Shadowed Heart Posted June 8, 2007 Posted June 8, 2007 Jeezy vs.diana will post their poems in this thread in Green. After both contestants have posted their entries, users may vote for their favorite. PM your votes to me (( Shadowed Heart )). Do not use the poll to vote.. Please don't vote in your own thread. The winner(s) will move on to the next round and compete again with different people and different poems. Good luck. -Riss. ( sorry, i screwed up the polls, that's why i need you to PM them to me instead ) Quote {Fool me once, shame on you; fool me twice, shame on me.} http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/2f43bfab2b64268a8552c7de93432ec4.jpg Write "Love" On Your Arm. MIH Photography. Myspace. Facebook.
diana Posted June 8, 2007 Posted June 8, 2007 Lol...now that's funny...I guess someone's gonna have to delete it... Oh, and Jeez...when are you posting? Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
Jeezy Posted June 8, 2007 Posted June 8, 2007 Lol...now that's funny...I guess someone's gonna have to delete it... Oh, and Jeez...when are you posting? i don't know...how much time do we have? Quote
diana Posted June 8, 2007 Posted June 8, 2007 i don't know...how much time do we have? I don't know... I'm probably gonna post an old one anyway... Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
Shadowed Heart Posted June 8, 2007 Author Posted June 8, 2007 err... well, i screwed up the poll. i don't know who voted already... hm... but, the poll closes in 4 days. so. just get it up before then i guess. i'm gonna have to receive that votes through PM this time. sorry. Quote {Fool me once, shame on you; fool me twice, shame on me.} http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/2f43bfab2b64268a8552c7de93432ec4.jpg Write "Love" On Your Arm. MIH Photography. Myspace. Facebook.
diana Posted June 8, 2007 Posted June 8, 2007 Ummm...okay...here's mine...was written in a depressive mood...so...not a happy poem... The Suffering The feeling inside I cannot describe It hurts and burns Got to let it out I hate and love At the same time Same person Who turned my life upside down Cannot live this way Need the cure Need you Need your kiss Need your love… EDIT: but, the poll closes in 4 days. I think that's not enough time...there should be at least one week available... Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
Jeezy Posted June 9, 2007 Posted June 9, 2007 Here's My Entry "Blessed" A man risked his life to write the words. A man hung upside down with spray paint to write the words on a girder fifty feet above a highway. And his beloved, the next morning driving to work... His words are not meant to be so unique. Does she recognize his handwriting? Did he hint to her at her doorstep the night before of "something special, darling, tomorrow"? And did he call her at work expecting her to faint with delight at his celebration of her, his passion, his risk? She will know I love her now, the world will know my love for her! A man risked his life to write the words. Love is like this at the bone, we hope, we love. It's like this, Sweatheart, all sore and dumb and dangerous, ignited, blessed...always, regardless, no exceptions, always in blazing matters like these: blessed. Quote
Shadowed Heart Posted June 9, 2007 Author Posted June 9, 2007 I know it's not enough time. I said that votes will have to be PMed to me. I'm going to stop counting votes on Friday. Quote {Fool me once, shame on you; fool me twice, shame on me.} http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/2f43bfab2b64268a8552c7de93432ec4.jpg Write "Love" On Your Arm. MIH Photography. Myspace. Facebook.
DarknessLover Posted June 10, 2007 Posted June 10, 2007 Wow both amaazing!!!! Quote The Park is Back? No way!
diana Posted June 10, 2007 Posted June 10, 2007 Jeez, love yours...great theme... DL...thanks...but mine is just something so simple and...Idk why I even entered this contest...lol... Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8b479714c2981449a34f1f582adc8fb2.jpg ...ljubim...<3
GraDoN Posted June 10, 2007 Posted June 10, 2007 wow nice poems, idk diana's poem is just a little better to me :> Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/095443c5f5914cdd05b1d389456c201e.jpg http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/8df3638f80a4f010e06ef2c959f426e8.gif http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/fe80ab99471398f0ef121d8f90c31038.jpg
Black_Angel Posted June 10, 2007 Posted June 10, 2007 I love yours Jeezy, it's beautiful. Quote i still love you, girl from mars.
DarknessLover Posted June 10, 2007 Posted June 10, 2007 I like Jeezy's, it's Very good and deep Diana, yours is just beautiful Quote The Park is Back? No way!
Shadowed Heart Posted June 12, 2007 Author Posted June 12, 2007 i really love them both. but one more than the other although i'm not voting for any of them. anyways.... votes are due on the 15th Quote {Fool me once, shame on you; fool me twice, shame on me.} http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/2f43bfab2b64268a8552c7de93432ec4.jpg Write "Love" On Your Arm. MIH Photography. Myspace. Facebook.
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