DarknessLover Posted October 6, 2007 Posted October 6, 2007 WARNING: Explicit Language, Major Violence, Explicit Actions (hint hint nudge nudge) ************************************************************** Chapter 1 - "Friday!" I hear a knocking at my dorm door. I yell at the door, "Dude, wait one moment, the class doesn't start for another 10 minutes!" He knocks again, he is extremely ignorant, and such a pain in the ass. I grab my backpack and yawn. At least it is Friday. I look around my dorm, such a mess. I need to clean it before they all come over tonight. The TV still on about a cannibalism case, I grab my remote and shut it off, when there is a knock at the door. "Hector! Chill the fuck out! I will be right there!" I walk over to the door, and open the knob slowly...just to piss him off. "OPEN IT UP DUMBASS!" he yelled. Damn, I open it up. He looks at me. "Let's fucking go." He was getting edgy for some reason, more likely some stupid ass reason like 'I did my homework for once!' or something completely irrelevant to having to be early. We walk down the halls silent, not really sure why, but we just are. I yawn again, I didn't sleep well thanks to Larry next door playing with his band until 4:00am. The radio is playing loud a story about the cannibalism. What's the big deal? Really, what is? So a bunch of fucking psychos are going around biting people, big deal. We get to science where he is of course reading about the cannibalism...I walk up to him and sit down at the chair on the other side of his desk. "What's the big deal with this cannibalism thing?" I ask He looks at me quiet and replies, "It's just sick, why would anyone just randomly bite someone? Especially family and friends?" I look at the paper. "It's probably just a bunch of druggies no?" "Absolutely not!" He chuckles and goes back to his paper when the students start to pile into the room. I go and sit at my desk next to Hector. "I can't find my homework." whispered Hector. Great, what an idiot, rushing me, and forgot his homework! What an idiot...the teacher starts talking at first about the cannibalism. I zone out and fall asleep. I wake up to Hector saying "You're going to die, you're going to die." I look at him with blurry eyes. Why did he have to fucking wake me up, and I look at my watch, three more minutes until the period is over...I pay attention for the last minute, and the teacher saying "I expect full reports next monday." Shit! A report? Great, just what I needed...I stood up and walked out with Hector Quote The Park is Back? No way!
woodyloveslinkin Posted October 8, 2007 Posted October 8, 2007 I'm going to read this while i 'study'.....I promise I'm gonna get back to you, cos it seems interesting. Quote Mia Elizabeth 18/2/10 Kate Helena 8/7/11 My baby girls <3
DarknessLover Posted October 10, 2007 Author Posted October 10, 2007 Chapter 2 - Finishing The Day We walk along the hallway, and enter english. Write a paragraph on what you think of the cannibalism reports. Just a paragraph? Not bad, easy enough. Cannibalism, a sick and disgusting way of life. To go through ones day and eating flesh of your species is a putrid and exiled way of life, may be deemed barbaric. The thought is just chilling and sickens anyone who truly understands it's meanings. Recently, a group of cannibalisms have appeared on the news, striking the hearts of anyone that watches. These people living a life, yet still not truly understanding what they are doing. Is it for a god? Is it for an ex girlfriend? What could it possibly be that is justifying these attacks? I put my pen down, that sounds good enough. We sit through the rest of class, talking about Shakespeare's "Midsummer Night's Dream" not the most interesting, so I decide to send a few text messages to Arianna, back and forth, god I love just talking to her. DING DING! The period ends. I close up my notes that I didn't really take, and stand up and stretch. Another boring Friday. The rest of the day fails to keep any of my interest. Just the teachers asking this and that about the cannibalisms...why is it such a big deal? It's starting to seriously get on my nerves! I sigh time for work! *Hour later in Dorm* I yawn staring at my mirror. My looks...nothing to really defy anything, at all. My average height around 6 feet or so. My straight black hair, down past my chin a bit. My basic, not fat, not skinny stature. I am never truly impressed by my looks, never. I sigh and grab my things, time to get to work, thank god it is payday. I sit in my car, listening to my MP3 player through the stereo. Dethklok "Murdertrain A Comin" turns on and I get the major urge to go 100mph...got to love the power of metal. I continue driving and pull up into Wendy's I can see all the customers and my boss giving me a dirty look. I look a bit harder and I can see Arianna looking over laughing, wow she came early today. I park the car and lock up and go in. My boss yelling at me about the metal playing, I just smile and tell him "Hey, would you rather I came in here with my stereo and started blaring in here?" He gets pissed off and walks away, since no matter how he answered, I would bring it and do it. He doesn't have the balls to fire me anyway. I walk up to the cash register "May I take your order ma'am?" and start the basic routine. The day was rather slow spent smiling over at Arianna who was working on her homework, such a good student, I smile and ask again "May I take your order sir?" and continue with my basic routine. The routine slowly blends into my thinking of how me and Arianna came to be. It was the first day of school, I was new. I didn't really talk much until this smiling girl, blonde, with headphones on her ears walked up to me and asked "Hey, why are you alone?" and sat down. We talked, joked, it was the best 30 minutes of my life. We clicked so many different ways, music, lifestyles, classes, everything, and things lead to another where we are now dating. It was the end of my shift and I knew that Arianna had known since she walked over to the counter. Her perfect body, long bleached blonde hair, just the way she walks can make your pants stretch, and she was mine... I smile "What will you take little girl?" She gives me that false angry face "One pain in the ass of a boyfriend please!" I chuckle "Coming right up" I jump over the counter and look back to boss who was starting to jet over, Arianna and I got the hell out of there. I slapped my pockets to check if my paycheck was there...yeah it was, good. Me and Arianna got in the car, and drove back to my dorm. Quote The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted October 13, 2007 Author Posted October 13, 2007 Chapter 3 - Time to Relax? I locked up my car and smiled over to Arianna. She came up to me and gave me this out of no where hug. I blushed and hugged back. "Why the sudden love?" I chuckled. She looked up to me "I don't know, these cannibalism events are starting to scare me, and it's just nice to have someone around." Again with the cannibalism? I am really sick of hearing about this crap, I really don't give a shit! I look at my dorm and we both walk to the door hand in hand. I look to the right and see some guy standing head drooping, someone got mad drunk last night. I grin at the thought, wait...how did anyone get drunk last night and me not know? We reached the door and walked into the building, working our way up the steps to my room. We stopped at the door and I heard Hector already inside my room, I put my arm around Arianna, and she leaned in. We kissed momentarily before going into my room. "Hey you motherfuckers! I was waiting forever for you people! Where were you guys?" God, Hector loves to fucking yell...Arianna and I sat down at the couch across from Hector. I looked around my dorm, the couch across mine, the crappy little television I had. My stereo, on the desk next to my computer. The room wasn't that bad, enough to get by in that is. "Let's watch some tv eh?" asked Hector, I nodded and he grabbed the remote and turned on the news. "More disturbing reports of the cannibalism have aroused. The number of victims are reaching now to numbers as high as 1,000 people now. Making this the most disturbing case in history. What seems to be riots have started, buildings on fire, crashed trucks..." A little video clip appears in the corner. It appears to be an exploded truck, with these men walking...limply from it. "...more and more problems have been aroused..." I changed the channel. I look to the group whom are staring at the television. I decide to blurt out, "Hey guys, let's not ruin the night!" Hector looks to me, almost horrified. He looks highly pale, and I look down to Arianna who smothered herself into my shirt almost crying. What's the big fucking deal? I sigh, and look back to Hector who is now glaring at the television again. I take the remote and turn on Adult Swim, and Family Guy turns on, I see Hector come back from that dead state and watch the show. Sadly, it was a horror episode. Hector looks over to me..."What are those cannibalisms? Why would they do such things?" Why is Hector even worrying? He never cares. "Maybe they are 'zombies'! Oooohh" I laugh and look to Arianna who is shaking badly. "You okay babe?" She looks up to me teary eyed. "What's wrong" "What if it is zombies? What if it is like all those movies or games?" She is seriously freaking out now. I sigh. "Those are just games though! It can't really happen..." I think to myself...can it? It is...possible I guess...I mean it's not really impossible...is it? Shit now I am starting to think twice on the whole situation...Shit shit shit...forget it. "Guys really, it's fucking friday, can we just relax on this shit? I will go get us some beer eh?" I see Hector's eyes light up, I can tell he has been drained of careing and Arianna is still shaking. I stand up and walk over to the refrigerator and look out the window to see someone running down the sidewalk, a man, walking with his arms out in front of him, almost waddling down the street following her...how weird. There really must have been a fucking party recently, son of a bitch! I really need to start talking to more people again! I walked out with two beers and a wine cooler, I threw one beer to Hector, and gave the wine cooler to Arianna. She really isn't much of a drinker. I looked over to Hector...He is such an odd guy. He seems to be someone that should have a girlfriend, yet he doesn't. He has this short brown hair, and this generic build. He is rather handsome, yet he doesn't have a girlfriend. He is weird I guess, I mean that might be a put off to girls. I look back to Arianna, just turning to her gave me that relaxing smell of woman. She smells so clean and fresh. Her dyed blonde hair perfectly straight, her nice sized breasts, and perfect legs. I am amazed I don't see many other guys staring at her. She is such a great girl too, pleasant to be around, not pushy, not anything horrid. She's mine...it's such a great thought. A few hours pass, a case of beer finished, my wine coolers done. It was a typical night, we watch tv, drink, watch some tv, talk about shit, drink, joke around, drink, when Hector steps out me and Arianna kiss, drink, watch tv, drink. It's our scenario, and I am content with it all. Arianna is a bit drunk now. "Hey babe, why don't you just stay the night, I don't want you to get lost or anything." my head falls back, I am way past my limit right now. She smiles. "Okay but no going all the way!" She giggles, I didn't really intend to do anything...She jumps onto the bed and lays back. I look at her body, so delicious, I know I could do things, but I shouldn't in case she gets mad tomorrow. I lay down beside her, and stroke her as I feel her body shut down. I close my eyes and I slowly shutdown myself. Quote The Park is Back? No way!
ugur90 Posted October 15, 2007 Posted October 15, 2007 nice story man..got me hooked on..is this a true story or not is what im wondering? Quote
DarknessLover Posted October 15, 2007 Author Posted October 15, 2007 hahahahahah I think you might not like this anymore after a little bit...It's not that kind of story lol...lmfao...and no, it's not a real story. I used my personality to fuel most of my characters. Quote The Park is Back? No way!
ugur90 Posted October 15, 2007 Posted October 15, 2007 Na keep going...i like stories that kinda are based on usual life more than ones that are forced 2 be amazing works of literature actually. Quote
DarknessLover Posted October 16, 2007 Author Posted October 16, 2007 Here is an idea of the story "Maybe they are 'zombies'! Oooohh" I laugh and look to Arianna who is shaking badly. "You okay babe?" She looks up to me teary eyed. "What's wrong" examine the story, and imagine foreshadowing Quote The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted October 18, 2007 Author Posted October 18, 2007 Chapter 4 - I don't have any fucking change! I woke up in my sweat and looked around, Arianna wasn't in the bed. I turned to put my legs off the bed, and I put my face in my hands...what a killer hangover. I looked over and around...I heard something Sizzle. "Airey?" I heard metal clatter against the table...and nothing. I sat in my bed, feeling sweat start to form. "Airey?" I saw her walk to the front of the doorway, she didn't move, and she just looked at me with this blank stare. I felt the sweat drip down the side of my head. She moved for me slowly, with short steps, her eyes staring at me. She reached her arms out, so I guess she isn't feeling well, and I reached out as she fell into my arms. She moaned "brains" and a sudden rip at my neck made me scream. "WHAT THE FUCK!" I shot up, looking back to see my bed. A dream? "Babe?" I saw her walk to the doorway, smiling, with light makeup on her face. She looked really worried. "You were shaking in bed, you didn't look good, are you okay?" She looked half sad to me, I looked down and adjusted back with my legs over the edge of the bed, sweat...odd...I look back over and grin slightly. "I guess I am fine, just...didn't sleep well I guess...yeah, that's it." I looked around and heard a sizzle. She jumped and ran into the kitchen. The aroma of bacon filled my dorm, my god, I didn't know she cooked! "Smells delicious babe!" I heard her giggle in the other room. I stood up and walked into the kitchen slowly stumbling from the lack of sleep. "Yeah, some average cooking, nothing special, BLT or Bacon Egg and Cheese?" She looked over and smiled. It's so refreshing to see such a nice smile when you wake up. I smiled and my arms around her wrist. I leaned in and kissed her cheek, she turned back and pressed her lips against mine lightly, nibbling at each others lips, we both pulled away and smiled lightly. The rest of the morning was the normal. We sat and watched television, played some Halo 2 together, pretending to be mad at each other when we saw our characters health hit zero. It's always fun with her, always pleasant. Never a care in the fucking world when I think of her. The next few hours passed like a guitar solo from Linkin Park, quick and pleasant. Later, almost 4 hours later, it was getting around noon. We decided going out for lunch would be a nice thing to do, so we both got ready. I watched her change, seeing her perfect figure in it's bare form, it's just so perfectly shaped. She looked over and gave me an angry face, as I looked away and went back to my shirt, fucking buttons...button this, button that, crappiness... The car ride was normal, I played my MP3 player on random, mainly playing Linkin Park, Breaking Benjamin, White Stripes, Dethklok. Arianna just riding happily, she enjoys most of my music, minus Dethklok, yet the album is a joke so I don't mind. The street was abnormally empty for a Saturday. We got to our favorite deli. I pulled up, and both got out and walked in hand in hand. I looked around, "Arianna, there's an empty table there, you want...a...Italian combo?" She grinned and kissed my cheek giving me the affirmative, I walked up got her the Italian Combo, and I got Ham with American Cheese. I went over to sit down and saw Lenny. "Hey Dick cheese!" He announced rudely. I just simply nodded over. "Dick cheese, talk back when I say something!" He pushed against me. As dully and dryly as I could I replied. "Yeah" I looked over, He had red spiked hair, not natural red, extremely dyed red hair. He wore black baggy jeans, and a large black shirt. Everything he wore drooped on him. He was the biggest asshole on campus, even his gang didn't like him, but they appreciated him for his assholeness. "Listen dickweed..." I interupted "Shut the fuck up Lenny, or I will knock you into tomorrow, got that?" He backed away and nodded with this smirk, and stepped out pretending like he was the shit. I know this is going to cause me trouble Monday. Arianna looked over scared...we had lunch in silence, she spent the whole time trying to find the right word to say. After lunch when we threw everything away she blurted "Jack, please baby, don't cause much trouble" I just nodded and we walked out to a man reaching his arms out. He mumbled something sounded like 'change' He grabbed my shoulder tight as I pushed him off. "I have no money dude, I just spent it." I started to walk away as he grabbed my shoulder again. "I said, NO MONEY, NO" I smacked his arm off. He grabbed again, this time I was pissed, I turned around and punched him in the face. "I DON'T HAVE ANY FUCKING MONEY" He looked at me and reached for me as he lie on the ground. Arianna got in the car with me. "You're causing a bit of trouble eh?" I looked over annoyed. The car ride was totally silent, no music, no rocking out, no talking, dead silence the whole ride. And we drove up and walked to my dorm. SHe looked at me sad "sorry Jack, I just don't want to see you hurt" and she hugged me, I nodded and kissed her neck. We walked in tame and back to where we were. We sat at the couch, her in my arms, and leaning her head against me happy, we watched the news. It was a report on cannibalism, fucking shit, this time I just watched...it was just the same crap over again. I heard light breathing and noticed she fell asleep, so I carried her over to my bed again, and I lay next to her, this time putting my arm around her...nice, peaceful. No "cannibalism" no "people walking dead.." wait what? Walking dead? At that though I fell asleep. Quote The Park is Back? No way!
DarknessLover Posted October 20, 2007 Author Posted October 20, 2007 Chapter 5 - Pinch Me I felt a hand grabbing at me, shaking me vigorously. I split my eyelid open slightly to see Arianna naked. "Jack, I ran out of clothes." I sat up noticing I was in my boxers...I had pants on last night. "Did you take my jeans?" I looked around in a confusion, she giggled and nodded. She was so weird, standing completely naked, waking me up...aye, she was an odd catch. "Well let me get dressed, I will get your clothes from your room." I stood up from my bed and she went into the bed under the covers. I walked over to my dresser, and chose my favorite set of clothes. I grabbed my black t shirt and put it over my body, it was a basic shirt, nothing special to it, just I loved to wear it. I slipped on my dark jeans, matching to my figure perfect, not tight, comfortable, and a perfect fit. I stretched out and walked into the kitchen and grabbed a Full Throttle Energy Drink. Cracked it open and walked out into the hallway. I looked left and right, no one talking? I pushed my hair back and glared at my watch 11:42pm? Everyone should be up and about. Weird. I snook through the building... Left through the hallway, right down the stairs, left into the hallway, right into the other hallway, right into the courtyard, running across, I looked around and saw red smears on some windows...it's getting near halloween...I ran into Arianna's Dorm and got her some clothes I know she loved. I got her a pink t shirt that fit her figure smoothly, and got her a half sweatshirt as I called them, it's cut off at the stomach. I looked around to make sure no one was peeking in. I got her some underwear and some jeans, i know they fit her snug, it was her favorite pair. I exited the room and stared at my watch, 11:56pm and yet no one is out? I went the opposite my path, noticing more blood streaks, now feeling a bit scared. I got back to my room. "Here babe" She gave me a hug for getting the clothes, I nodded and smiled. I walked over to the television and popped it on. Another news report... "...anyone in there home is demanded to stay locked up in there home. This cannibalism situation is nothing as we suspected. It appears the victims are coming back to life. Once they bite you it seems, you change over soon after...What? Oh my god..." A large sign across the screen declaring 'Technical Difficulties' made me panic. "Oh my god, what the hell is going on?" I heard Arianna, I didn't notice she was behind me the whole time...I shrugged and the tv went out. I stood up and my eyes darting across the room...call Hector, see if he is home. I walked over to the phone and picked it up. A monotone played...the phone is dead? BANG BANG BANG! A large smashing at the door startled Arianna and I, "It's probably Hector" I re assured her. I walked over and banging at the door repeated. "I am coming, fucking wait!" I tripped on a baseball bat, that was my favorite one, the golden plating along it, made it a beauty. I stood up and the banging annoyed me. "I'm fucking coming!" I went to the knob and twisted as the door swung open at me, and pushed me to the ground. "What the hell? Mr.Clearey?" My science teacher stared at me, bleeding "Are you okay?" he Jumped on top of me trying to bite at me when fear struck my heart. His blood dripped onto me as I pushed him off of me. "Arianna, get out of here! Get to Hector's room!" Not knowing where she was, she may have already been long gone. Mr.Clearey standing back up, stared at me. A sudden CLANG made me jump, noticing Arianna had smacked him in the back of the head, and the blood came down, as he hit the ground. I stared at Arianna "What the fuck! You just killed a teacher!" "He was trying to kill you!" "Fuck! I told you run!" "I wasn't about to go out there and let you die!" "How the fuck did you know he was going to kill me!?" "I don't know! Instinct!" "Fucking shit! You just killed a teacher!" "Shut up!" I panicked and looked around my room, no one heard me. "We have to get out of here, go tell Hector, he is probably around here somewhere." I looked around noticing I was now sweating irratated me. Shit, what the fuck was that about? Why'd he try to bite me? Is it the...cannibalism? Is it...zombies? Is it really Zombies? Quote The Park is Back? No way!
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Peterdea Posted October 20, 2007 Posted October 20, 2007 well written, i enjoy your style. plus the fact its a zombie story helped me enjoy it much more. characters are good, nothing unbelievable from my point of view ( ) awesome Quote Its good to be back.
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DarknessLover Posted October 22, 2007 Author Posted October 22, 2007 Chapter 6 - Oh shit I looked around and grabbed the other baseball bat. "We need to get out of here, and now..." I looked around...the room was still, Arianna was sitting in the seat. I looked and noticed the door was wide open. I walked over and closed it quietly. I sat next to Arianna "What should we do?" She turned me to slowly, her face paler then white paper. "I don't know Jack, I don't." She turned to the teacher, bleeding on the ground. "I killed him, I am a murderer..." I looked around, technically she was...I can't tell her that. "You aren't he wasn't humane at all. He was..." I ran out of words, what the fuck was he? Jesus. "Right! I can call Hector!" I reached to my pocket and felt for my cellphone...where is it! I sat thinking for a minute...and stood up and looked on my bed, not finding it I worried...Shit! I remember, it's in the car. I walked over to the window to see these people walking around...they seem to be walking at a normal pace. They don't have any sense of direction, how odd. I looked up the street to see a man and woman running, there shirts are torn, and they appear to be bleeding. I look back to the zombies down below now moving faster then before to the man and woman. My eyes dart back to the couple, now surronded by the people...my heart begins to pound hard, what's happening? The couple petrified, stare at the people that are moving close. I see one grab the woman and bite her arm and I watch blood pour out, it seemed to just flow out, I saw her crying and trying to push it off, but another grabbed her other arm, she tried pulling away, but it pulled back, resulting in lego effect. The arm now being devoured by one of the men, and the other being eaten right off, resulted in blood covering the cement. I slowly saw the things pile onto her, when she was out of sight and the only thing noticeable was the blood slowly spreading across the floor, I looked back to the man, who was now running clear away...the things must have been too focused on the woman. I step back from the window in plain fear. What the fuck is happening? What are those things? Those aren't human! This whole thing, it's a dream, its fake, it's not real, it's not happening. Why is this happening!? Who are these people? Why are they doing that? What happened to that woman? Where is the man? Where is everyone else? Why is it so quiet? I stood up shaking. "Arianna. We need to get out of here now." I looked over to where she was to see her lying down sobbing. "Arianna?" I walked over and put my arm around her waist, and my other hand stroking her hair. "If we get out of here it will be better, I am sure Hector is alright." She sat up and hugged me, as I felt the wetness of her tears on my shoulder. We walked to the door bats in hand. I sighed and openned the door slowly as we stepped out, there was one of those things way down at the other end of the corridor, I looked the other way, and saw none. I nudged Arianna to follow me, we crept down the hallway and saw one of the doors wide open, so out of instinct we looked in to see blood splashed all over the wall. A chill crept up my spine, is Hector alive? We kept going through the hallways, but we reached a dead end, where there was a thing one way, and a window the other. I looked over to Arianna and sighed, she was whimpering. "We have to go through the window, we have no choice." I looked down the hallway and examined the thing. It seemed lost, standing completely still, blood dripping lightly from it, almost traumatized itself of what's going on, what could it possible be looking for? We went to the window, and saw none of the things "It's easy enough, let's just go" I turned to Arianna, that was a quick act of bravery from her. We stepped out the window, and saw one of the things look at us...petrified we stood still, and let out a large moan, out of fear we ran across to the other building where Hector's room was and got to the door, we looked out quickly and saw atleast 6 walking towards the door, we ran up the stairs, and saw one, I swung my bat at the thing, and I saw it hit the ground. We saw Hectors room, and heard alot of talking, we went and knocked on the door. "Hector! It's Jack and Arianna!" A sudden clatter and quick footsteps alarmed us, and Hector opened the door and pulled us in. He looked around us, and was amazed "Dude, you made it? Holy shit!" He looked around again "We need to get out of here." Quote The Park is Back? No way!
woodyloveslinkin Posted October 22, 2007 Posted October 22, 2007 omg i'm hooked jonathon!! Quote Mia Elizabeth 18/2/10 Kate Helena 8/7/11 My baby girls <3
Peterdea Posted October 22, 2007 Posted October 22, 2007 and so the apocalypse begins!!! cant wait for more bro! Quote Its good to be back.
Peterdea Posted November 11, 2007 Posted November 11, 2007 when are we gonna get more eh? Quote Its good to be back.
DarknessLover Posted November 12, 2007 Author Posted November 12, 2007 when are we gonna get more eh? Heh :o I kinda....lost all my notes and stuff on the chapters...my computer reformated itself from a virus, I am scripting out a new, more thought out line up...It's the same crap... Yeah sorry everyone!!!! :thumbsup: Quote The Park is Back? No way!
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