A Demo Song From my Band, Feedback please

[Sacrifice Within]

This is a demo song from my band, its only one minute long, and its kind of a big file size, so sorry for that, and i dont have really a good background beat, im mainly focousing on vocals. Im trying to find somone to work with to produce a beat for me, because i dont have the right software.

So can u please give me somefeed back on atleast my voice

http://rapidshare.de/files/30066996/impossible_dream_beat_and_words.wav

 

[DJ BloodFrost]

I love the music and the lyrics, man. I can try making a beat for this.

I know I didn't make this track, but I'd like to make a suggestion or two. First, check your volume levels - the background music is clipping into the red, which often results in playback distortion. Second, your vocals need to be louder, 'cause they get lost in the music sometimes.

PM me and let me know what type of beat you're looking for, and I'll see what I can do.

 

[Sacrifice Within]

Thanks for comment blood frost

 

[FTboy18]

Very good music. I like it.

 

[Jeezy]

Nice music...but yeah...the vocals get lost sometimes..

 

[Peterdea]

i would very much like to hear some more of your stuff. it is really really good.

 

[Sacrifice Within]

Anyone else? i need more feedback please

 

[Breakdown Conspiracy]

Anyone else? i need more feedback please

great song aye, i like it.
get a myspace.