littleblackstone Posted October 2, 2007 Posted October 2, 2007 In this warm night I'm laying on my bed Time is passing, and I can't get you out os my head I wanna touch you I need it! I wanna feel you I desire it! You're my man! If I won't have you I won't have no one else Even if I can. For you my heart explodes For you my blood runs For you my hands shake Fot you I won't wake Come with me And join me in my dream... I need you so much And I can't wait To feel your touch! I can imagine that... I can hardly breathe I look into your eyes, And you give me what I need You take me high I scream your name, I feel this fire Of our love flame I hold your hand... I'm feeling you! You hold me tight And show me the light! At the end, I feel so strong I realize you are the man Who I belong! But I've been on my bed All this time totally alone... In this warm night That you warm up even more, I'm thinking of you And no one else... No one... Quote
LPShinodaFM Posted October 3, 2007 Posted October 3, 2007 Awesome job :thumbsup: You illustrated it nicely, the last bit was amazing ^^ I could feel that FIRE burning in there :] Quote
littleblackstone Posted October 4, 2007 Author Posted October 4, 2007 Awesome job :thumbsup: You illustrated it nicely, the last bit was amazing ^^ I could feel that FIRE burning in there :] oohh thankzz sweet!! good to know u felt it!! lol Quote
MrsBennington-Delson Posted October 4, 2007 Posted October 4, 2007 awesome one! :thumbsup: you said you had problems with rhyming? don't you ever say that again! lol =P Quote http://www.sucksbbs.net/data/MetaMirrorCache/f03af096463589b6a2bebdd0c1455573.jpg
littleblackstone Posted October 4, 2007 Author Posted October 4, 2007 awesome one! :thumbsup: you said you had problems with rhyming? don't you ever say that again! lol =P oohh thanx dear!! yeah i tried to work hard on that one, i think is the best one of all i wrote! Quote
littleblackstone Posted October 11, 2007 Author Posted October 11, 2007 any comments, anyone? i really liked it, the rhymes need a little bit work but overall its very good:) what about this one? Quote
untitled Posted October 11, 2007 Posted October 11, 2007 any comments, anyone? what about this one? i absolutely love this one like i told you on msn, i think this is your best one, it's beautiful Quote my lp item's PICS of COLLECTION my lp audio-video collection
littleblackstone Posted October 12, 2007 Author Posted October 12, 2007 i absolutely love this one like i told you on msn, i think this is your best one, it's beautiful i know u love it!! thanx sweetie... (this one is for you... sshhhhhh) Quote
untitled Posted October 12, 2007 Posted October 12, 2007 i know u love it!! thanx sweetie... (this one is for you... sshhhhhh) i feel honored..thanks, that cheers me up a bit:) Quote my lp item's PICS of COLLECTION my lp audio-video collection
littleblackstone Posted October 12, 2007 Author Posted October 12, 2007 my mission is cheering u up!! Quote
untitled Posted October 12, 2007 Posted October 12, 2007 my mission is cheering u up!! mission accomplished:) Quote my lp item's PICS of COLLECTION my lp audio-video collection
littleblackstone Posted October 12, 2007 Author Posted October 12, 2007 good to know that!! i'm happy for you! Quote
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