Jeezy Posted September 15, 2007 Posted September 15, 2007 seems like I missed some you still got good stuff going on
DarknessLover Posted September 16, 2007 Author Posted September 16, 2007 Are you sure? did you listen to Chase & Die, and Happy Chainsaw Man? The Park is Back? No way!
Jeezy Posted September 18, 2007 Posted September 18, 2007 Are you sure? did you listen to Chase & Die, and Happy Chainsaw Man? Nope I don't think so
DarknessLover Posted September 18, 2007 Author Posted September 18, 2007 Read those, you might have a diff opinion, they aren't far back at all The Park is Back? No way!
LPShinodaFM Posted September 21, 2007 Posted September 21, 2007 "Everything for Nothing" was amazing! i loved it. And I also liked "Something I'll Never Be". You've got a powerful use of words. I like your stuff, keep it up. P.S. "Happy Chainsaw Man" was so eerie, loved it as well. ^^
DarknessLover Posted September 21, 2007 Author Posted September 21, 2007 Happy Chainsaw Man, and Chase & Die are what I consider "Metal" lyrics, i am not sure though The Park is Back? No way!
LPShinodaFM Posted September 21, 2007 Posted September 21, 2007 Yeah I guess it does lean towards that. But it would depend on the music, or just how you imagine the music in your head.
DarknessLover Posted September 21, 2007 Author Posted September 21, 2007 Well, I don't imagine anymore, I am starting to music to some of them The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted September 21, 2007 Author Posted September 21, 2007 (Verse) Would everyone just stop Give me a minute My life is moving fast When it shouldn't I don't understand what's happening All the things just come passing Can't time just slow down Let me take a breather I don't know what's worse To face myself To face time itself I lost all grip upon reality I lost all of my normality I can even speak with clarity My words blend and match coherently So all I ask it just STOP (Chorus) Give me a second alone Give me some time to be happy Give me a day to my own Life is driving me crazy Give me a second tonight Give me a second if it's alright Give me some time alone Life is going too fucking crazy (Verse) My mind Blending facts like time dates and as a matter of fact I should probably be somewhere else right now But I don't have the time to get there Would it be so bad if it just slowed down Let me go back to my old town Somewhere comfortable and familiar Not something with the hustle bustle Fuck it all I have to do this Fuck it all I am sick of this I want to be left to my own Let me have time alone I want to be left alone Would it be so bad to ask for that time Sometime where I am not constantly working So all I ask is just STOP (Chorus) Give me a second alone Give me some time to be happy Give me a day to my own Life is driving me crazy Give me a second tonight Give me a second if it's alright Give me some time alone Life is going too fucking crazy (Bridge) WHAT IS HAPPENING I CAN'T SEE MYSELF TONIGHT LIFE IS GOING QUICKLY CAN'T I TURN BACK TIME WHAT IS HAPPENING I CAN'T SEE ANYTHING TONIGHT LIFE IS FASTER THAN SUPERMAN WHY CAN'T I JUST LIVE MY LIFE JUST GIVE ME 5 SECONDS 1...2...TOO LONG (Chorus) Give me a second alone Give me some time to be happy Give me a day to my own Life is driving me crazy Give me a second tonight Give me a second if it's alright Give me some time alone Life is going too fucking crazy LIFE-IS-GO-ING-CRAZY The Park is Back? No way!
LPShinodaFM Posted September 21, 2007 Posted September 21, 2007 Well, I don't imagine anymore, I am starting to music to some of them That sounds awesome. I'd love to actually listen to some of the outcomes that you've produced. Your new one is absolutely fantastic!!! Loved the flow, loved the idea, loved it! LIFE IS FASTER THAN SUPERMAN I must say, I grinned at that one.
DarknessLover Posted September 21, 2007 Author Posted September 21, 2007 I am trying to add a bit of comedic feel to some of my songs, not heavy amounts, but songs like that, just need it ya know? The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted September 22, 2007 Author Posted September 22, 2007 any other comments? The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted September 28, 2007 Author Posted September 28, 2007 anyother commments? The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted October 2, 2007 Author Posted October 2, 2007 "I am Back" (Verse) Once again I am here And nothing can keep me far Far away from you Somethings were meant to be But I think it's just cause we are kids But how should I know How would we know Love is just childs play For that is what they all say But i was never the one to really listen To the rules that they give (Chorus) And whoa-oh I am back again And whoa-oh I am here to say I am never too far I am never too far away I won't be gone for long again Babe I am never to far Won't you stay with me tonight (Verse) How's it been there without me I never really wanted to leave That's just how things seem to go Never really that they would Come up to me and say Won't you stay Won't you stay Sorry my friends but It is my time to go But don't worry I am not gone for long (Chorus) And whoa-oh I am back again And whoa-oh I am here to say I am never too far I am never too far away I won't be gone for long again Babe I am never to far Won't you stay with me tonight (Bridge) Hey, I am never gone from you Hey, I am never gone to you Hey, I am never gone I am never gone (Chorus) And whoa-oh I am back again And whoa-oh I am here to say I am never too far I am never too far away I won't be gone for long again Babe I am never to far Won't you stay with me tonight The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted October 14, 2007 Author Posted October 14, 2007 "Sick of You" (Verse) Won't you stop Playing with my mind I am not A fuckign toy Why are you out to Destroy I don't really know Why you try You're a failure In disguise You're nothing but a Sad pathetic Over dramatic Burnt out memory And I (Chorus) I won't fuck around I will just tell the truth I'm really fucking sick of you I won't disgrace my name like you have I won't fake the way that I am I'm really fucking sick of you (Verse) Twist and Turn Can't sleep at night I know that's the way it is for you Don't you know? You're a scam False facts displayed In museam Why do you Continue your lies Continue displaying the bullshit This is the last Fucking time I will waste myself Do I? Oh I won't waste anymoer And I (Chorus) I won't fuck around I will just tell the truth I'm really fucking sick of you I won't disgrace my name like you have I won't fake the way that I am I'm really fucking sick of you (Bridge) Lie about Who you are Don't try to tell the truth You've set up lines Set up false threaded knives Lie about What you are Don't you try to come back I've set up knvies Set up true ways to slice your lines (Chorus) I won't fuck around I will just tell the truth I'm really fucking sick of you I won't disgrace my name like you have I won't fake the way that I am I'm really fucking sick of you No really trust me I am really fucking sick of you The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted October 16, 2007 Author Posted October 16, 2007 "The End As We Know It" I wrote this song for my new story "The End as We Know It" ************************************************************************** (Verse) Hey there kid What are you looking for? You must not know What is waiting for you in the dark room The city is gone Your friends are no longer amongst us If you do see them Give them your best...shot that is I can't believe you don't see What is really going on The war has begun It's just another game Nothing is the same as it was Christ can't help you today (Chorus) Don't try and reach out There is nothing left for you here Don't try to even fight back The end is coming closer Don't try to understand why It's the end as we know it And we are not alright (Verse) Hey there man Don't you freak out The thought may be overwhelming But you will have to deal with it Don't you even trip kid One mistake and they'll have your mind The battle has just only begun Yet I feel as though They've already won Creeping in the city streets Lurking in the back alleyways Gun fire and screaming pain Will slowly consume your brain Nothing will ever be the same And Christ won't help you today (Chorus) Don't try and reach out There is nothing left for you here Don't try to even fight back The end is coming closer Don't try to understand why It's the end as we know it And we are not alright (Bridge) They have to your door, smashing moaning more and more Go to your bedroom window, crashing open they pour in and pour Load your gun aim and stay, cocking shooting one by one Keep on trying, screaming crying your time is almost none Out of bullets, and you're done It's the end as we know it And you're done The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted October 20, 2007 Author Posted October 20, 2007 "All Alone Now" (Verse) I am sick of being pleasant to the mind Sick of being nice to the lies No longer listening to the shit Sick of taking hit by hit My words no longer full of niceties No more following your necesseties (bitch) I'm on my own now and you're alone now But look again, who's the one crying? Sick of listening to your lies Sick of following your disguise I'm on my own again Free again and look again, who's the one crying? (Chorus) I'm on my own now All alone now Do you see me standing above you I am the one who won the fight It may not be right But I just don't fucking care You're on your own now All alone now Crying at the bottom of an ocean I am the one who won the fight It may not be right But I really don't fucking care (Verse) Your verbal poison no longer effects me Now I feel it to be my necessety I dare you to scream at me again I tell you once more "think again" You're not the leader You're the deciever You're the fucking failure Who's the one failing to live now? Sick of listening to your shit Sick of following your facade You're all alone again, cold again Who's the one failing to live now? (Chorus) I'm on my own now All alone now Do you see me standing above you I am the one who won the fight It may not be right But I just don't fucking care You're on your own now All alone now Crying at the bottom of an ocean I am the one who won the fight It may not be right But I really don't fucking care (Bridge) I Don't need your shit I Am sick of it I Don't need you now I Will never want you around YOU Are on your own YOU Are all alone YOU Need someone YOU Will never get anyone (Chorus) I'm on my own now All alone now Do you see me standing above you I am the one who won the fight It may not be right But I just don't fucking care You're on your own now All alone now Crying at the bottom of an ocean I am the one who won the fight It may not be right But I really don't fucking care The Park is Back? No way!
LPShinodaFM Posted October 21, 2007 Posted October 21, 2007 :X I haven't commented here in awhile... "I Am Back" ~ Very nice, loved the spirit in that one; nice upturn from the darker stuff "Sick of You" Meh it's okay, but kinda didn't stand too out to me "The End As We Know It" gave me some pretty nice visions :] "All Alone Now" Loved the chorus, very impressive Congratz on your good job while I bow my head here in self-disgrace... Whatever happened to my thread? :lol:
DarknessLover Posted October 21, 2007 Author Posted October 21, 2007 lmfao what did happen to your thread? "I Am BacK" - I think is way too poppy for my style "Sick of You" - Really? I thought that would have been one of my better ones! "The End as We Know It" - Yeah I like that one, it's nice to write about zombies lol "All Alone Now" - Isn't hate just romantic? lmfao The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted October 26, 2007 Author Posted October 26, 2007 any othercomments WRITERS BLOCK yeah, it sucks The Park is Back? No way!
LPShinodaFM Posted October 26, 2007 Posted October 26, 2007 lmfao what did happen to your thread? "I Am BacK" - I think is way too poppy for my style "Sick of You" - Really? I thought that would have been one of my better ones! "The End as We Know It" - Yeah I like that one, it's nice to write about zombies lol "All Alone Now" - Isn't hate just romantic? lmfao :] Well see your style is definitely very well defined, but sometimes there's a lot of repetition of I guess, feelings and use of words of the similar sort. So it was nice to see some different moods expressed through "I Am Back". "All Alone Now" was just the shit, lol so yeah My thread...? [lmao]
DarknessLover Posted October 26, 2007 Author Posted October 26, 2007 "Gone Now" (Verse) Who are you To denie me To lie to me To decline me Who are you To scream at me Curse at me look at me that way.. GO! (Pre-Chorus) You've no right No justification No validation Who the fuck are you even? (Verse) Who do you think you are To condscend upon me To declare your superiority Who do you think you are to crack the whip at me To say you're better than me... GET AWAY! (Pre-Chorus) You've no right No justification No validation Who the fuck are you even? Well I know one thing (Chorus) I am not you're Sick lonely puppy I am not you're Weak pathetic stray I am not you're friend No think again I am not here to stay So I hope I can get away (Verse) What am I to Do when I am on my own Do what I want is what i'll do What are you to Do when i've gone away Just stay away I am gone AWAY (Chorus) I am not you're Sick lonely puppy I am not you're Weak pathetic stray I am not you're friend No think again I am not here to stay So I hope I can get away (Bridge) It's a pain aint it? When what you had is gone So far away It's a pain ain't it? When all you were Has disapeared It's a fucking pain ain't it? When you had is gone It's left you alone It's a fucking pain ain't it? When all you were Was a insignifcant bore (Pre-Chorus) You've no right No justification No validation Who the fuck are you even? Well I know one thing You've no right No justification No validation Who the fuck are you even? Well I know one thing (Verse 1) Who are you To denie me To lie to me To decline me Who are you To scream at me Curse at me look at me that way.. (Verse 2) Who do you think you are To condscend upon me To declare your superiority Who do you think you are to crack the whip at me To say you're better than me... (Verse 3) What am I to Do when I am on my own Do what I want is what i'll do What are you to Do when i've gone away Just stay away I am gone AWAY (Outro) I'm gone now Gone now Gone now I've gone away The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted November 22, 2007 Author Posted November 22, 2007 "Black Meadow" (Verse) Black Meadow Among the rising sun Standing cold from the night before Black Meadow Give me my fucking rights I will stand here I will fight Black Meadow You can't shock me Nor can you freeze me Black Meadow I hope you know now Your time has come (Chorus) Black Meadow You can't beat this I will survive Fist to fit Black Meadow I will not go down Trade eye for eye Let's end this now (verse) Red sky I refuse to die Before your lies Red Sky I stand alone I want to see you take Throw me down Black Meadow Red Sky Whie Ocean Whatever the terms I'll give back the money earned Your time has come Black Meadow Your time has come (Chorus) Black Meadow You can't beat this I will survive Fist to fit Black Meadow I will not go down Trade eye for eye Let's end this now (Brdge) I will not go And I will find my home And you will see my might and you will soon understand NO don't take your chance NO Throw your fist up NO Get ready for the final round NO I will find my home NO I will not go (Chorus) Black Meadow You can't beat this I will survive Fist to fit Black Meadow I will not go down Trade eye for eye Let's end this now The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted December 9, 2007 Author Posted December 9, 2007 "Our Life" Life contains many things that are incomplete From the trees, leaves and grass to you and me Things change with every step in the street Words lose meaning TRUST loses sympathy War lies polititics death hypocrisy Every day every hour The world is depleting slowly Watch as the leaders begin to cower They hide in fear knowing the end is near The hours pass by bomb by bomb we die Everyone scared, kids blinded by tears There's just one thing left I need to know Why did this all have to happen today Why did my family have to go away? The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted January 25, 2008 Author Posted January 25, 2008 My Old Creative Forum I just feel I should just tell everyone... If you are into creative writing, or even have a band or just want to meet more people, I have a creative forum at http://creativeinc.all-up.com/portal.htm I am sure some to most of you remember it, and why not come back, I promise I will pay more attention! The Park is Back? No way!
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