Jeezys Poetry/Freestyle

[Jeezy]

What went wrong?

 

I just thought I should start my own corner.

Some freestyle/poetry stuff

 

I'm sitting here on my bed feeling all alone.

I don't know what to do

can you tell me what went wrong?

 

I've been here 20 years

and I feel like I don't belong

 

My feelings been like that

since she left me with this song

 

She left me without a word not telling me

what went wrong.

 

She was the love of my life

maybe my feelings been too strong.

 

No one will ever know

what is right

or what is

wrong.

 

And still

I'm all alone

[MrsBennington-Delson]

oohh love it!! <3

absolutely great!

[Linkin_lp_park]

Nice writing

Is this personal stuff that you´ve been through?

[Jeezy]

Nice writing

Is this personal stuff that you´ve been through?

 

No it's not personal at all.

[Jeezy]

I am the best

 

another one

 

I am the one, the only

everyone should know me

 

I'm the king, the best

I don't care about the rest

 

I rule the west

and the east

 

I never got caught

by the police

 

I'm better than you

I'm better than he, she

bitch

it seems like you don't know about me

 

I am what I am

I do what I do

damn

 

who is you?

[Friðbjörn]

writers corner seems to be reviving, nice

[MrsBennington-Delson]

yeah Jeezy you got it goin boy lol

[Jeezy]

Life of a star

 

I should be a rapper...lol

 

 

I'm going on stage

the crowd is in rage

 

I see a girl

she has a beautiful face

 

I like the way she dances

the way she moves her waist

 

She's lost in the feelings

that she's trying to taste

 

And right now

my patience goes to waste

 

I grab the girl

and pull her on stage

 

We leave together

and start acting strange

 

It's the both of us

trying to make a change

 

Up in the hotel room

snoring some cocaine

 

Leaving the world behind us

and just feeling vain

 

 

Do you understand it?

 

Does it get to your brain?

 

No?

Ok...

 

It's just me being insane

[MrsBennington-Delson]

hahah that one's awesome!! go Jeezy!! :clap:

[Jeezy]

Life of a killer

 

Love and life?

That's not me.

 

Death and hate?

yeah that could be

 

I'm a killer

running throught the streets

 

Chasing cops and kids

on my way to eat

 

I kill for money

I know it ain't funny

But for me

that's how it's got to be

 

Your name might be

the next on my list

 

If so

say goodbye

and make your last wish

 

I'm the one wo brings

pain and death

to your family

 

I kill your

mum,

your dad,

and your auntie

 

Probably

it's even hard

for me

 

but someone got to

do that job

 

and I guess it's me

[Jeezy]

Something I wrote some time ago

 

 

Amajanese Poetry

 

You talk japanese

and you have good degrees

you make sure everyone sees

that you're amajanese.

 

Don't forget to laugh

and take your everyday bath

You know that girls like your cash

and you like to flash

 

Now go and take your stash

the plane you're on won't crash

 

On your way to Belize

make sure everyone sees

that you and your friends

are still

amajanese

 

I know I can't rhyme

but that ain't no crime

I'm just standing in line

to show everyone that I'm

still on my grind

trying to shine

and get Lupe to use that word

on a couple of lines.

 

Make it amajanese

and just imagine this

it's japanese culture with a hip hop twist.

[Jeezy]

Short but sweet

still working on it

 

 

I can't be stopped

I never been a quitter

 

I'm always on the run

Follow me on twitter

 

I know your mum

She's always been a little bitter

 

Then I gave it to her

Now her belly's getting bigger

[Jeezy]

You are really talented

 

are you serious?

 

thank you man

[littleblackstone]

Short but sweet

still working on it

 

 

I can't be stopped

I never been a quitter

 

I'm always on the run

Follow me on twitter

 

I know your mum

She's always been a little bitter

 

Then I gave it to her

Now her belly's getting bigger

 

ahah funny but awesome

[woodyloveslinkin]

You know who you're lyrics remind me of? They remind me of Placebo MTV mashed up with Busta Rhymes. You really have some good talent there and you should continue posting your work.

I really liked the first one. It was very sentimental and it made me go "awwww". Though, the "mum" one, made me laugh a lot. Reminded me of ya mama jokes I used to hear in high school.

Good work!

[FireHawk]

You are really talented

 

I Second It

[MrsBennington-Delson]

sounds cool ^^

you got that stuff goin :thumbsup:

[Jeezy]

New One

 

 

-No Name-

 

I see you in my arms

I want you by my side

The only thing I need

Is a future wife

 

I don't know how to say

what I feel for you

you are the one for me

you make my heart complete

 

Even if we fight

you are still my shining light

I can't believe when you say

that you don't want to be with me

 

Have you ever thought about what may could be?

 

[diana]

Sweet stuff you got here...

[littleblackstone]

New One

 

 

-No Name-

 

I see you in my arms

I want you by my side

The only thing I need

Is a future wife

 

I don't know how to say

what I feel for you

you are the one for me

you make my heart complete

 

Even if we fight

you are still my shining light

I can't believe when you say

that you don't want to be with me

 

Have you ever thought about what may could be?

 

 

so beautiful

 

i wish i had someone who wrote stuff like that to me...

[Jeezy]

so beautiful

 

i wish i had someone who wrote stuff like that to me...

 

actually....there is someone who wrote this for you

 

 

 

Sweet stuff you got here...

thanks

[Jeezy]

and another one

 

improvised

 

 

Feelings are hurting

Girls keep on flirting

 

Relationships breaking

please stop the murking

 

I feel confused

What if I lose?

 

Please stop the pain

Start spitting some game

 

Have you ever felt the fame?

 

Like you became the Prince...

But I'm not talking Purple Rain....

 

I talk about people that been more important

About someone that has been there beforehand

 

I talk about you

that girl with no flowers

 

Looking at me with a smile on your face

Laughin' like I'm Austin Powers

 

I wanna see you like that every day

Now I'll just go back and listen to the Song For Clay

 

[diana]

Pretty nice...improvised, yeah...

[littleblackstone]

actually....there is someone who wrote this for you

 

i already knew it *kisses ur cheek*

[Jeezy]

Pretty nice...improvised, yeah...

 

thanks

 

i already knew it *kisses ur cheek*

 

of course you did;) *kisses back*