{Wood'z Journal Act 2}

[woodyloveslinkin]

Okay here are some brainstorming ideas for the next one, I am also thinking about the next story and maybe killing the epilogue to Tourniquet or ending it there.................

[open with what is called the Next Generation which is the name given to the people who survived Spyral's regime]

[first chapter is dedicated to the dark mind of an unknown person]

[has anyone seen the fifth element and the kind of dress the council wears in it? maybe something like that. not gothic, because that what was sarah's trademark clothing]

 

 

Man, I need to go for a walk to think things through.

But atm, I am really bored and looking for a soundtrack to Tourniquet. I thought of 1 song last night, Inside the Fire - Disturbed (shuddup rav)

[ugur90]

Don't forget ..Take a bow by muse

[woodyloveslinkin]

Ugur -

 

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[woodyloveslinkin]

I got tagged again -

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Marie in the background.

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Me and Josh at trivia night

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At the drinking festival we knew as carols by candlelight

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[woodyloveslinkin]

Going to an Xmas party tonight that my friend Josh has invited me to. Got another one tomorrow night but am conteplating not going because Dad's back is playing up again.

 

I babysitted Huon last night while Beck went late night shopping and we took some of the most adorable photos together. I rather look kinda spastic in one of them. I'll show LPF how cute my 3 1/2 year old Nephew is -

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Me and Huon watching his Spiderman dvd. Not too bad that DVD got me intrigued.

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Smile Huon !!!

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And that one, is Whingey, cos he whinges a lot, my sister's cat.

[Ravynlee]

Wow, Huon's growing up, he's such a cutie ^^

And Whingey looks a helluvalot (in that pic) like my cat Zed.

Oh and now I can put a face to Marie. Good.

Have fun at the party/parties.

[woodyloveslinkin]

He is such a cutie and he's such a little photowhore!

I had fun tonight, was learning German from a strange Dutch lady and played pool, that's about it. Nothing else to do really. I'm considering starting the sequal to Tourniquet on the weekend, maybe...ouch my head hurts lol

[woodyloveslinkin]

Well, I slept over at Marie's last night and I woke up to a bitchy and grumpy Marie, please don't get me started on the issues that she was on about.

Josh dropped me home, and then I had to go downtown soon after, and I met up with him again to get back some money that he owed me, cos right now, I'm seriously broke.

I ran into hmm...let's list the friends I ran into -

> Liz

> Tiffany

> Emily < I ran into her twice lol

> Alice

> Zoe

And nothing much has happened here in my dull life, that's worth telling.

Marie had a bitch on about how I'm choosing to dye my hair over getting infills for my nails. But *meh* I was going to get some ink done in a couple of weeks, but am putting it off until my 20th and it's of the Tourniquet cross that I had up here a while ago.

Listening to The White Stripes album (their first one and self titled) and to a song called "The Big Three Killed My Baby". My brother's coming up tomorrow with my sister in law, so that's something to look forward to. Yay.

[Ravynlee]

Sounds like you'll have / had fun. Yay on the ink! Sounds like Marie's more like me than even I'd like to admit Got your message. Oh and what colour with the hair?

[woodyloveslinkin]

Not sure. But right now it's got bad roots, and its a dark shade of blonde in it.

This is what Vasiab from LPA made from dollzmania.com , my Greek friend who lives just near Penny made me -

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Yes I am an angel <3 vasiab.

"My group" on LPA raided the boards the other day with dolls lol.

[Ravynlee]

Aww. Purty.

And okidoki.

Just curious, and sth has been bugging me a few days; is the misspelling in your sig deliberate or...?

[woodyloveslinkin]

I told you I couldn't spell for shit lately, last night lol.

[Shadowed Heart]

I hvaen't been albe to slepl vrey wlel ltelay ehietr!

 

ASOL, did you konw taht as lnog as the fsrit and lsat ltretes of a wrod are in the rhigt sotps, you can slitl raed it!?

 

I fnid taht vrey fantahisig.

 

I lvoe you Sraah! How hvae you been?

 

 

 

 

 

(And just because I don't want to get in trouble::

I haven't been able to spell very well lately either!

ALSO, did you know that as long as the first and last letters of a word are in the right spots, you can still read it!?

 

I find that very fascinating.

 

I love you Sarah! How have you been?)

 

 

XD I'm retarded, I know.

[Ravynlee]

ASOL, did you konw taht as lnog as the fsrit and lsat ltretes of a wrod are in the rhigt sotps, you can slitl raed it!?

 

I fnid taht vrey fantahisig.

Makes two of us!

And you're not retarded

[woodyloveslinkin]

I hvaen't been albe to slepl vrey wlel ltelay ehietr!

 

ASOL, did you konw taht as lnog as the fsrit and lsat ltretes of a wrod are in the rhigt sotps, you can slitl raed it!?

 

I fnid taht vrey fantahisig.

 

I lvoe you Sraah! How hvae you been?

 

 

 

 

 

(And just because I don't want to get in trouble::

I haven't been able to spell very well lately either!

ALSO, did you know that as long as the first and last letters of a word are in the right spots, you can still read it!?

 

I find that very fascinating.

 

I love you Sarah! How have you been?)

 

 

XD I'm retarded, I know.

 

I've been very good. Yourself? Yes I did know that! I learnt that at my time at uni (and yes I was paying attention!) Makes two of us, shit spellers.

 

And I love you too Riss! p.s. you have the name of one of my year 12 best friends, who's currently living in Dubbo.

 

Makes two of us!

And you're not retarded

 

And what...I am?

 

I am currently making a note on facebook, cos I'm bored and Ugur and I thought of this the other day but did nothing about it. Some guy that I know had the height to tell me, after reading the summary of tourniquet on a facebook note of mine, tells me that it won't get published. So Josh and Mikka ripped into him about it. Here's the note that I am making, it's a soundtrack to Tourniquet if it was ever a screen play -

 

1. Inside the Fire - Disturbed

2. Remedy - Seether

3. The Kids Aren't Alright - The Offspring

4. Stink Fist - Tool

5. Planet Hell - Nightwish

6. Trail of Broken Hearts - Dragonforce

7. Kenji - Fort Minor

8. Not Falling - Mudvayne

9. Coma White - Marilyn Manson

10.

 

 

20. Conquest - The White Stripes

 

 

It's not finished yet....

[Ravynlee]

I actually like most of those (that I know) and yeah, good choice. As for others' opinions, you know what, people gave DaVinci shit too and now we revere the man as a genius! Point being there's critics no matter what you do, and most are too insecure to do anything about making themselves happy or known, they're happier tearing others down to boost their over-inflated egos. In short; f**k 'em. Who are they to you? No ones. So what does the opinion of nobodies matter to you? That's how I look at it. Of course no matter how brave a face you put on criticisms to writing especially hurts because it's part of you, it opens a degree of vulnerability in all of us brave enough to share it - but try not to listen and go ahead with your plans. I know you're tough so you'll probably reply it didn't mean anything anyway - it's good others stepped in to defend you, but at the end of the day it sucks but that's the nature of the business we're in my girl.

Oh and to answer your question... *silence*

XD

Just kiddin'

[woodyloveslinkin]

I told the guy to fuck off, that was my initial reaction. I don't give a crap about other people's opinion telling me that no publisher will publish it when I've had so much positive feedback, even I read out a portion of it to her (a part of the prologue and the part where Sarah throws Joanna behind bars) and she loved it.

Oh this is the final product -

 

1. Inside the Fire - Disturbed

2. Remedy - Seether

3. Duality - Slipknot

4. 10,000 Days (Wings for Marie PT 1) - Tool

5. Planet Hell - Nightwish

6. Trail of Broken Hearts - Dragonforce

7. Kenji - Fort Minor

8. Not Falling - Mudvayne

9. Coma White - Marilyn Manson

10. Take a Bow - Muse

11. Love Like Winter - AFI

12. Freedom Fighter - Creed

13. Hit the Floor - Linkin Park

14. Have You Ever Felt - Ill Nino

15. B.Y.O.B - System of A Down

16. Spring - Rammstein

17. Dead Set - Sevendust

18. Tomorrow - Silverchair

19. A Rose for the Dead - Theatre of Tragedy

20. Conquest - The White Stripes

 

And I wrote out this quiz for the group of people that support the publication of Tourniquet, Josh was the first person who attempted it, and mainly he replied "No fuckin idea" and he only got 3 outta 10 right cos they were true or false questions. I should post it on here and see how well you go with it.

[Ravynlee]

Go nuts, I'll prolly fail too right about now - but I'm willing to try almost anything once

[woodyloveslinkin]

1. What is the name of the global corporation in this story?

2. Who fought in the Third World War?

3. Who was the first ruler of the New World?

4. How many sisters does Ravyn have?

5. Name the two classes of guards.

6. What is the chinese resturant called which is mentioned?

7. Name the two cats in this story.

8. Who killed Felicity?

9. True or False, Bluetooth no longer exists in this story?

10. What was the painting that Draven didn't like called? And who painted it?

11. True or False, Mel lives to the end.

12. Who was Jonathon's original heir before his daughter was born?

13. Name the two horses that are named.

14. What major historic event did Sarah attempt to recreate?

15. What is Project Tourniquet?

16. Give a word that Fox at the start learns to read.

17. Why is medicine banned?

18. What is an Umina?

19. True or False, Ravyn was an experiment.

20. Name an experimental project led by the global corporation.

[Ravynlee]

Alright, off the top of my head (and they're probably all wrong)...

 

1. What is the name of the global corporation in this story? - Spyral

2. Who fought in the Third World War? - No idea - I'll say US and Japan or sth...

3. Who was the first ruler of the New World? - Jonathan (Sarah's dad)

4. How many sisters does Ravyn have? - One (Joanna)

5. Name the two classes of guards. - No idea. One's like a robot/ android thing, I thought the other was human, but dunno names...

6. What is the chinese resturant called which is mentioned? - *shrugs* I dunno, Kenji's? *lmao*

7. Name the two cats in this story. - Isn't one called Blaze?

8. Who killed Felicity? - Ravyn (Rachel)

9. True or False, Bluetooth no longer exists in this story? - False. I think. They had Spyro the supercomputer - But they used USBs (Chas had the virus a USB stick)

10. What was the painting that Draven didn't like called? And who painted it? - Mona Lisa? OMG I don't remember! I so badly wanna Google... damnit I'll say Leonardo Davinci

11. True or False, Mel lives to the end. - False

12. Who was Jonathon's original heir before his daughter was born? - Draven

13. Name the two horses that are named. - Maybe the cat's name now, I think I'm confused...

14. What major historic event did Sarah attempt to recreate? - I'm tempted to say The Holcaust but I could be wrong (thinking of those 'camps' at the end here)

15. What is Project Tourniquet? - Isn't that getting rid of all Old Worlders?

16. Give a word that Fox at the start learns to read. - Tourniquet

17. Why is medicine banned? - Dunno.

18. What is an Umina? - As in Umina lot of trouble, get me the hell out of here (seriously, no idea)

19. True or False, Ravyn was an experiment. - No, what happened to her was. She was an Old Worlder.

20. Name an experimental project led by the global corporation. - The Narcissisi Project (or however it's spelt) like reprogramming or some such...

 

So um... how'd I do?:o

[woodyloveslinkin]

1. What is the name of the global corporation in this story? - Spyral 1

2. Who fought in the Third World War? - No idea - I'll say US and Japan or sth... Viking

3. Who was the first ruler of the New World? - Jonathan (Sarah's dad) 1

4. How many sisters does Ravyn have? - One (Joanna) 1

5. Name the two classes of guards. - No idea. One's like a robot/ android thing, I thought the other was human, but dunno names... STFU and WTF *lol*

6. What is the chinese resturant called which is mentioned? - *shrugs* I dunno, Kenji's? *lmao* Jeezy's Chinese Palace (to be technical)

7. Name the two cats in this story. - Isn't one called Blaze? *Rofl* No it's Romeo and Orestes

8. Who killed Felicity? - Ravyn (Rachel) 1

9. True or False, Bluetooth no longer exists in this story? - False. I think. They had Spyro the supercomputer - But they used USBs (Chas had the virus a USB stick) 1

10. What was the painting that Draven didn't like called? And who painted it? - Mona Lisa? OMG I don't remember! I so badly wanna Google... damnit I'll say Leonardo Davinci 1

11. True or False, Mel lives to the end. - False 1

12. Who was Jonathon's original heir before his daughter was born? - Draven 1

13. Name the two horses that are named. - Maybe the cat's name now, I think I'm confused... Blade and Matador

14. What major historic event did Sarah attempt to recreate? - I'm tempted to say The Holcaust but I could be wrong (thinking of those 'camps' at the end here) 1

15. What is Project Tourniquet? - Isn't that getting rid of all Old Worlders? No! It's getting rid of Spyral!

16. Give a word that Fox at the start learns to read. - Tourniquet 1

17. Why is medicine banned? - Dunno. Requires knowledge and knowledge leads to social instability

18. What is an Umina? - As in Umina lot of trouble, get me the hell out of here (seriously, no idea) Name of the class of pendant that has a hologram inside of it, worn by experiments.

19. True or False, Ravyn was an experiment. - No, what happened to her was. She was an Old Worlder. I think you misunderstood the question, YES she was an experiment to see what would happen to her if they did certain things to her

20. Name an experimental project led by the global corporation. - The Narcissisi Project (or however it's spelt) like reprogramming or some such... 1

 

 

11/20

[Pass]

[Ravynlee]

Fair nuf, I'll cop that, but for the record, question #19 should have been phrased better

A pass is a pass - yay!

[woodyloveslinkin]

You're a goose, Blaze is my real cat in real life. I'll make a better quiz next time.

[Ravynlee]

All good, it was amusing to test my Tourniquet IQ out-of-the-blue like that!

(And yes I knew your cat was in there in a fashion somewhere, at least I thought he might be, it was possible in my skewed logic XD)

[woodyloveslinkin]

well I've had an awesome response to my Tourniquet facebook group, and I'm even being promoted on two blogs of Jeezy's. Yay. 28 Members in two days.

And the links?

http://lupefiasco-lupend.blogspot.com/2008/12/tourniquet.html

http://amajanese.blogspot.com/2008/12/futuristic-novel-tourniquet.html