L-Redshift-L Posted December 13, 2007 Posted December 13, 2007 Hi, Sometimes I get random Inspirations from listening to LP songs and Make up lyrics for the song and little Poems. Here are some random Bits ive done after listening to Hybrid Theory Demo and getting a bucket load of Ideas There not long or very good, I just wanted to share them. They Probably dont even fit the song But oh well. IN THE END Rap Part: This time there will be no mistakes. Breaking it down with the sound in my mind And Still I find No matter how hard I try Everything is never fine. BY MYSELF Rap Part: Dont ask me when the design in my mind Is determinded to find A reason to stop the pain and suffering And yet you never bring Comfort to me while I fight what you Left Here Left in the pain and fear. RANDOM POEM IDEAS: Things I say would make you turn your back Back to the crack And the streets that scream out below. Back to the darkness Back to my home Pretending I Will always be something you own. Post Feedback or comments or whatever you do in this part of the forum. Thanks. Quote And I, Just wish that I didn't feel Like there was Something I missed And I, Take back all The things I said To make you Feel like that And I. Take back all the Things I said to you
Livie122790 Posted December 15, 2007 Posted December 15, 2007 Hey, that's pretty good. Quote [broken External Image]:http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m168/Livie122790/lpsig1.gif
L-Redshift-L Posted December 16, 2007 Author Posted December 16, 2007 Thanks for the feedback Quote And I, Just wish that I didn't feel Like there was Something I missed And I, Take back all The things I said To make you Feel like that And I. Take back all the Things I said to you
Livie122790 Posted December 16, 2007 Posted December 16, 2007 No prob, anytime! Quote [broken External Image]:http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m168/Livie122790/lpsig1.gif
L-Redshift-L Posted December 19, 2007 Author Posted December 19, 2007 Heres some For Stick and Move: You see what I have You See what you need You take what you want And leave me to bleed. (For those who have heard Stick and Move will see how well these fit XD) Quote And I, Just wish that I didn't feel Like there was Something I missed And I, Take back all The things I said To make you Feel like that And I. Take back all the Things I said to you
Livie122790 Posted December 23, 2007 Posted December 23, 2007 I really like that one, it has a nice flow to it. Quote [broken External Image]:http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m168/Livie122790/lpsig1.gif
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