DarknessLover's Music/Poetry Corner

[Black_Angel]

Awww depressing

But very good :]

[DarknessLover]

"Done"

 

(Verse)

 

As I look upon the stars

I can see your face there

It reminds me of the times

You were actually there

But now you go away

I do what I can (Is that not enough?)

I think the right words

But I always speak them wrong

 

(Pre-Chorus)

 

Why can't you see how hard I try?

Can't you tell when I cry?

Is it something so hard to see?

Why can't you see the true me?

 

(Chorus)

 

I have done all I could

I said what I have should

I told you how I feel

Why can't you seem to find my appeal

What do have to do?

To show, what I HAVE BEEN THROUGH

 

(Verse)

 

Hey baby

Things I do seem wrong

But they have there own meaning

I mean to tell the truth

But they lose there feeling

I want you to understand

That I hope you can

Feel my words today

For soon I am to go away

 

(Pre-Chorus)

 

Why can't you see how hard I try?

Can't you tell when I cry?

Is it something so hard to see?

Why can't you see the true me?

 

(Chorus)

 

I have done all I could

I said what I have should

I told you how I feel

Why can't you seem to find my appeal

What do have to do?

To show, what I HAVE BEEN THROUGH

 

(Bridge)

 

Can't you me today

Can't you feel me from yesterday

Can't you see my love

Can't you remember my feelings

[DarknessLover]

Any comments?

[Victim]

Pretty good.. Simple rhyming.. Not really my thing.. When I did write, I tried not to rhyme so much, because i just don't like the way it flows/sounds.. but this still has a nice concept and is good.. so nice work!

[DarknessLover]

What do ya mean about the simple rhyming thing?

[Victim]

(Verse)

 

 

 

(Pre-Chorus)

 

Why can't you see how hard I try?

Can't you tell when I cry?

Is it something so hard to see?

Why can't you see the true me?

 

(Chorus)

 

I have done all I could

I said what I have should

 

 

Just stuff like that.. I just don't think it is soo strong.. Just really basic. but there is nothing wrong with that. It is just not my style, is all.

[DarknessLover]

"Everything for Nothing"

 

(Intro)

 

When all of the world is hectic

We sit here and wait for silence

Yet since we do nothing about it

We get nothing in return

 

(Chorus)

 

Burning red lights

Interupt all of my sleepless nights

I want the day to to get so far away

But I can't seem to keep it around

So why should I just do nothing and sit here

When all I want is so fucking clear

 

(Verse)

 

No I don't

Understand

Why I do nothing

And expect something

Should I guess

Why I'm weak

and left here with nothing

hoping for something

Where do I

Justify

Why I am so weak

and why I am left bleak

Nothings still here

I want to be here

Just leave me alone

 

(Chorus)

 

Burning red lights

Interupt all of my sleepless nights

I want the day to to get so far away

But I can't seem to keep it around

So why should I just do nothing and sit here

When all I want is so fucking clear

 

(Verse)

 

Do I know

Anything

Or are you just leaving

And keep on decieving me

Am I now

Dying

Should I try lying

or try fighting

I need a savior

I need a helper

I am here standing alone

Won't you help me

Or will you leave me

Nothings still here

I want to be here

Just leave me alone

 

(Chorus)

 

Burning red lights

Interupt all of my sleepless nights

I want the day to to get so far away

But I can't seem to keep it around

So why should I just do nothing and sit here

When all I want is so fucking clear

 

(Bridge)

 

And why

SHould I stay here for you

And why

Do I waste myself on you

And why oh why

Would I stay here

Stay here waiting for you

 

[in whisper]

 

Burning red lights

I want the day

To interupt my sleepless nights

But I can't seem

When all I want is

Nothing around here

 

(Chorus)

 

Burning red lights

Interupt all of my sleepless nights

I want the day to get so far away

But I can't seem to keep it around

So why should I just do nothing and sit here

When all I want is so fucking clear

[DarknessLover]

No comments???

[Greyfoxx]

I really like this one. :thumbsup: Bravo!!! I think this one is one of your best!

[DarknessLover]

"You"

 

(Chorus)

 

Fuck did I do

To draw out

The demon in you

Fuck did I say

That made the old you

Get the hell away

Fuck do I do

To see the good

In what's left of you

Fuck do I say

Just so I can

Get the fuck away

Can't I just...

GET THE FUCK AWAY

 

(Verse)

 

FUCK

It all

I am sick of your lies

and your greedy

TEETH

Biting hard

On my arm, making it

BLEED

All over

I tried mroe than you think

To just get

AWAY

Won't you

Just get the fuck away

I am sick of your

SHITTY

Little lies

and all your greedy thoughts

Can't youu just go away?

 

(Chorus)

 

Fuck did I do

To draw out

The demon in you

Fuck did I say

That made the old you

Get the hell away

Fuck do I do

To see the good

In what's left of you

Fuck do I say

Just so I can

Get the fuck away

Can't I just...

GET THE FUCK AWAY

 

(Verse)

 

LIES

Consume

And hollow you out

Ripping you bit by

BITCH

I can't

Listen to you anymore

Because you drive me

INSANE

How things

Seem to always turn out

and how it is about

NEEDING

the truth

Yet it seems so far away

What more can I

SAY

About the same old shit

Can't you just go away?

 

(Chorus)

 

Fuck did I do

To draw out

The demon in you

Fuck did I say

That made the old you

Get the hell away

Fuck do I do

To see the good

In what's left of you

Fuck do I say

Just so I can

Get the fuck away

Can't I just...

GET THE FUCK AWAY

 

(Bridge)

 

You

Look at me with this hateful stare

You

Look at me with these painful eyes

You

Look at me, controlling my own direction

I AM FUCKING SICK OF YOU

[DarknessLover]

Any comments? Dare to share?

[Friðbjörn]

it's not your best, I think, but it does have a lot of emotion...

[DarknessLover]

Yeah, I am not very proud of it, but if it flows, why not let it out right?

[Friðbjörn]

of course. if you need to vent, you do it

[DarknessLover]

"No Reason"

 

(Verse)

 

No one stands here beside me

Why do I seem so weak today

No one comes to defend me

Why must I run away?

 

The flashing street lights stare at me

No one tries to see what's wrong

I leave a path of anguish

Hurting all that come my way

 

(Pre-Chorus)

 

No

It's not like I mean to

No

It's not like I want too

No

I want to be saved

 

(Chorus)

 

Why can't someone help me

Why can't someone save me

Why must I walk alone

Why must I have no home

Who are you to say this

Who are you to save me

 

(Verse)

 

Someone come to help me

I can't walk this way alone

I've lost my reason to believe

I've lost my reason to live

 

(Pre-Chorus)

 

No

It's not like I mean to

No

It's not like I want too

No

I want to be saved

 

(Verse)

 

Should I call out for help?

Should I cry out in need?

I've lost me reason to believe

I've lost all my reasoning

 

(Chorus)

 

Why can't someone help me

Why can't someone save me

Why must I walk alone

Why must I have no home

Who are you to say this

Who are you to save me

 

(Bridge)

 

But no

I've done all I could

But no

One can help me

 

Can't you

See that I've tried

Can't you

See that I've tried

 

(Outro)

 

I've got no reason

Reason to believe

To Believe you're here

You're hear for me

For me to walk again

walk again down the same road

Same road of pain

[Greyfoxx]

OOo i really like this one. This one is good at getting the emotions across to the reader/listener. I really like this one. BRAVO!

[DarknessLover]

Thanks Grey, I like it better than the one before it, I have a hard time at expressing anger

[DarknessLover]

Any other comments

[DarknessLover]

Something I will never Be

 

(verse)

 

It's almost like

You're not the same

You have just changed again

Bend you ways

So it looks okay

Make it okay for people today

Unlike you, I know what to do

So I don't need to say

"That I've changed my ways"

I'll stay the same

I won't fucking change anyway

 

(Pre-Chorus)

 

Now you're something

Now you're radio friendly

Now you're now you're

Just another name in fame

 

(Chorus)

 

But no

you don't want to hear this

But you

Know it's fucking true

But I

Think sometimes about the shit you put me through

But we

All know you're just another clone

 

(Verse)

 

People say

They couldn't handle

The way you guys all sound

But now you know

you're just another name

Nothing unique

Nothing magnificent

And there's something

you didn't know since

But now I don't care

Since I am the way I will always be

and fuck your ways

It's all the same

You're jsut the same as everyone

 

(Pre-Chorus)

 

Now you're something

Now you're radio friendly

Now you're now you're

Just another name in fame

 

(Chorus)

 

But no

you don't want to hear this

But you

Know it's fucking true

But I

Think sometimes about the shit you put me through

But we

All know you're just another clone

 

(Bridge)

 

Don't you accuse me of

Something I will never be

Don't you wish that I was

Somethign I will never be

Don't you know that's

Something I will never be

Don't you dare say that I am

Something I will never be

 

(Chorus)

 

But no

you don't want to hear this

But you

Know it's fucking true

But I

Think sometimes about the shit you put me through

But we

All know you're just another clone

 

Just another fuckign clone

That is something I will enver be

You're just another clone

Which everyone seems to be

Your ways have been cloned

That is something that shouldn't be

Just another fucking clone

That is something

I

Will

Never

Be

[Greyfoxx]

I like it a lot. Nice message being put through to the people who read/hear it....well, not "nice" but ya get the point. But, yah *claps* I LIKE IT!

[DarknessLover]

Thank ye Foxxy, any other comments ^_^

[DarknessLover]

"Chase and Die"

 

(Verse)

 

Death

Death

Death

Death

Blood is suffocating

Your pain is necessary

And you are my adversary

Fight

Fight

Fight

Fight

Crack a fucking neck

And smash a fucking face

Your scream is complimentary

You can't escape from me

 

(Chorus)

 

Fight

With me

You Are

The Enemy

You

Will die

And I

Will fight (tonight)

Blood Murder Death

Blood Murder Death

Blood Murder Death

Blood Murder Death

 

(Verse)

 

Blood

Blood

Blood

Blood

Fear in your teary eye

Pleasure to my hateful mind

And I will lead

Run

Run

Run

Run

You cannot get away

Straight to this very day

It will end

End TONIGHT

 

(Chorus)

 

Fight

With me

You Are

The Enemy

You

Will die

And I

Will fight (tonight)

Blood Murder Death

Blood Murder Death

Blood Murder Death

Blood Murder Death

 

(Bridge)

 

Everyone look away

No you cannot get away

You will run and you will scream

You will trip and you will fall

Then you will hear the chink of a bloody axe

Still you cannot crawl away

Body full of deadly fear

I am getting closer, getting near

Don't feel no fucking mercy

No longer do I walk bloodthirsty

 

(Chorus)

 

Fight

With me

You Are

The Enemy

You

Will die

And I

Will fight (tonight)

Blood Murder Death

Blood Murder Death

Blood Murder Death

Blood Murder Death

 

(Outro)

 

Run die

Fall die

Axe Die

Death die

Run die

Fall die

Axe Die

Death die

[DarknessLover]

"Happy Chainsaw Man"

 

(Intro)

 

You aren't lucky

I will be back

Don't worry

 

(Verse)

 

As I look into your eye

I feel the hatred fill my life

Acid on my every word

You best not get smart again

It will be your fucking end

 

(chorus)

 

Happy Happy Chainsaw Man

Lurks behind any corner

If you put a tough facade

He will put an axe through your mind

 

 

(Verse)

 

Even once you've moved away

And you've got a brand new life

You will still be followed

if you shortcut through a dark alley

You will scream

 

(Chorus)

 

Happy Happy Chainsaw Man

Lurks behind any corner

If you put a tough facade

He will put an axe through your mind

 

(Bridge)

 

Happy (Happy)

Chain (Chain)

Saw (Saw)

Man (Man)

A (A)

Nother (Nother)

Vic (Vic)

Tim (Tim)

[DarknessLover]

Any commnets?

[DarknessLover]

"Hey There"

 

I feel like I need to explain my last two lyrics, by writing lyrics

 

 

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(verse)

I may have changed

To someone you don't realy know

Sometimes things really have to go

I am sorry to admit

I am just sick of it

I am no longer who I was

 

Lemme just say

This will be one of the last times

I have changed

I am not the same way

People change

It's all the same

 

So sorry I have to go

 

(Chorus)

 

Sorry

Sorry

I am not the same

Sorry

Sorry

My rules have changed

Sorry

Sorry

I have to go

I just think you should know

 

(Verse)

 

Hey there

Don't you worry

I think it's just a phase

It's a part of life

Something we all do once awhile

I might be back, don't worry

 

Hey there, Hey there

I am not the only one

People change it's not so different

I am sure you've met some people

That had to go away

So I am not the only one

 

So sorry I have to go

 

(Chorus)

 

Sorry

Sorry

I am not the same

Sorry

Sorry

My rules have changed

Sorry

Sorry

I have to go

I just think you should know

 

(Bridge)

 

I think you should know

That I'm not gone

Just faded away

I will come back

Some other day

I am not lost

Just missing

Just missing

Hey there

Don't you worry

It's just faded

Fading away

I am not gone

Just not here today

 

(CHorus)

 

Sorry

Sorry

I am not the same

Sorry

Sorry

My rules have changed

Sorry

Sorry

I have to go

I really have to go now