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Esaul, Friðbjörn & DarknessLover will post their song/poem/or rap here in DarkOrange. They have until Feb. 1, 07, at 3:30am Mountain Time (US/ Canada) to post them, 36 hours. And voting will be over at 3:30pm that same day (48 hours). Please PM all votes to "Shadowed Heart" (no underscore). Good luck.

-Riss

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{Fool me once, shame on you; fool me twice, shame on me.}

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No specifications... Anything, as long as it qualifies for a poem (yeah.. that's all a song or a rap is... but with music or something). And under score is _. Like instead of "Shadowed Heart", people type "Shadowed_Heart"...

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I have no idea when that deadline expires

I dunno what time that is lol...mountain something

anyway I'll just post lol

 

 

nobody's gonna vote for a rap unless it's something spectacularly meaningful...so voila, a poem

 

 

[i really like anecdotes lol]

 

when they killed my father

they left one thing behind

a clue of mystic nature

for me the child to find

 

encrypted so bizarrely

it took a while to break

until I found the thing that

was their big mistake

 

so now I knew about it

who the killing did

wreaking havoc would be

a tough act for a kid

 

now you might think that

I failed at getting back

but that's not how it went down

I would soon attack

 

and I was mad and angry

I had no control

but with wit and power

I beat every soul

 

on the ground of battle

I stood still alone

only one surviving

I walked back home.

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"The Christina Song"

 

(Verse)

 

I have proven so much to you

I did things I thought I would never do

I changed who I was

I changed everything I used to be

Everything I once was

Is now just the enemy

Love is such a great thing

Especiallly when I can share it with you

Everything I ever need

Is waiting for me

When I can see you

 

(Chorus)

 

The Devils Shadow

is no longer following me

I can finally see

You are what

I will always need

Noone else will understand

Why I always

Take love at hand

At Hand...

 

(Verse)

 

The shadow of hate

I will no longer, have to debate

You may not realise

But there is nothing I despise

When I look in your

Beautiful brown eyes

I will always listen

To all of your problems

I don't care what you do wrong

It will never affect

What I will think

You could punch me

And laugh at all of my petty mistakes

But I don't care

I Love you

 

(Chorus)

 

The Devils Shadow

is no longer following me

I can finally see

You are what

I will always need

Noone else will understand

Why I always

Take love at hand

At Hand...

 

(Bridge)

 

Love me,

Hold me,

I will love you despite everything

Kiss me,

Need me,

You will always be loved by me

 

*******************************************************************************************

 

That's my song

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For You

 

Go back to those days we use to love

How can it be a reminiscent of?

Those words you have said have wounded me

It left me so blinded I couldn't see

 

Take away all my tears

Take away all my fears

Take away my love for you

 

Take away all my tears

Take away all my fears

Take away my love for you

 

For you

For you

For you

 

Go back to the time where we first met

How could I forget?

Take all the pain you've given me

I wish to let go I wish to be free

 

Take away all my tears

Take away all my fears

Take away my love for you

 

Take away all my tears

Take away all my fears

Take away my love for you

 

For you

For you

For you

 

(Tears are falling down my face)

(My mind cannot erase)

(Sitting alone I'm all confused)

(Telling myself how much I loved you)

 

(Tears are falling down my face)

(My mind cannot erase)

(Sitting alone I'm all confused)

(Telling myself how much I loved you)

 

Take away all my tears

Take away all my fears

Take away my love for you

 

Take away all my tears

Take away all my fears

Take away my love for you

 

For you

For you

For you

 

(Tears are falling down my face)

(My mind cannot erase)

 

_____________________

 

The way this is sung makes the song ~ 2 minutes and 20+ seconds with the instrumental parts in my head.

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