First written work...

[Vash_the_Stampede]

The twilight never seemed so dark,

almost as though I was just thrown into a cave with no lantern.

She was my lantern...

Now it's just too dark.

no more spark,

no more light.

Can I have my light back?

My spark?

My lantern?

So dark and so cold.

Winter is so much colder without her fire.

Snow everywhere.

White, blank, cold snow.

She was the warmth to melt the snow,

to make me withstand the barren landscape.

When can I have my lantern back?

 

Well yeah... As the title said, my first written piece.

Just something to get some feelings out... -_-;

[Suicide King]

That rocks my songs man.

'tis good.

[Jeezy]

great

and I know it reflects your real feelings

 

that's strong

[MrsBennington-Delson]

I like it its not that usual rhym etc plus it shows your real feelings

great job :thumbsup: