Well...it's really not that great...
Render is a bit fucked up at the right bottom (the hand)...or at least it seems like that...and actually the whole render looks strange...to me...
The "Captain Jack Sparrow" is a bit hard to read...I like the "Victim" text, though...
Idk, I'd give it 8/10...but I certainly wouldn't vote for it at SOTW...