand? I am all you'll ever need I am more then a friend I am more then a tragedy So please, please just follow me (Chorus) I love you (You) I don't know what you want from me I love you (You) Can't you see? I can't see what you want from me I love you (You) To be free is nothing Nothing compared to what I can give to you I love you (You) Can't you see? The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted January 27, 2007 Author Posted January 27, 2007 "Happy or Are We?" (Verse) I want just what you want But I still have my needs And what makes you happy Can make me feel bad And I don't want that And if I want what I don't want Where Do I end up? (Chorus) I end up Torn Apart I end up broken down I end up screaming for freedom I end up crying I end up bleeding I end up Screaming for happiness (Verse) I still need you by my side I Still need that beautiful comfort I want you here Want you now You want to be seperate Want to be freed I want what you want Want what I want Where Do I End Up? (Chorus) I end up Torn Apart I end up broken down I end up screaming for freedom I end up crying I end up bleeding I end up Screaming for happiness (Bridge) Where do I end? Where Do I smile? What I want I want I Want I want I Want LEAVE ME ALONE (Censored So I don't get in trouble) leave me the f*** ALONE (Chorus) I end up Torn Apart I end up broken down I end up screaming for freedom I end up crying I end up bleeding I end up Screaming for happiness The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted January 27, 2007 Author Posted January 27, 2007 "So Alone" (Verse) Just to give my heart away Just to cut it out of me Just to stand on air What I have done? I have destroyed everything Everything I stood for Everything I cared for Everything I felt for Where am I to go? I have lost Everything (Chorus) To Stand on these broken needles To bleed in the sea of pain To stand in a run down home To feel absolutely nothing When the suns hot burn So alone So alone in love (Verse) Standing in the cold Standing all alone Standing in the hate Where am I to go? I have taken pain Sadness burns a hole Sadness tears me apart Sadness kills the smile What am I to do? I am still torn I have lost everything (Chorus) To Stand on these broken needles To bleed in the sea of pain To stand in a run down home To feel absolutely nothing When the suns hot burn So alone So alone in love (Verse) Take me from me seat Take me down from here Take me to your home What do I have to do? I want to be free Keep me in your heart Keep me with you Keep me from the cold Why do I stand here? I need to be home I have lost Everything (Chorus) To Stand on these broken needles To bleed in the sea of pain To stand in a run down home To feel absolutely nothing When the suns hot burn So alone So alone in love (Bridge) Kill me See me Love me Keep me Take me (Chorus) To Stand on these broken needles To bleed in the sea of pain To stand in a run down home To feel absolutely nothing When the suns hot burn So alone So alone in love The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted January 27, 2007 Author Posted January 27, 2007 "Re-Paid" (Verse) What DO i need to do To make you look this way To see my blood shot heart TO see the pain in my eyes Well I would do anything just for you I would do everything Just for you I gave you my all You gave me just some Through all those broken nights I helped you through your frights Is this how it ends? I guess it all depends (Chorus) Through all your little fights I made you smile on those raining nights IS this my return? Just another burn Through the cold unfeeling summer days I made you laugh and made it seem right Is this my return? Just another burn (Verse) I sat next to you Just so you knew I would be there How do you dare? Cry my pains away No thank you I willl scream it away Take this heart's bleeding days Make this go away I want to smile once again I want to laugh with a friend Not cry in my bed (Chorus) Through all your little fights I made you smile on those raining nights IS this my return? Just another burn Through the cold unfeeling summer days I made you laugh and made it seem right Is this my return? Just another burn (Bridge) What Should I do? Where should I go? Why Should I leave? When should I die? Who Should I turn to? What Should I do? Where should I go? Why Should I leave? When should I die? Who Should I turn to? (Chorus) Through all your little fights I made you smile on those raining nights IS this my return? Just another burn Through the cold unfeeling summer days I made you laugh and made it seem right Is this my return? Just another burn The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted January 29, 2007 Author Posted January 29, 2007 "Proven" (Verse) No I Don't I don't know why I have to prove myself again I showed my love just let this end Why must I race When I have already won Why must I jump When I am at the top I have shown myself I have changed my ways Please just love me now No more stupid little games (Chorus) If I must I will If I need I get it If I am wrong You are right I'm not wrong I win this fight (Verse) I have won before I will win again You know I won't quit I know all the plays He moves left I move right I have played this game I might as well dance on his grave This field is all to familiar Competition of the best I will win this fight I am the better I will beat my opponent Make him eat dirt (Chorus) If I must I will If I need I get it If I am wrong You are right I'm not wrong I win this fight (Bridge) I will win this competition I feel no opposition I have been in this position I will win this battle I am going to leave the crowd in a rattle I stand in this saddle (Chorus) If I must I will If I need I get it If I am wrong You are right I'm not wrong I win this fight The Park is Back? No way!
Jeezy Posted January 29, 2007 Posted January 29, 2007 The Proven one is really strong...I really like this last bridge you put in there...
DarknessLover Posted January 30, 2007 Author Posted January 30, 2007 "Waiting" (Chorus) Waiting to hear your voice Waiting to be your love waiting to feel your skin Waiting to see your heart La la la la la la Na na na na na na (Verse) In my honest voice I want to be in your joys I wish to be your only choice But I don't see that happening So you like someone else I will just have to wait, my turn So if you are listening I love you so deal, with it (Chorus) Waiting to hear your voice Waiting to be your love waiting to feel your skin Waiting to see your heart La la la la la la Na na na na na na (Verse) If you really do care Why don't you notice my stare I will just sit, and glare I hope you will listen I can show my loving Or I will wait, right here (Chorus) Waiting to hear your voice Waiting to be your love waiting to feel your skin Waiting to see your heart La la la la la la Na na na na na na (Bridge) Na na na na na na Ya ya ya ya ya ya Ha ha ha ha ha ha So i will sit, and stare (Chorus) Waiting to hear your voice Waiting to be your love waiting to feel your skin Waiting to see your heart La la la la la la Na na na na na na ********************************************************** It's a bit on the pop side instead of my sadder side. I have just been experimenting with new styles. The Park is Back? No way!
Esaul Posted February 2, 2007 Posted February 2, 2007 Looks like I do have some competition, really awesome songs! I should probably make a thread for mine xD http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/eb36fb23d296c3a7b0596731eb64b09c.jpg
DarknessLover Posted February 2, 2007 Author Posted February 2, 2007 "Carry On" I didn't like where that poppy one went, so I am gonna try another sadder one. I don't know why I am sad though, everything in ym life is going great... ************************************************************************************** (Verse) Everyone has left Your stuck standing all alone Wanting to break free BUt locked from the memories In the middle of the day Waiting for the light You continue your fight You try to set it right But it won't stay Your locked from the memories (Chorus) When nothing can be done All there is left to do Is to carry on Carry on... When no one really cares Everyone can stare You can carry on Carry on... (Verse) WHen the wind blows through your home Rattling all the pictures The light will be consumed And you don't know what to do No one understands What you are going through But you do Crying when there's smiles Laughing when there's pain Your locked from the memories (Chorus) When nothing can be done All there is left to do Is to carry on Carry on... When no one really cares Everyone can stare You can carry on Carry on... (Bridge) Nothing will go right You stand and continue to fight You load up all your guns This battle will be done It must be won Carry on... Carry on... (Chorus) When nothing can be done All there is left to do Is to carry on Carry on... When no one really cares Everyone can stare You can carry on Carry on... The Park is Back? No way!
Peterdea Posted February 3, 2007 Posted February 3, 2007 Carry On is pretty good. i like it. 8/10 Its good to be back.
FireHawk Posted February 3, 2007 Posted February 3, 2007 I really like your lyrics maybe sometime we can callaborate on music I could lay down drums, bass, and guitar sometime and (assuming you sing good) you could do vocals if your ever up for that Please when you see spam just click the http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/4b273718b96672a5cde873c5a972756e.gif graphic and type "Spam" into the text box then click report. Its better than complaining and goes straight to the mods.
DarknessLover Posted February 3, 2007 Author Posted February 3, 2007 firehawk...how so? The Park is Back? No way!
Jeezy Posted February 4, 2007 Posted February 4, 2007 I like Carry On...sounds kinda angry in some places...nice one
Victim Posted February 4, 2007 Posted February 4, 2007 Carry On, is just lovely.. I love it.. I can relate to it alot.. so 10/10! http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/305186a372bb061b2ab713febbdc560a.jpg
jackie Posted February 4, 2007 Posted February 4, 2007 w0w ur stuff is like soo freckin awesome i love em all my favorite would be ALL!! (: Jacks 1st sig. http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/5c1dc57df369238451876ae146e45afb.png Thats whats up ^-^
DarknessLover Posted February 6, 2007 Author Posted February 6, 2007 "You Think" (verse) I don't care what you say You were never a part of me You think you stand tall But yeah, i am just waiting for you to fall Another night of pain I left that mark in my vain This constant hate drives me insane Stop me before I blow I don't know, I just don't know What you really expect Expect out of me I just want to live today And not be wasted away (Chorus) You think you are better Better then everyone You think you can scream Louder then anyone You think you have seen pain Pain is just a name For the god's of hell For the god's of hell To claim (Verse) I don't know what to say Just cause everything Been torn apart You laughed at me when I was weak Defenseless, and hopeless too I don't think you know Just how hard I tried To make everything right When all I do Is just for you Well you know I don't Really honestly care I have but one thing to say Better not too say it in front of you (Chorus) You think you are better Better then everyone You think you can scream Louder then anyone You think you have seen pain Pain is just a name For the god's of hell For the god's of hell To claim (Bridge) I have but one thing to say Better not too say it in front of you But I have never care for the best I am better then the rest I don't know other then I have but one thing to say I will try to say it In the best possible way... FUCK YOU (guitar solo) I am recording my solo right now, i will try and share it when i can fuck me... The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted February 9, 2007 Author Posted February 9, 2007 Any comments on last song??? Please??? The Park is Back? No way!
Jeezy Posted February 9, 2007 Posted February 9, 2007 Any comments on last song??? Please??? It's alright...but I like some of the other songs more...
DarknessLover Posted February 10, 2007 Author Posted February 10, 2007 "Hate" (Verse) Yes I can see you sitting over there Leave me the fuck alone, No I don't Care I didn't do anything anyway I don't really want to stay I Feel as if you were always the enemy Everything with you was a goddamn Contreversy Watch as I hate once again and forget slowly What you made of me went away In a minute So I don't want you to remember me that way I am that jackass from that other day Not that loving motherfucker you knew yesterday I didn't do anything anway I don't really want to stay (Chorus) Hate is me I feel the unfeeling again Ignorance is bliss So they say, and they are right Hate is me I feel absolutely nothing Ignorance is bliss So they say, now go away (Verse) Watch and cry and what you once knew goes away You really need to watch what you say Since I never really asked for anything Just play with my weak and pathetic mind Twitter with the switches, push and pull I am not that loving bastard you knew yesterday So go away, you never meant anything anyway So go away, you never knew what it's like To be the enemy, To be unloved and hated I didn't do anything anyway I don't really want to stay (Chorus) Hate is me I feel the unfeeling again Ignorance is bliss So they say, and they are right Hate is me I feel absolutely nothing Ignorance is bliss So they say, now go away (Brige) FUCK YOU I DID EVERYTHING I COULD IT WASN'T EVER GOOD ENOUGH I PROVED EVERYTHING TO YOU SO GO AWAY, GO THE FUCK AWAY EVERYTHING I HAVE EVER WANTED WAS WASTED IN YOU, BURNED IN YOU FUCK ME YOU DON'T REALLY SEE WHAT YOU DID NOT YOU DON'T KNOW WHY BUT I SEEM TO KNOW THAT I AM HATE, AND INGORANCE FUCK YOU I DID EVERYTHING I COULD IT WASN'T EVER GOOD ENOUGH (Chorus) Hate is me I feel the unfeeling again Ignorance is bliss So they say, and they are right Hate is me I feel absolutely nothing Ignorance is bliss So they say, now go away The Park is Back? No way!
Peterdea Posted February 10, 2007 Posted February 10, 2007 i read the first verse.. im not even gonna bother to read the rest...sorry dude Its good to be back.
DarknessLover Posted February 10, 2007 Author Posted February 10, 2007 "Unwanted" Sitting alone in a dark corner Wanting to be heard, but he can't speak All he asks to be noticed All he wants is to be loved But no one cares They Just Laugh at his despair (verse) Look at me! I want to be heard So I will now speak Am I clear now? Am I making scene? Well I hope so fucking so I just want to be heard I just want to be seen You ignore my feelings You laugh at me You ignore me Just let me stand up and scream That way you will see I am going to win (Chorus) I want you to hear the pain in my voice I want you to know the trouble I have seen When I ask for help you will just leave Now watch as I die in the corner You want me to just take the pain You want me to not feel a thing But when you ask for help I will leave Now watch as you die in the corner (Verse) Look at you! I don't think you understand I think you misinterpret I am not as weak as you think You will soon see Nothing will be Ok, so Now I know I will just not go Will I ever be seen? Will you ever see? Fight like you comprehend But you don't understand You aren't going to win I am going to finish As I say my last line I may as well define The way I will win (CHorus) I want you to hear the pain in my voice I want you to know the trouble I have seen When I ask for help you will just leave Now watch as I die in the corner You want me to just take the pain You want me to not feel a thing But when you ask for help I will leave Now watch as you die in the corner (Bridge) Alone in a dark little room He has no new air to breathe He breaths in the feeling of His own hate He will soon revert to his old way So what do you say? Now what do you say? (Chorus) I want you to hear the pain in my voice I want you to know the trouble I have seen When I ask for help you will just leave Now watch as I die in the corner WATCH ME DIE The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted February 13, 2007 Author Posted February 13, 2007 "No Name" ---- Originally Intended for Writing Competition The warmth of your heart I have known of from the start My heart tasted like tart The sweetness of another The caring for one another Nights of cheers And all those sad tears I may not have known you for years But in my mind it does I can always feel the trust We both know the love is a must Sometimes we are only the crust I still know there is no lust If you were to leave, I'd cry I promise I will try BUt that was, just another lie The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted February 13, 2007 Author Posted February 13, 2007 "Love" ---- In Contest The dark twisting nights Soliciting with my frights No, I never saw a bright light Thank you, now I do The bright lights The hearts full of flame Another love untamed BUt weren't you ashamed? When you said, "Love is just a game" Now you have learned Love must be earned You have played through my heart Defeated all the demons Beaten all the puzzles Yet, one thing still remains After all the pains Through the mini-games You lost the key But trust me You can see that it isn't for me But the key, is right there It lies in your heart It awaits to be found So now, I must turmoil and play The game I can't say The Park is Back? No way!
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