DarknessLover Posted February 22, 2007 Author Posted February 22, 2007 (Verse) I don't know What should I say? Maybe I should Just look the other way I don't know Where do I belong? Maybe I am Just straight up wrong But now I... Really don't care (Chorus) I don't know Should I know Well I don't care So sit and glare I will just look the other way (Verse) I don't know Why am I left all alone? Maybe I need Just stay at home I don't know When is this over? Maybe I could Just blow the pain away But now I... really don't care (Chorus) I don't know Should I know Well I don't care So sit and glare I will just look the other way (Bridge) When everything is wrong Will everything soon Go right? When everything is gone Will you stay right here Just for me? The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted February 23, 2007 Author Posted February 23, 2007 No Comments? The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted February 27, 2007 Author Posted February 27, 2007 "Everythings Right?" (Verse) Am I Dreaming? Or is this just another dream come true Am I Sleeping? Or is this just another night with you I don't see how Everythings right (Nah) Everythings right Am I Crazy? or is this just another psycho's nightmare Are you real? Or is this just another illusion I want to Everythings Right (Nah) Everythings Right (Chorus) For the first time I feel everything is Alright Now for the last time I know nothing will go Go so wrong (Verse) Am I dying? Or is this just another day without you Am I believing? Or is this just another religion with two I don't know how Everythings right (Yeah) Everythings Alright Am I seeing? or is this just another sight with you (I promise too) Are you taking? Or is this just another night of bullshit Everythings right (Yeah) Everything is alright (Chorus) For the first time I feel everything is Alright Now for the last time I know nothing will go Go so wrong (Bridge) Yes it's alright So right You just took away another fright No it's not wrong Not bad You just took away another fright Everything is alright (Alright) Now, everything is so right (So Right) (Chorus) For the first time I feel everything is Alright Now for the last time I know nothing will go Go so wrong The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted March 3, 2007 Author Posted March 3, 2007 "Papercut (Remix)" Why does it feel like night today? (night today) Something in here’s not right today (right today) Why am I so uptight today? (Paranoia) Paranoia’s all I got left (left with nothing) I don’t know what stressed me first (First!) Or how the pressure, The pressure was fed (Keep on growing) But I know Know know know just what it feels like To have a voice in the back of my mind It’s like a face that I hold down A face that awakes when I close my mind A face watches every time I cry A face that laughs every time I fall {It's always watching me} So I know that when it’s time to sink or swim That the face inside is here in me, right underneath my skin It’s like I’m paranoid looking over my back It’s like a whirlwind inside of my head It’s like I can’t stop what I’m hearing within It’s like the face inside is right beneath my skin [keep the beat rolling, alright thats good] It feels like something crawling up my leg Nah dear please don't make me beg When you've held down so much It feels like you've been crushed The voice in my mind tells me to resign But i know that if I don't go Everyone might laugh at me I wonder if they're talkign about me Why is it so hard for me to see It feels like i am constantly Pushed to reverse the verse to hear something else I wonder what it really means I know it might be too obcene So i know when it's time to die or fly That voice inside of my, is right behind my eye It’s like I’m paranoid inside of my head It’s like a whirlwind looking over my back It’s like I can’t stop the face inside It’s like what I’m hearing within is right beneath my skin The sun goes down (Leave Me Be) I feel the light betray me (all alone) The sun goes down (Leave me be) I feel the light betray me (all alone) The sun goes down (Leave Me Be) I feel the light betray me (all alone) The sun goes down (Leave me be) I feel the light betray me (all alone) The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted March 4, 2007 Author Posted March 4, 2007 dude is no one gonna read my shit? The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted April 5, 2007 Author Posted April 5, 2007 "Left To Die" (Verse) I fell down when I was at the top When I tried to stand up again Someone went and had to trip me (Pre-Chorus) Now I am left all alone Left at the bottom I wish someone could hear my screams But I feel as if no one cares for me So I am... (Verse) All the laughter, tears my mind The crying is a feeling undefined So Someone stop the feeling (Pre-Chorus) Now I am left all alone Left at the bottom I wish someone could hear my screams But I feel as if no one cares for me So I am... (Chorus) Left to die No one cares about me Left to die Why can't someone hear me Left to die Yeah, nothing's alright SO I am Left to die In my own toxic waste Left to die In my own disgrace (Verse) It starts to rain again Not even the cooler patter Breaks these fucking chains The sun comes from the dark And it burns me And it hurts me again (Pre-Chorus) Now I am left all alone Left at the bottom I wish someone could hear my screams But I feel as if no one cares for me So I am... (Chorus) Left to die No one cares about me Left to die Why can't someone hear me Left to die Yeah, nothing's alright SO I am Left to die In my own toxic waste Left to die In my own disgrace (Bridge) No No I can't Don't leave me I don't want to be LEFT TO DIE SOMEONE CARRY ME OUT OF MY MELANCHOLY SOMEONE TAKE ME AWAY SOMEONE CARE FOR ME DRAG ME FROM MY PAIN (CHorus) Left to die No one cares about me Left to die Why can't someone hear me Left to die Yeah, nothing's alright SO I am Left to die In my own toxic waste Left to die In my own disgrace ************************************************************************ I am seriously going to stop posting if I get NO comments... The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted April 6, 2007 Author Posted April 6, 2007 Jesus christ....could someone please comment, is my work sooo bad that no one want's to comment? The Park is Back? No way!
Jeezy Posted April 6, 2007 Posted April 6, 2007 I really like the papercut remix also left to die is pretty good keep it up 1
DarknessLover Posted April 11, 2007 Author Posted April 11, 2007 "The Birds" (Verse) As the ravens surround me I feel all alone As the dark consumes me I feel left alone What am I left to do Somedays I wish I could go I know nothing can save me So I-I just wait here all alone (Pre Chorus) But now I see something I see something coming to me I watch someone carry me I have someone care for me (Chorus) As the ravens spit me out I see someone I don't doubt Someone to take me To take me back where I belong I belong in your hand Some place I understand Take me back to your heart (Verse) I've worked with suicide Sometimes, just to take me away Never ended the way it should So the ravens circle me Now I know this is the time Now I know I am so alone I know nothing can save me So I-I just wait here all alone (Pre-Chorus) But now I see something I see something coming to me I watch someone carry me I have someone care for me (Chorus) As the ravens spit me out I see someone I don't doubt Someone to take me To take me back where I belong I belong in your hand Some place I understand Take me back to your heart (Bridge) What the fuck do I do? Should I follow to my demise? Or should just wait and die? The ravens swoop at me I can feel the pain in me I don't know what to do Can't you please help me through (Chorus) As the ravens spit me out I see someone I don't doubt Someone to take me To take me back where I belong I belong in your hand Some place I understand Take me back to your heart The Park is Back? No way!
Jeezy Posted April 11, 2007 Posted April 11, 2007 Pretty damn good I can't understand why no one is giving you some comments on your stuff
DarknessLover Posted April 11, 2007 Author Posted April 11, 2007 Yeah, I am not that well known, get my name out there, I am going to try. The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted April 16, 2007 Author Posted April 16, 2007 "Everything" (Chorus) Everything Everything is fucked Everyone's alone Everywhere there's no soul Everyday I waste Every month I lose Everyone I hate Everything I do Everywhere I go I choose to do (Verse) The world is done There's nothing left We are dead Animals are gone Plantation burns The world just burned There's no one left So what do we do To bring us through This tragic life Everyone is gone (Chorus) Everything Everything is fucked Everyone's alone Everywhere there's no soul Everyday I waste Every month I lose Everyone I hate Everything I do Everywhere I go I choose to do (Verse) I walk alone Through the streets Through the carnage The hallowed walls The crying souls I walk in the wind Past the fires Near the bloody halls The bleeding pain Can drive anyone insane Everything is gone (Chorus) Everything Everything is fucked Everyone's alone Everywhere there's no soul Everyday I waste Every month I lose Everyone I hate Everything I do Everywhere I go I choose to do (Bridge) Can we stop the madness? Can we bring back our lost? I don't want to be Left all alone Can we stop the pain? Can we bring back the dead? Everything's gone wrong Where did we go wrong? (Chorus) Everything Everything is fucked Everyone's alone Everywhere there's no soul Everyday I waste Every month I lose Everyone I hate Everything I do Everywhere I go I choose to do The Park is Back? No way!
UnknownOrigin Posted May 7, 2007 Posted May 7, 2007 There all good man, the hit right in the heart...
DarknessLover Posted May 10, 2007 Author Posted May 10, 2007 "Goodnight" (Verse) As the night turns to day I hide in my own pain The sun will never complete me And I fucking know That I should never be seen What the hell do you expect me to do? When is everything coming to an end (Chorus) I know I am on my own In the cold and dark Without a life a soul So fucking what if I did that then So I can still make ammends So here I fucking go again (Verse) Will you push me back Until I can't be found Here burns the sun again Should I waste my goddamn time And wait around for you I am alone today WHY CAN'T THE SUN GO AWAY (Chorus) [Heavier With Distortion] I know I am on my own In the cold and dark Without a life a soul So fucking what if I did that then So I can still make ammends So here I fucking go again (Bridge) Goodnight Bad Day Why Can't I get the hell away Goodnight Bad Day Why can't... EVERYONE GET THE FUCK AWAY (Chorus) I know I am on my own In the cold and dark Without a life a soul So fucking what if I did that then So I can still make ammends So here I fucking go again The Park is Back? No way!
Greyfoxx Posted May 10, 2007 Posted May 10, 2007 Holy Shit!!! I love GoodNight!!!! Fucking awesome!!!! I love the flow and the feeling and Shit, I love the Whole Damn Fucking thing!!! http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
DarknessLover Posted May 10, 2007 Author Posted May 10, 2007 "Hallowed" (Verse) Hallowed minds all seperate Away they go I sit and hide away All on my own You're so hard Can't you go away I am seldom happy (Chorus) Hallow me out And Break me down Hallow the night And Sell me out Hallow my heart and take me down Hallow me out AND BREAK DOWN (Verse) The night bleeds the light I want to be on my own again Can't you leave me here Don't fucking cry or moan I really don't care anymore I hate today (Chorus) Hallow me out And Break me down Hallow the night And Sell me out Hallow my heart and take me down Hallow me out AND BREAK DOWN (Bridge) Can't I please be free I am so fucking alone Can't I just be me I am wasted and used CAN'T I JUST GO HOME (Chorus) Hallow me out And Break me down Hallow the night And Sell me out Hallow my heart and take me down Hallow me out AND BREAK DOWN The Park is Back? No way!
Greyfoxx Posted May 10, 2007 Posted May 10, 2007 Oohhh i love this one too. I like the feeling and how you used the swearwords but not too much, it's still balanced and a nice song. I'd love to hear it with music, *HINT HINT!* 1 http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
DarknessLover Posted May 11, 2007 Author Posted May 11, 2007 Thank you very much Greyfoxx for actually reading my lyrics! The Park is Back? No way!
Jeezy Posted May 11, 2007 Posted May 11, 2007 Pretty nice... you seem to get better with everything you write
Greyfoxx Posted May 11, 2007 Posted May 11, 2007 Thank you very much Greyfoxx for actually reading my lyrics! You are very much welcome. I like reading yer lyrics. ^_^ http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/597b7053e7f6b9db3d3e47081db54c76.jpg youre so freaking gothic fox' date=' just wait till you meet the emo me. youre like redheaded vampira or something[/quote'] http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/aac84d56c4349b6631041cd70d25f813.gif
DarknessLover Posted May 11, 2007 Author Posted May 11, 2007 I am going to sound really stupid kind of... I have grown used to this whole night to day feeling...Alot of my newer stuff is darker, and more painful than usual, I am finishing a lyric right now, the second verse is rather different for me. Here is the second verse... (Verse 2) The day is sour bitter I know the life you are living With the loud pitter patter The nights tend to bleed together It's the same every single time The land of the free starts to cry People try to denie the truth Continue to lie and contradict It's always the same old shit Aren't you just sick of it? These lyrics are alot mroe different, using more matured words and more against other things than just relationships. My lyrics curse alot more than usual, and I like that. I feel sometimes it's a bit forced, but that's for the readers to decide, no? ~DarknessLover The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted May 12, 2007 Author Posted May 12, 2007 "Another Unnecessary Being" (Verse) Push away the life You had then not now Look away from what You once were Everyone had something original Live the life Of glee and glamour Die by knife By the hours You know your time has come (Chorus) For nothing Is the same now Your so famous Your nothing you once were Not the low life On the streets of cities Your so busy With your goddamn new life (Verse) The day is sour bitter I know the life you are living With the loud pitter patter The nights tend to bleed together It's the same every single time The land of the free starts to cry People try to denie the truth Continue to lie and contradict It's always the same old shit Aren't you just sick of it? (Chorus) For nothing Is the same now Your so famous Your nothing you once were Not the low life On the streets of cities Your so busy With your goddamn new life (Bridge) The night swallows the shallow And you are stripped of the life You see that asshole that you despise He's in the mirror staring back at you Laugh at your own pain and Never forget all this shit that you created It will never be the same (Chorus) For nothing Is the same now Your so famous Your nothing you once were Not the low life On the streets of cities Your so busy With your goddamn new life The Park is Back? No way!
By_My-elf Posted May 12, 2007 Posted May 12, 2007 whoa, o.o Those are good, just thought I'd check out your thread. Keep it up dude their good. [broken External Image]:http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=signature002jo8.jpg Can't get my sig to work
DarknessLover Posted May 12, 2007 Author Posted May 12, 2007 I am VERY HAPPY that people are starting to read! w00t! The Park is Back? No way!
Jeezy Posted May 12, 2007 Posted May 12, 2007 I am VERY HAPPY that people are starting to read! w00t! yeah finally people get to know your stuff:thumbsup:
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