I love poetry!

[darkassassin__666]

Okayyy so the main reason i actually write poetry is because it helps me get ride of all the problems in my life! so basically all my life problems are in these stanzas!!!

 

Here is one of my newest and favorite works!!!

 

I don't understand what wrong I've done,

In this life from which I cannot run,

Guess it was just the way things had to go,

And I’m torn from all the secrets so,

I’m guessing that this is more than a trick,

Something so foolish that it makes me sick,

A terrible way of being mislead,

Into the hands of something that will plead till death,

Can I lie in your arms here please?

And wait till my heart starts to beat?

In my tattered song,

They are gonna listen to the wrong,

They did to me for so long,

The way i held up with the world so strong,

They're still gonna feel how it does when I'm gone,

Feel the way I handled the pain inside,

Feel the way I had to scream to fight!

So let me know,

If you can just clear,

Where were you when you said you’d be there?

And for you I’m still lying here,

Just let me make that clear my dear.

So now,

I’m pretending to be something I’m not,

Just to hide inside all the pain that I’ve got,

Unlock me from your heart so unkind,

Let me go I’m losing my mind.

My heart has stopped beating,

And now I see you leaving,

And all I’m gonna do is start grieving,

And watch as my heart starts bleeding,

I can’t believe you can be so lackadaisical,

I’m so inconsolable,

I whish I wasn’t so unbreakable,

God give me the power to let go of this pain,

And I’m losing hope….my survival will be in vain.

[LPShinodaFM]

:] hey welcome to LPF. Awesome poem, it's very nice. Intricate language.

 

Glad you find consolence (I'm pretty sure that's not a word) from writing. So yeah, nice work.

[darkassassin__666]

HAHAHA!!! lol!!

ur funny! Thank you for linking my poetry 8P LOL!!! it didn't actually take me long to write it....i was actually writting it at 4 in the morning lol. I don't know how...but i do the best peotry at either 3 in the morning or 4! lol. stupid huh?

[woodyloveslinkin]

very deep....i love it.

Nah I'm into love poetry. Love stories kinda make me sick especially if horny guys wrote it.

[darkassassin__666]

:lol:

HAHAHAHAHA!!! Um....that's kinda the reason i don't write love stories!! :rofl: