Little Nibbles of Ideas

[L-Redshift-L]

Hi,

 

Sometimes I get random Inspirations from listening to LP songs and Make up lyrics for the song and little Poems. Here are some random Bits ive done after listening to Hybrid Theory Demo and getting a bucket load of Ideas There not long or very good, I just wanted to share them. They Probably dont even fit the song But oh well.

 

IN THE END Rap Part:

 

This time there will be no mistakes.

Breaking it down with the sound in my mind

And Still I find

No matter how hard I try Everything is never fine.

 

BY MYSELF Rap Part:

 

Dont ask me when the design in my mind

Is determinded to find

A reason to stop the pain and suffering

And yet you never bring

Comfort to me while I fight what you Left Here

Left in the pain and fear.

 

RANDOM POEM IDEAS:

 

Things I say would make you turn your back

Back to the crack

And the streets that scream out below.

Back to the darkness

Back to my home

Pretending I Will always be something you own.

 

 

Post Feedback or comments or whatever you do in this part of the forum.

 

Thanks.

[Livie122790]

Hey, that's pretty good.

[L-Redshift-L]

Thanks for the feedback

[Livie122790]

No prob, anytime!

[L-Redshift-L]

Heres some For Stick and Move:

 

You see what I have

You See what you need

You take what you want

And leave me to bleed.

 

(For those who have heard Stick and Move will see how well these fit XD)

[Livie122790]

I really like that one, it has a nice flow to it.