Finally You

[littleblackstone]

so... i guess the time of posting some of my stuff has finally come!

I know it's crap, but still, I need to post this one...

 

 

Finally you have come

Into my world to save me

From this loneliness and sorrow

Life always gave me

 

Now those days are gone

With you by my side

We can fly to anywhere

We don’t need to hide

 

The higher you pull me

The more I think I’m dreaming

Nothing will break this enchantment

We two are living

 

With you I feel free

Like I’m floating between

Your sweet sparkling rain

And your pure love spring

 

In this gloomy night

Finally you have come

Into my world to join me

And together we’ve become one

 

 

(Just to let u know: this poem doesn't describe the reality I am living.. I wish it was true!

[MrsBennington-Delson]

Its not crap at all!! I really like it its so nice <3

[DarknessLover]

Hey, not bad, rhymes themselves need some work, but it's pretty good, nice and dark, love it

[allieking]

that is the most beautiful poem i have ever read. i write poetry myself and i can tell you that it isn't crap!!!

[littleblackstone]

wow... thank you guys!!!

u see, writting is not my thing, but sometimes I hear the calling lol and I come with this

 

Hey, not bad, rhymes themselves need some work, but it's pretty good, nice and dark, love it

 

that's the hardest part for me.. rhymes!!! lolol

[untitled]

i really liked it, the rhymes need a little bit work but overall its very good:)

[littleblackstone]

thank u dear! i know i've gotta work it out a bit, i'll try..

[LPShinodaFM]

OMFG my love finally came around to post her writing works!!! :D:D:D It's just beautiful. :] I mean if that's crap then you've got some pretty amazing crap going on there. Can normal crap make you feel the vibe that this poem does? NO! And can normal crap be produced with passion? NO!!! (:lol:)

 

If writing's not your thing, and then suddenly you get the inspiration for writing, then what you will produce will be amazing, because if a writer is forcing his stuff, obviously it can't be too good... But your's is :] So keep it up

[littleblackstone]

OMFG my love finally came around to post her writing works!!! :D:D:D It's just beautiful. :] I mean if that's crap then you've got some pretty amazing crap going on there. Can normal crap make you feel the vibe that this poem does? NO! And can normal crap be produced with passion? NO!!! (:lol:)

 

If writing's not your thing, and then suddenly you get the inspiration for writing, then what you will produce will be amazing, because if a writer is forcing his stuff, obviously it can't be too good... But your's is :] So keep it up

 

omg i'm so angry i can't rep you!!!

 

thank you my love!!! good to know u like it... i'll think about post some more stuff, but idk... maybe!